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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Entry # 1 : Incomplete without you

The soft brezze flowing and complementing the atmosphere of St Vistas School Summer camp.
Its not only summer camp for students infact its an event where all ex students and current students gather to live some memorable moments.
There stood a beautiful girl in white outfit who was smiling and admiring atmosphere.
Avni's POV:
I can see nothing has changed.. Its still the same. Its been three long years damnit! But still its same..
Voi hulchul voi khamoshiyaa..nothing has changed..
Sigh Will he too come here?
No he can't..
Still my eyes are searching his alluring brown eyes..
Still my heart yearns to feel his presence..
I know I don't have guts to face him..Then why my heart is yearning for him? I really don't have any answers to my own questions..
I m responsible for my lonliness..
Its the same damn place , same damn event where I...

Flashback 3 years ago...
Avni: What love damnit?
Mujhe kuch nai chahiye not even You..
You and me just not possible not even in my horror dreams..
End of Flashback

Tears fell from Avni's eyes when the memory of her and Raj breakup haunted her.

Raj's Pov:
I saw her.. She is still the same old Avni.. My Avni.. Nothing has changed about her.. Same curly brown hairs, her enchanting eyes which speaks alot, Her simple magical smile complementing her beauty..
Its been ages I saw her..
My heart yearns for her touch.. but I know where I stand.. She is too perfect to be with me..
I don't deserve her.
I don't want to bother her from my presence..

Avni's POV:
I always underestimated him.
And he always complemented me by saying I define perfection. But the fact is he is beyond perfection.

Two students were fighting..
AvRaj went same direction to solve their dispute..

Oh stop stop students why you both are fighting? Whispered Raj
Boy: She pushed me and sat on my place.
Girl: He is lying its not his place. Its my place as I first saw it.
Raj: Arey so what if you saw the place first.. cmon say sorry to him.
Oh hello why she ll say sorry to him whispered Avni who came there to solve dispute
Raj: Because its...
Silence prevailed in atmosphere as both Raj and Avni came face to face after three years..
Their eyes met..
It reminded them of their first meet.
Its the same summer camp where they first met 10 years back..

Flashback 10 years ago.

"Oye tum yahaan kyun baithe ho ye meri fix place hai " said Avni
Raj: Yahaan tumhara name likha hai kya?
Avni: Tumhe pata nai Avni kisi k sath apni place share nai karti?
Raj: kon Avni?
Avni: main Avni aur kon?
Raj: Accha toh tumhe pata nai Raj bhi apni chocolate cream kabhi kisi k sath share nai krta..
Avni: Lagta hai tum new student ho
Raj: nai main toh nursery se student hoon.
Avni: offo buddhu mera matlab hai tum St Vistas mein new ho. Konse standard mein padhte ho?
Raj: 5th C
Avni: oh tabhi tum Avni ko nai jaante
Raj was busy licking chocolate cream from biscuits.. Avni was looking at him.. her tongue was savoring for that chocolate cream.
Raj saw her & shared with her.
-Flashback ends-

That was the beginning of their friendship.
Raj never shared his chocolate cream with anyone except Avni.
Raj himself was unaware of the fact why he shared it only with arrogant Avni.
They gained senses and some how managed to solve their fight.
Before Raj could speak to her.. Avni ran away from there..

2 hours later..
My dear students...
St Vistas welcome you all..
So its time to live & relive some memorable moments together.
Here we announce Activities open said Madam Malika.
Students cheered.. claps echoed making place cheerful and joyful..

DJ announced couple dance competition..
Couples will be decided on basis of name chits.
One bowl contains boys name list and another contains girls name list.

AvRaj were running from eachother but they were destined to be together.
Fortunately or unfortunately DJ took out AvRaj's name chits together.

Avni was in no mood to dance with him.
Raj too not wanted to bother her much but for the sake of camp's peacefulness.
They came forward to dance.
DJ: Great round of applause students as here we have professional dancers on our dance floor..
DJ played the music which perfectly describes their current state of mind and heart.

Jab jab tere paas main aaya, Ik sukoon mila
Jise main tha bhoolta aaya, Wo wajood mila
He held out his left hand on which she placed her right and slid right around her waist while she placed her left on his shoulder..
Jab aaye mausam gham ke, Tujhe yaad kiya
Ho...
He pulled her tightly closed to him unknowingly making her lost in past again.

Jab sehme tanhapan se, Tujhe yaad kiya
Hmm..dil... Sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
He lifted her and then bought her down only to feel her fast heart beats

Dil yahin ruk jaa zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Aisa kyun kar hua janu naa
Main janu naa o..o..
He brushed his face on her neck.
His touch unknowingly made her more uncomfortable as the dreadful past memories of her rejection haunted her

Dil sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
He turned her around again and got into the ballroom position

Jis raah pe, hai ghar tera
Aksar wahan se, haan main hoon guzra
Shayad yahin dil mein raha
Tu mujh ko mil jaye, Kya pata...
Kya hai yeh silsala
Janu naa, Main janu naa
Dil sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
They came too close to eachother.
His breath fanning her forehead and hers making his neck feel warm..

