Ashlok FF: Heads Over Heels Ch 24 pg 145 - Page 48

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Posted: 9 years ago
nice chpter :) : )
tommy and jerry sequence...
excepting first kiss from aastha... so funny...
i hope shlok felt some strange feeling towards aastha..
wht is mystery bw MR and MRS AG ji :)

waiting for next update :) 
love and love only :) 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Loved ashlok fight
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello jane sweetie great update as always waiting for more👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Jane..finally able to catch up with the updates. These 2 individuals (Shlok & Astha) are resisting each other with their sarcasms & sharp tongues is what I feel. Correct me if I am wrong. I understand more than having fun they are just responding to how the other is making fun of them. Please get them out of their misery 😉. In many ways ...I see Shlok is mirror image of his mother; fighting out the inner daemons with a false bravado. Want to see what back story that will be revealed for Mr & Mrs. NA.
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Posted: 9 years ago
They r sooo childlish...and so funny😆loved the update Jane😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ragapriya4331

nice chpter :) : )

tommy and jerry sequence...
excepting first kiss from aastha... so funny...
i hope shlok felt some strange feeling towards aastha..
wht is mystery bw MR and MRS AG ji :)

waiting for next update :) 
love and love only :) 


Thanks😃

He's more threatening than expecting😉😳
Yes, I believe he is fuuul of strange feeling to this girl

Thank you very much for appreciation😉
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Originally posted by: niki795

Awesome update

Loved ashlok fight
Continue soon


Thank you very much😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: charanyaaj

As u promised yesterday it was awesome 👏
i just loved astha's description about shlok's beard and also her imagination simply superb

P.S. Pls update next part soon

I'm so glad it didn't fall short of your expectations😃
If he was beardless she would find something else to stalk him with🤣
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Originally posted by: mriara13

Hello jane sweetie great update as always waiting for more👏


Thank you, Mriara, if I'm not mistaken about the name😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jia.astk

Jane..finally able to catch up with the updates. These 2 individuals (Shlok & Astha) are resisting each other with their sarcasms & sharp tongues is what I feel. Correct me if I am wrong. I understand more than having fun they are just responding to how the other is making fun of them. Please get them out of their misery 😉. In many ways ...I see Shlok is mirror image of his mother; fighting out the inner daemons with a false bravado. Want to see what back story that will be revealed for Mr & Mrs. NA.


Jia, thank you for your precious thoughts on the story.😃 It means so much to me
You are right about their resistance. As he said she should surrender but
she thinks she would better die before😆. They are oblivious to the surrounding when they see each other. No logics, no civil behaviour. More instincts and emotions. They react on the basic level and that makes both mad😡
Shlok is absolutely the mirror of his mother in many ways, firstly his temperament. The only difference between them - she's a kind of damaged, broken and he's still not...