Ashlok FF: Heads Over Heels Ch 24 pg 145 - Page 30 | Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon... Ek Baar Phir

Poornima

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Posted: 9 years ago

wow Jane...this is so nice...its interesting day by day...anjuli is not home anytime...astha becomes auntie...shlok guessed it ...hye

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Bobbie

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Posted: 9 years ago

So Aastha is going to be an aunt. Very nice update.

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Jane

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Waheedaralli
wow Jane...this is so nice...its interesting day by day...anjuli is not home anytime...astha becomes auntie...shlok guessed it ...hye

Poornima, the knot is tying, you are right😉

Life is about to change for all of them😃

Shlok was the first to guess, he's a smart boy😆

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Jane

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon
So Aastha is going to be an aunt. Very nice update.

Yeah, she will. Thank you😃

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Neelum.drashti

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice one Jane, so game rules are changing as boy wonder has found the perfect chink in opponents armour😆..I am loving it, really happy for pado and Varad.

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Deepa Vasudev

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Posted: 9 years ago

CHAPTER 11 ::

SUPERB ONE.. I LIKED HER A LOT.. CARE FREE AND NOT IN HER SENSE ..LIKE INSANE.. DANCING ON HER HAPPINESS WITHOUT KNOWING .. WHAT IS AROUND...

TOTAL LOOSE AND LEFT FREE..

BACK TO INNOCENCE .. I WOULD SAY..

HER OR MY CHILD HOOD DAYS.. NO WORRIES.. NO STRINGS ATTACHED..

ITS JUST ME.. NOTHING ELSE..

THE WHOLE WORLD WAS IN MY HAND...

THE PEOPLE WERE LIKE SMALL ANTS IN FRONT OF ME..

I WAS THE BIRD UP IN THE SKY...

JUST FLAPPING ITS WINGS AND READY TO DIVE OR FLY..

ANY GOAL, OR ANY BOUNDARY WAS NOT SET..

JUST THAT..

THE TASTE OF

FREEDOM AND TO BREATH THE ENTIRE UNIVERSE'S AIR.. OR BREEZE..

JUST WENT AROUND THE GALAXY AND CAME..

I SAW THE NINE PLANENTS.. THE ENTIRE MILKY WAY CALLED THE GALAXY ..

I DID SEE THE ASTEROIDS OR THE ARMAGEDDON DAY..

BUT WAS NOT BOTHERED..

I JUST WANTED TO FLY AND FLY AND HIGH AND HIGH

AND FEEL THE ADRENALINE ...

AND THE RUSH AND HUSH AND THE WIND GIVE A FLUSH ON MY CHEEKS

THE GUSH AND BUSH I IGNORED..

AS OF NOW

IM NOT IN THIS WORLD..

IM FREE FREE FREE..

IAM ... THE ONE IAM.. ..WHO IS ALWAYS IAM...

Edited by deepavasudev - 9 years ago

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ragapriya4331

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Posted: 9 years ago

wow wow .. amesome update😛... stunning performance by shlok as well as astha 😉😉

thank a lot to understood my feeling .. since i felt all your story are super but you are so flexible to convey aastha or shlok will have a relationship with anyone at any time,specially shlok will do all the non sense with all the girls... i felt bad.. may be i am not right.. 😕😕

i asked you the same question on your second story ,at that you reply me that sex is need like a food

actually i raised question was " how a person will have simply have sex with love " you replied tht is like essential for life .. like food ..etc etc ... nothing is deals with love and sex... 😳😳😳

so it not a jealousy... 😳.. I know your are writer you will find you own way of present story ,but it is concern from my side.. i am expecting some unique relationship between them..

I hope i am not offend you... thanks for your comments ..

The reptile had human features --- superb commedy...😆😆

love and love only :)

Edited by ragapriya4331 - 9 years ago

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swathin

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Posted: 9 years ago

Superb update
Loved paro n shloks part
It was way too sweet n.lovely

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353097

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Posted: 9 years ago

Love the update
Continue soon

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Saranya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Amazing story. Very happy for paro.
In last part why shlok is staring at her?Is something changed?

Continue soon.
Thanks for the pm.Edited by charanyaaj - 9 years ago

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