Kuch bhi nahi Jab darmayaan
Phir kyun hai dil, tere hi khwaab bunta
He turned her around making her back face him and expose her face to the wind.
Sweet childhood chocolate cream flashback and Avni's rejection to their love yet again made there way

Chaha ki de, tujhko bhula
Par yeh bhi mumkin ho na sakaa...
Kya hai yeh maamla, Janu naa
Main janu naa
Dil sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
While dancing they again came too close.. Their lips was about to meet.
But Avni gained senses and ran away from there.
Raj noticed her teary eyes.
No steping out.. Raj whispered..
He followed her..
Avni was outside crying...
She tried hard to control her tears but it eventually flowed from her eyes.
She remembered the day which changed her life completely.
And today she was standing on the same place.

Flashback 3 years ago
Avni tum yahi wait karo I ll be back in 5mins.
Avni actually needed this time.
She was nervous as today is special day for her. She had made up her mind to confess her love to Raj.
Last year it was Raj who confessed his love to her by knealing down on his knees. But that time she told him 'I Love You Raj but I m not in love with you: She loved him only as a friend.
But now its been one year and she realised her true feelings for him.
While waiting she decided to check her mails. But unfortunately her cell was off due to zero battery. Raj while going handed his cell phone to her.
She opened Raj mail box to log off.
But her eyes caught sight of one mail.. which changed everything.
It was mail from London Dance Accademy according to which Raj got selected.

Here I come whispered Raj.
Avni handed his cell phone to him.
Raj gave her cold coffee.
Raj: Avni its been one year and I knew you too love me now not as a friend but as... hmm look I m sorry.. my intention is not to force you to confess.. you can take your time.. love is something which gives you power to wait..
Every person needs someone special..

What Love damnit?
Mujhe kuch nai chahiye not even you..
You and me just not possible not even in my horror dreams Avni bursted out..
She whispered painful words to him and even broke off their friendship.
Raj was clueless he stood still with teary eyes.

End of Flashback.

Avni's POV:
Three years back what I did was correct.
I don't deseeve him.
If I would have confessed my feelings to him he would have dropped his idea of going London.
He would have sacrificed his dreams over my love.
Love is all about being selfless not about being selfish. Thats what I have learnt from him.
Why destiny bought us together here again. I sighed! I m clueless but I just wish to be with him. 

Raj's POV:
I know her better thn her.
She did not wanted me to sacrifice my dreams.
But the fact is my dreams become her dreams.
She wanted me to live our dream.
She is my strength which motivated me in London when I was alone.
Whatever rewards I have acheived is because of our love.
Raj and Avni complete eachother.
Though She was not with me.
But her love was with me.

End of POVs


Avni was still in tears..
Raj came towards her and offered her cold coffee..
Avni was amazed by this gesture of him.
She refused
Kab tak refuse karti rahogi whisperd Raj.
Bas Avni bahut hua..
Kab tak mujhse bhaagti rahogi..
Just say it..
Kyun abhi dance krte waqt tumhari dil k dhadakne tez hui?
Why my touch effects you?
Why Why Why just say it..He pulled her towards him tightly.
Raj plz leave me you are hurting me.. said Avni.
Raj kept asking her same questions she finally vented out..
Raj: bolo Avni bolo why I effect you?
Avni: Because I Love you damnit.. I love you.. I love you.. tears rolled down from her eyes.
She tightly hugged Raj.
Raj froze, completely astounded.
He couldn't beleive his ears Avni finally confesssd him.
Happiness surged through him giving him warm and fuzzy feeling.
They look deeply into eachother's eyes and saw endless love and happiness underneath the shock in them...Aur Pyaar Hogya..
Both whispered ecstatically "I love you Avni.. I love you so much..
I love you too Raj more than anything."
The next second Avni again surprised Raj.
"Will you share your chocolate cream with me forever? Whispered Avni..
Raj nodded and smiled and took out his chocolate cream biscuits from his bag.
Both feed eachother chocolate cream and coffee making it The Perfect Summer Love'
Summer separated them and now summer reunited them. 


