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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome superb updates
read all updates in one go
virat was so cute he really supports his mom
rd was too bad yar
hope soon he will realise his mistakes
continue asap :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: .chandu.parsh.

Hey parul

Hearty congratulations to you for the new thread

Randhir.. Lol!!! Ab pata chal jayega About sanyu's hardships...
Now the ball is in her court...
Lovely update😳
Continue soon!!!



thanks dear
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chapter 11
R: virat what happen to mumma?

V:mom is in hospital

R:acha acha don't worry .
tumko ma school chor k hospital jata hu.
OK

V: I'll not go to school
I want mumma(crying)

R: Ohk
school over hone k bad I'll take you to your mom

SOON HE DRIVE TO VIRAT SCHOOL
AND himself to hospital.
and enters Dr. isha's cabin.

R: hello doctor

I: hi rd(they both are family friends)
today you here?
phle toh kabi ni ayea.
I mean.. wo I'm sorry.

r: no don't be sorry.

I: acha leave that.
want to know about your baby's health & growth

R:yes(nervously)
hear are the reports
your baby is fine
but tc of sanyu properly

R:hmm
where is she?

I: she Is changing her hospital dress
(sanyu enters & was shocked to c him)

R: we'll take your leave (& held sanyu from her waist lovingly which shocked sanyu but she remains quite)

outside hospital.
R: tum ruko ma car lata hu

S:kyu?
shayad u are forgetting I'm living with my parents...

R:I know that.
Mr aggrawal k ghar hi choru ga tumhe.
know wait here.

vids: hello sanyu (fakes a smile... yes you heard me right .once a best friends turns into a enemy the reason is ...)


s: hi, how's you ?
and parth?
(yes she is married to parth.
like everybody she also didnt believed her and as far as parth is concern she has also loved parth & always unliked sanyu-parth relation)

v: parth told me that he met you in school
well itz OK.
ab humare bache sath ek school ma pdage toh milna toh yoga hi

P: vidushi(screamed , actually he didn't like the way she behaved with sanyu... phela pyaar itni asani se ni Marta)

S: its OK
she was just asking about my well being.
hana vids

v:yeah right
vesa what are you doing here in front of hospital.
khi randhir ne tum he...I mean domestic violence types

(unknown to them one person was listening to their conversation & was not liking the fact that someone else is hurting her & he was about to hit her face but)

S: don't you dare cross your limits
while speaking abt my husband
and for your knowledge let me tell you waise toh hmare yha btate ni ha for 3 months but its OK.
don't you congratulate me as I'm expecting my second baby.
(parth shocked and his wife too)
and he really tc of me like a princess
He has everything in life unlike your husband
RD loves his wife genuinely not like him(parth) Jo khne ko toh tumhra hubby ha but ...I hope you get my point

V: let's go baby
P: yeah right, bhalie ka toh zmana hi ni ha

S:(sees rd blood red eyes& to sooth him she just hug him tightly shock for the other couple & RSS too) let's go from here

Yeah was the all that he could say after settling sanyu in car & went near them

R: stay away from us

P: I'm not interfering in your matters

R: interfering in her life directly interfere me.

doctor has advise a stress free environment for her so stay(angrily) away


both the cars left unknown to the fact that they are heading towards same destination


A/n
no pm guys but I'll regularly update the title whenever I update for your convenience

thanksEdited by coolishparul - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
heyyy
congo for new thread...
lovely update😊...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Please please send me pm
I am in love with this ff😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome story, ur doin a great job 
Love how u portray the characters
Plz could u pm me wn u update
Thnku
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Posted: 9 years ago
chapter 12a

To cheer up his mood sanyu was trying umpteenth types of methods but all in vain.

S: rd ...
r: hmmm
s: rd...
r: kya ha bacche ki trha kyu chilla ri ho?
you know tumhara beta bilkul tum pe gya ha,
agar usko na suno toh wo bi bilkul tumhare tarha sing karta ha

s: like mom like son

rd: whatever...
bolo kya ha

s: mujhe na bhuk lagi ha

R: kyu tumhara baap(dad) tumhe khana ni deta?moking)

s: behave your self..
stop the car
ma khud chali jaogii( struggling with the door)

r: stop it OK...
look m sorry... OK
mujhe tumhra dad k lye ase ni bokna chayea tha

s: OK (pout)

r: kya chayea?

s: golgappe...

r: no roadside pe

s: hmmm

r: here is unhygienic can't you see

s: no

r: OK OK meri ma chalo

s: I'm not your ma

r: OK
mera bachoo ki ma.
know its ok

s(smiles): OK dear hubby

which surprises him
r: RU OK

s: ha kyu..
r: kuchni
tum chalo ma car park karke ata ha

( she was unable to cross the road due to fear & moreover she is not used to this)
s: omg sanyu
tujhe toh road cross karni ni ate
(soon a hand rap around her bare waist ( saree lol)

r: chalo
(there was rd holding her protectively and she was staring him like fools as he was looking damn handsome in his glares & no taunt from his side like I used to be in past)

s: 2 plates golgappe

r: why 2 ?
im not eating this unhygienic food
(sanyu angry look)
s: whatever (soon started eating like manic )

r : know stop OK
you already had 4plates
ab bus

s: are ek rh gya ruko(was about to eat but he put that last golgappe in his mouth)
WTH!
ek toh mera golgappe ko unhygienic bolte ho & khud khate bi ho

r: (to shopkeeper he paid the bill ask her to follow him)Edited by coolishparul - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Its getting interesting day by day...
Just lovin it...

Glad to see sandhir togthr...
Conti soon...

Love
Harshita
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ab ye kya hai yaar mystry seems interesting
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks everyone for liking this chapter
despite of no PMS...