Entry # 2 : Ye Ishq Hai

Avni was lost in the sweet dreams of his Prince Charming , whose face appeared blured in her dreams.
A blured face gentleman kneeling down on her knees and giving her boquet of purple roses.
When suddenly her phone rang jolting her awake and out from her heavnly dreamworld.
Still sleepy Avni grapped her phone to pick up the call.
"Heeelllo" whispered Avni
"Oye Avni tu jaldi se ready ho ja otherwise we will get late" mumbled Devika
"Kya yaar Devika humari summer vacations hai aaj se college nai " said Avni in anger
'Tu phir bhul gyi aaj hum campaign k liye ja rahe hai' said Devika
'OH no how could I forget this? Tu 20 mins ruk main half an hour mein milti hoon' said Avni and hung up the call.

She made her way to the washroom to freshen up and as she came out she noticed a text message from an unknown number.
Wondering who it was, Avni opened it and read out
' Hey Avni its me Raj Devika's cousin.
According to our new plan you will be going with me on bike.
Get Ready faster as its bike race between Amit-Devika and you and me for who will reach the camp first.
I am waiting outside your house'
Her heart nearly stopped after she read the message.
'Don't Devika know I m scared of bikes and I don't talk with strangers... Ek toh bike pe baitho upar se stranger k sath' mumbled Avni.
She tried calling Devika but her number was out of reach.
She sighed! I don't have any option I can't spoil my summer holidays due to my bike phobeia.

After geting ready she rushed out of the house
she stood there frozen on seeing bike, a fear gripping her heart. No...not again..control Avni control be confident you can do this.. waise bhi konsa tujhe ye ride krna hai.. relax.. mumbled Avni.
She breathed in and out to get little rid from her fear.

"Look at your face" Raj whispered
Anger made its way on Avni's face as she
saw his laughing form. How could he do this
to me? Mumbled Avni 

Even he did not know about her bike phobeia 

She jerked around and turned to walk away when she felt a grip on her wrist.
She turned only to get her eyes lock with his.
She broke off eye contact with him.
"How could you do this? And why?
Do you even know me?"
Avni blasted looking at him. "Do you even realise I fear bikes?
Look I 'am really sorry..my intention was not to hurt you in any way. Whispered Raj
Oh Then why you laughed.. she kept on scolding him and he just stood peacefully admiring her innocence.

After much efforts by Raj.. she forgives him.
And agrees to sit behind him on bike.
Raj handed her helmet to wear.
'What I won't be wearing this.
Its summers damnit its already too hot and now if I wear this.. I don't want my face to sweat' whispered Avni
'OH its rule you need to wear this' said Raj
'But its already too hot'
Avni said again
Without wasting moment Raj came forward and tied Helmet over her head.
'Arey what are you doing?' Asked Avni
'Shh I know its hot and this will protect you from sun rays' Raj whispered
'Oh ye toh maine socha hi nai' Avni mumbled
Raj smiled.
Raj held up his bike keys, his eyes twinkling with excitement. "Bike race with Amit"
'You can hold me tight' Raj said
"No no I' am fine" Avni mumbled
He started his bike..
Avni face was gripped with fear.. she was enchanting prayers..
Raj could hear her words..
He was riding smoothly.
'Wait How could I forget about race?'
Raj mumbled
He speed up unknowingly increasing Avni's fear. 
Speed breaker!!
Raj felt tight grip over his body..
Avni holded him tightly.
Her eyes was closed.

Raj's Pov:
Before meeting Avni I always thought Love at first sight is not possible.
But now it seems my own thought proved me wrong.
Fear on her face, Her brown alluring eyes, Her innocene, Her touch everything about her making me fall for her again and again.
I wish this moment get locks here forever.
But on practical note I want to live more moments with her.
Though she sounds little dumb sometime but it make her look even more beautiful.

Avni's Pov:
I thought he is one arrogant guy.
But he is caring.
And I acted like dumb infront of him.
Hmm Don't know what he must be thinking about me.
I myself first told him I won't hold him but look now I am holding his body tight.
I hope he understands me.
Wait but Why I want him to understand me?
He is just a stranger.

And after riding 50 mins AvRaj finally reached their destination.

"So we are first" Raj excitedely whispered
"What matlb tent hume lagana parega?" Avni asked
"Yes isime toh mazaa hai" whispered Raj
Their hunt began to search a suitable place for campaign.

'Here it is wow its soo beautiful. Yahaan jyda dhoop bhi nai hai aur yahaan pe bahut saare trees hai..'Avni cheerfully whisperd
Raj smiled as he was busy adoring cheerful Avni..
Its first time he saw her smiling.
Avni came towards him and whisperd "Chalo bahut kaam karna hai"
They started making tent.
Avni too started adoring him when he was fixing tent.
Raj saw her adoring him he just smiled looking at her.
She turned her face on opposite direction and blushed a bit.

They took half an hour to fix tent.
"Ye Devika aur Amit kaha reh gaye?" Avni asked
"Aaa vo actually Devika Amit raaste mein hi hai bas aate honge actually Amit ka message aya tha vo dono galti se wrong root pe chale gye the" Raj wishpered.
Did you hear
that noise?" asked Raj as he heard a noise. 
"That's probably my stomach" answered
Avni. "I am really hungry"
Raj laughed and dragged her towards the
tent they had made.
"Isme hassne wali kya baat hai? I am really hungry" Avni mumbled
"Hmm well I am really sorry mere paas toh khaane ka koi samaan nai hai its with Devika..aur bhukh toh mujhe bhi lagi hai so lemme search some fruits outside." Raj whispered
Avni held his wrist.
"Wait I have something" whispered Avni
Avni took out 2 boxes which had hot, steaming-
"Maggi!!" Both screamed in delight when they opened boxes and started gobbling it up leaving Raj again to admire her child-like innocence. 
"You like music?" Asked Avni
"Ofcourse infact I love music" answered Raj
Avni played music on her phone.
Ishq bulava jaane kab aave
Ishq bulava aave jab aave..
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main ta baitha kol tere.
"Wow its my favourite song" Raj excitedely whispered
"Mine favourite too" mumbled Avni

Tainu takda ravaan
Baaton pe teri hansda ravaan

AvRaj once again locked their eyes.

Pagal main khud nu banaanda ravaan
Tu hansdi rave, main hansaanda ravaan
Tainu takda rawaan...
Ajeeb rangaan di tu hai badi
Lage alag hi jahaan di
Ajeeb rangaan di tu hai badi
Lage alag hi jahaan di
Ae to nazraan nazraan di gal ve
Tu vi sun le zaraa
Main taa kol tere rehna
Main taa kol tere rehna
Main taa rehna kol tere...

Both got busy asking eachothers likes and dislikes.
Both smiling and admiring eachother.

Raj asked her for dance.
"Mujhe dance nai aata" she wispered
"Aise kaise dance nai aata? dance to sabko aata hai. Bas haath pair ko hi toh shake karna hai" whispered Raj
Raj started dancing as if he was dancing on some marriage baaraat.
His dance made Avni laugh louder.
Raj was happy to see her happy.
She too joined him in dancing.

Tainu takdi rawaan
Naina 'ch tere main vasdi ravaan
Paagal main khud nu banaunda ravaan
Tu hansdi rave, main hansanda ravaan
Tainu takda ravaan
Ishq duaavan jaane kab aave
Ishq duaavan aave jab aave
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main taa baitha kol tere...
AvRaj dancing in a funny way.
Shaking their hands and leg shammi style..

Tainu takda ravaan
Baaton pe teri hansda ravaan
Pagal main khud nu banaanda ravaan
Tu hansdi rave, main hansanda ravaan
Tenu takda ravan
AvRaj doing bhangra dance this is then when Avni leg slips and Raj wanted to held her but he too falls on her.
Both locked their eyes yet again.
Avni whispered "I wanted to say something to you"
"Me too" mumbled Raj
"First you" whispered Avni
"Ladies first" Raj said
Both decided to speak up together after countdown.
1
2
3
I Love You Avni
I love You Raj
Both said together only to be left shaken.
They frozed..Their cheeks reddened.

"Kya" screamed Devika from back.

Raj and Avni stood up only to face Devika and Amit
"Ye kaise ho sakta hai tum dono toh ek dusre ko jaante bhi nai abhi thode time pehle hi toh miley aur ye pyaar kaise hogya?" Asked confused Devika

"Kisi ko jaane k liye kabhi kabhi sirf ek moment hi kaafi hota hai.
Aur Devika pyaar toh aise hi hota hai na.
Hum miley, mujhe iski caring side pasand ayi aur ise meri innocence, hum dono ko ek dusre k sath comfortable feel hua.. Aur Pyaar Hogya.." answerd Avni

All was highly impressed with Avni's reply specially Raj.
He smiled looking at her.

"Par you always wished ki tera prince charming tujhe knees pe bend hoke purple roses de" whispered Devika

Without wasting a moment Raj collected newspapers from Devika which they bought for campaign use and made roses from that newspaper.

Avni was noticing what he is doing.
He came towards her.
Raj bended down on his knees and proposed Avni by giving her that roses which he made using newspapers.
"Avni princess of my heart will you like to live rest of all summers with me? I promise to make our relation more stronger." Whispered Raj
This bought huge smile on Avni's face.
She accepted the roses.
"Yes I would love to live not only rest of summers of my life but every moment of my life with you Raj" said Avni
Both hugged eachother tightly.
"The Perfect Summer Love by perfect persons" whispered Devika
"Its time for selfies guys" Amit said

Avni and Raj began clicking selfies by making weird funny and cute poses.
Both of them spent their day playing around and talking to eachother. 

Entry # 3 : Perfect You & I

It's a beautiful summer day , A couple walking on the grass on bare foot. They r close to each other but not looking at each other. Looks like they both have much to tell but still there is silence. But now The girl looks at the boy n tries to say something but the boy is looking on the other side. After walking for some tym they both sit on the grass. Now they both look at each other. The boy says," hmm..hum camp se bohot dur hain Avni. ab aur humein ye natak continue karne ki jaroorat nahi hain." Avni looks at him n says, " haan..pata hain Raj. mujhe bhi koi shauq nahi hain ye drama continue karne ka. humesha tum aise kyun baat karte ho k mein mari ja rahi hoon ye drama karne k liye. ye mat bhulo k ye drama hum dono ki sehmati se ho raha hain " Raj says, " mein e aisa kab kahan? u knw what avni? Tumhe larne ka sirf bahana chahiye. mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni. Thank God akhir yahan toh mein tumse dur ja sakta hu" He gets up n goes. Avni looks at him going.  She thinks 1 months before the deal happened between these two. Raj is the perfect dream boy of VNC clg n Avni is d most beautiful n perfect girl. All boys were behind Avni n All the girls were behind Raj. They cud not get a single minute of their own. They were totally irritated. Suddenly one day Raj came to Avni. He said," Hey  Avni right? Mujhe tumse kuch kehna hain" Avni said," I knw ye hi na k tum mere boyfriend banna chahte ho? Plz tum iss clg k sabse dashing nd perfect boy ho iska matlab ye nahi ki mein tumhe haan bol dungi. Plz stay away from me. I hate boys" Raj got annoyed nd said," tum apne aap ko kya samajhti ho? Mein bas tumhare paas aya iska matlab ye nahi k mein tumhara diwaana ho gaya hoon. I knw tht u hate boys. Issi liye toh mein tumhare paas aya ho. I have a master plan." Avni was confused she asked what plan. Raj continued, "dekho,tum aur mein dono pareshaan ho gaye hain inn proposals se.we seriously need a break. As summer camp is coming sab log hum par chance marne ki koshish karenge. So let's make it clear. Tum aur mein 1 month k liye couple ban jate hain. Sirf logo ko dikhane k liye. U hate boys nd I'm not interested in u.so we both r safe frm both each other n other persons. Kaisa laga mera plan?' Avni was quite confused 1st but thn she thought it's a gud idea. So she agreed . n they both started behaving lyk couple breaking everyone's heart. Raj was not at all interested in Avni n alwys ignored her to d core. Avni was also very hateful towards him as she hates boys. But that had a very old tragedy.. Actually Avni used to love a boy when she was in 8th standard.U can call it infatuation also as she knew nothing abt him more thn just seeing him but avni really liked him nd was ready to do anything for him. 1 day she told him abt her liking n he laughed at his heart out nd refused her. Avni  was really heartbroken nd frm thn she started hating boys as they never cared abt anyone's feelings. Now it has been one month since Avni nd Raj r faking this relationship. In this one month Avni has seen many sides of Raj. Be it helping her in d tym of need or respecting her. She never thought that Raj will b lyk this. The boy for whom all the girls r mad, who changes girlfriend in every other day he'll b lyk this! He carried her when she hurt her legs, gave her umbrella n stayed outside it as she hates someone coming close to her nd he praised her in front of everyone. She cud never think of those moments which she spend with her. For all they both were perfect but Avni realized that Raj is more than perfect. She never thought that again  she can feel something for another guy. But may b she's really falling for him. But she's sad as Raj never shows any kind of feelings towards her . he makes it clear everyday tht after this summer camp their so called relationship will b over. Though it hurts her a lot but she knws it's only 1 day left when it'll all b over. She left a deep breath when she sees Raj is coming. He says," let's go Avni. Bohot der ho gaya. Ab camp mein jana parega sab hamara wait kar rahe honge." Avni nods her head nd goes with him. When they r coming towards camp they hear everyone talking," oh! They look so perfect together just lyk they r made for each other." They both look at each other. They sit for lunch. A boy comes nd sits beside Avni nd tries to b over friendly with her. Raj comes close to Avni nd says," how dare u? don't u knw she's only mine? She's just made for me"  Avni looks at Raj with a beautiful smiling face. Raj comes close to her ears nd says," Accha tha na ? sab ki bolti bandh kar di..see I'm saving u" Raj smiles nd starts eating. Avni just keeps looking at him. After finishing all of them goes to see sunset. Raj holds Avni's hand nd says ," Avni, ye tumhari khwaish thi na k tum sunset dekho itni kareeb se. dekha tumhara ye wish fulfill ho gaya. Bachpan se tumhe sunset dekhne ka bohot shauq tha." Avni looks at him nd says," Raj, tumhe kaise pata chala k mein bachpan se sunset dekhna chahti thi? " Raj smiles nd says," hmm...jo ladki bachpan se mujhe like karti thi kya mein usske bare mein itna info nahi rakh sakta?" Avni gets very shocked nd says," ye kya keh rahe ho ? mein tumhe bachpan se like karti thi!! What do u mean by tht?" Raj laughs nd says," plz avni don't b so nave. Bachpan mein meine tumhare confession ka mazak uraya tha iss liye aaj tak tum boys se hate karti ho..aur pooch rahi ho k mein kya keh raha hoon?" Avni gets more shocked nd asks," kya? Tum..Raj tum wohi ladke ho jo ..tum mazaak kar rahe ho kya?" Raj says " sorry avni, but mazaak toh mein bachpan mein kiya karta tha.tum itni seriously logi mujhe nahi pata tha. U hate boys..hahahahaha..8th standard mein jo ladki ek anjaan ladke ko propose karti hain she says she hates boys!!" Raj starts laughing. Avni had tears in her eyes. She just feels so miserable. She again fell for this heartless guy?? Why God played such a dirty game with her..!? She runs from there crying.Raj tries to stop her but she goes. Suddenly a big storm comes. Avni is still running. When she stops she sees that she's lost her way. She gets scared. She starts screaming n running but nothing cud b seen in the storm. Everywhere it's dark. Suddenly Avni sees Raj coming there running. He comes nd hugs her. He says," avni thnk God tum thik ho. Meri toh jaan nikal gayi thi. Tumhe agar kuch ho jata toh mera kya hota. Pagal ladki koi aise bhagta hain kya?" Avni says<" but tum toh phir se mera mazaak banana chahte the nah? Toh yahan kyun aye?" Raj cups her face nd says," pagli mein tumhara mazaak kaise uda sakta hu? Itna bhi nahi samajh payi tum k mein tumse kitna pyaar karta hu? Jis din se meine tumhe reject kiya actually ussi din mujhe tumhe bhula nahi paya phir mujhe realize hua k mujhe toh tabh hi tum bhaa gayi  Aur Pyaar Ho Gaya tha mujhe tumse..tab sew meine tumhare liye wait kiya nd Issi liye toh meine tumhe aapna GF banaya. Mein tumhara dil jeet na chahta tha. I knw k meine tumhe hurt kiya par wo mera galti tha. I Love You Avni. Kya tum mujhe maaf nahi karogi?" Avni smiles n hugs him again n says<" Raj, I Love You too..tumne mujhe itna pareshaan kyun kiya? " Raj laughs nd says " May b God bhi yehi chahte the..issi liye toh unhone humein Summer camp mein bheja..taaki iss summer camp mein hum dono happily apni love ki journey shuru kar paye." Avni nods nd they both again hug. That day the storm may b stopped but the storm of love which started at AvRaj's heart never stopped.


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Entry Why Papa Is On Friend List

Bhawna comes to Avni's room n wakes her up.

Bhawna: Avni uth ja. Subah ho gayi.Aur kitni soyegi? Saari raat jag ti hain na issi liye subah teri neend nahi khulti. Ab uth bhi jana. Tere papa  breakfast table mein tere liye wait kar rahe hain.

Avni wakes up.

Avni: Offo maa. Aap bhi nah. Mujhe itni acchi neend aa rahi thi.

Bhawna: Uth ja beta.Tere papa..

Avni: Ok ok. Samajh gayi uthti hoon. Aap jayiye.

Bhawna : thik hain jaati hoon. But uth jana kyun kit ere papa...

Avni gives a look. Bhawna leaves the room.

Avni takes her phone n opens her facebook page. Gives a status.

"Hey Good morning friends. just woke up . Still in bed. Mom shouts so much. Feeling lyk the day will not go gud...pray for me"

Avni goes to washroom n comes out after getting fresh.  Wears her new dress n clicks a pic n posts it on FB.

"My new dress...how'z it looking friendzz...?"

From downstairs Bhawna again shouts" Avni ...aaja beta. Tere papa table mein..."

Before completing the sentence Avni runs downstairs n hugs Suket who is very much engrossed in his IPad.

Avni: Good morning papa. Sorry for being late but was very sleepy today. Bohot sara padhai hain papa."

Suket: it's ok beta. Baitho kha lo.

Avni also sits n is also looking at her phone. Bhawna comes n gives breakfast

Bhawna: Sab log apne apne gadgets mein. Pata nahi inhe kya milta hain inn sab mein.

Avni: maa aap bhi toh apne tab se recipe dekh kar banati ho.

Bhawna: Shh.. Avni, kha le jaldi se. phir jara market jana . mujhe kuch mangbana hain.

Avni nods her head n eats...thn she goes to her room.

Opens her FB n sees there is a status of Devika

"Heyaaa...going for summer beach party...will b awesome

#Friends

#Games

#Party

#Enjoy"

Avni calls Devika n she tells tht they made plan for beach party n Avni is defo. Going. Avni as usual says yes.

She again sits on her FB n sees Raj Purohit is online. She knocks him.

Avni: hey

Raj: hi..what's up?

Avni: nothing special..what abt u? r u coming to beach party?

Raj: hmm..frnds log toh peeche par gaye hain..shayed jana parega.

Avni: tht's cool..mein bhi jayungi.

Raj: great thn..we can meet.. ;)

Avni: yup

Raj: ok..thn.see u at beach party..mein tumhara wait karunga

Avni: mein bhi. J

Avni switch off her lappy n starts thinking," hayee...Raj aane wala hain..mein e jab se use clg mein dekha hain tab se uski deewani hoon.but kabhi amne samne baat karne ki himmat hi nahi ho paya..phir jab usne mujhe FB reqo bheja phir online ussee baat hui..phir toh clg hi off ho gaya..finally I'm going to meet him..Kya baat karungi ussee? Pata nahi...bas ussee dekhti rahoongi...wo kitna handsome hain...!!"

The nxt day Avni got a friend reqo on her FB..it from "Mr. S K" Avni as her habit accepts it as she's a big tym FB maniac.. She didn't even bother to check his profile.

On d day of beach party Avni posts a status,

" Going to beach party..hoping to have loads of fun..thnx Papa for letting me go.. J"

Mr. SK likes it. N posts a smiley "J" Avni likes d comment.

On beach party Avni is looking for Raj n there he comes. As a habit avni is drooling on him. Raj comes to her.

Raj: Avni..kaisi ho? Party enjoy kar rahi ho kya?

Avni: haan..thik hu.

Raj: toh yahan akeli kyun khari ho? Let's go n play volleyball..beach volleyball khel ne ka mazaa hi alag hain.

Avni goes with him..They play together in one team..Avni gets a li'l hurt but Raj helps her..he stands there alwyz with her n they enjoy a lot.. Thn they sit together have ice-creams n juice ..They both get along with each other very well. Avni felt lyk in a moment they bcm so close..She cud understand tht Raj was also feeling something for her.

It was getting evening.. Avni was sitting a bit far n watching the sunset. Raj comes to her with coconut water n sits beside her.  Avni smiles. Raj holds her hands..Avni blushes.

Raj: Avni..mujhe tumse kuch kehne hain..

Avni: Hmm..batao?

Raj: Avni..Jab se meine FB pet um se baat kiya hain..i felt tht u r very special..tum bohot alag ho avni..Tum lyf ko choti choti cheezo se enjoy karti ho..FB pe aapni lyf ko ek khuli kitaab ki tarah dikhati ho..I never felt lyk this for anyone else..Avni...I think I Love U. Kyat um meri girlfriend banogi?

Avni is very very shocked n she's in d ninth sky..

Raj: tum jawab nahi dogi?

Avni: Yes Raj..Tumhe shayed pata bhi nahi mein kab se tumse pyaar karti hoon...Thank u Raj..It's my best gift..

AvRaj hugs each other..thn Raj takes her to dance with her..They dance n get lost in each other but Avni never forgets to update her status..

"Avni Khanderwal is dancing with Raj Purohit

#Feeling special

#Aur Pyaar Ho Gaya"

After some tym the party gets over Raj goes with avni to drop her at home. In car Avni checks her FB n she sees tht Mr.SK has given 20 angry smiley on her status..Avni gets shocked..

They reach home n sees tht Avni's dad Suket is standing on d gate. He comes to Raj n brings him out of d car.Avni also gets out..

Suket: Teri itni himmat tu meri beti k saath !!!

Avni: papa..apko kaise pata chala?

Suket:  kyun tumhe nahi pata? Abhi meine tumhara status dekha? Mera reply toh tumne dekh hi liya hoga.

Avni(Shocked): Kya? Papa aap hi wo Mr.SK the..u mean Mr. Suket Khanderwal??!!!

Avni puts her hand on her head..she never thought something lyk tht.

Raj; Uncle..mein aapki beti se pyaar karta hoon..mein acche ghar ka ladka hu..plz aap samajh ne ki koshish kijiye...

Avni: plz..papa..ussee ek chance toh dijiye..

Suket: thik hain..Apna profile dikhayo..

AvRaj: what?

Suket: haan..apna FB profile dikhayo..aj kal issi se toh insaan ki parakh hoti hain..come on..

Raj gives suket to see it..Suket checks it very seriously..AvRaj r in tension..but greatly they r in super shock...!

Entry I Didn't Get A Medal!

 # Loving A Soldier!

As expected the Hot Summers arrived a bit early this year, it was the beginning of March and the most waited moment for a 22 year girl named Avni. She has been eagerly waiting for the summers to arrive, doing it from the last three years, but this time it was most anticipated year and the Summer for her! She is finally going to see his Man, Man of dreams, Man who lives opposite to her home, who she secretly loves a lot, he is an Army man, strong, smart, handsome, talented, and not to forget Most Charming! Whenever she see him she goes into her Magical dream world constructed bit by bit as she grew up. Let's go back to her childhood to see what her dream world has.

When she was a small kid she listened the tales of Prince and Princess, soon she got her favourite doll, and she played with it whole day. She met the boy next door who came to her house with his toys and puppets and they played all day laughing and running in the home garden, spraying water on each other playing Holi with water almost every day. Finally one day they got their Dolls and Puppets Married.

When she grew a bit older she went to the school, she participated in plays and always became a Princess, surprisingly all the plays had a Prince and she got the idea of adding a Prince to her dream world. Next she was a teenager and she read romantic novels and always dreamt about her Prince who will come one day to hold her hand. From last few years, she has been writing romantic novel, though she was studying journalism but she loves writing love stories.

And now she is waiting for her Prince, yes the boy of the next door, the Man of her dream, He is her Prince, he is Raj! Raj Prohit! She already confessed him in some manner but let's begin with the present story.

Present Story!

Avni wakes up quiet early everyday even before anyone else does in the family, she runs down the stairs, she was very happy, runs to the main door, opens it and finds the newspaper man entering the house, she couldn't wait for the newspaper man to come to her, instead she went to him and took the newspaper from his hand.

"Kyun Avni betiya! Aaj kuch khaas news aayi hai kya..."

Avni smiles "Haan Kaka..." She searches something in the newspaper and becomes happy - "Aagayi..!" She shouts and runs happily into the house! The newspaper man says to himself "Aaj kal ki ladkiyan aade din tak soti hain, Avni betiya ki baat hi aur hai.."

Avni comes to her bedroom and looks into the mirror, she was blushing as she says to herself "Avni aaj kya pehnegi... Finally woh usse milne wali hai!" She goes to the cupboard and starts checking her dresses and after emptying half the cupboard she finally gets one... The Red dress which he had gifted her last year! She selects it and goes for the breakfast.

#

At the Dining table, everyone were quiet just then Bauji tells "Hmm.. Aaj Fauji ghar aarahe hain... Ek zamane mein teri maa aur Bhavna aisi pal ka intezaar kar rahe hote the!"

Avni tells to herself "Aur aaj mein..." Bhavna asks her did she say something. Avni replies that there is also a list of soldiers who got medals this time and thinks in her mind "Mera Raj bhi is baar har baar ki tarha Medal jeet layega!"

Suket is now a retired Army general says "Medal Vedal Kuch nahi hota... Bullet Lagni Chahiye! Seene Mein..! Tab pata chalta hai ke kitna bahaddur Sipayi hai!" Avni frowns and says to herself "Papa bhi na.. mardalna chahte hai! ... God ji Raj ko koi goli woli na lage aur Papa ko woh pasand aaye!" Bhavna looks at her again... Avni gives a tensed smile thinking she heard and quickly says "Mera khaana Hogaya..!" She leaves.

#

At the terrace Avni was standing and looking at Raj's house and imagining Raj looking at her! She says to herself "Kal se Raj har roze mujhe yahan khade dekhega aur hum pehle ke jaise isharoon mein baat karenge!" just then Devika enters and asks "Kisse isharoon mein baat karne ki sonch rahi hai tu.." Avni turns with surprise and tells "Devika tu! Tujhe maloom hai woh aaj aaraha hai!"

Devika "Kaun?"

Avni punches her and says "Arre woh.. " She shows her hand at Raj's home. Devika "oohoo!..." She winks and rests her hand on Avni's shoulder and says "Jiiijuuu Aaaraahe hain!!!" Avni blushes and says slowly "...Teen saal baad!"

She quickly turns at her and says "Tu mujhe station le chalegi aaj..?" Devika becomes a bit demanding and says "Hmm.. Mujhe aaj bohot kaam hai... " She waits for Avni's expression, her smile had lowered... "Par mein tujhe station pe chod sakti hoon... Haan par mein tere saat khadi nahi reh sakti.. Pure 2 ghante tak! (she exclaims!) ...Intezaar karte hue... Woh bhi tere... BF ke liye!"

Avni hugs her and says "Chalega!" Devika leaves her saying be ready to 1pm.

Avni stands looking at Raj's house and remembers,

//Flashback//

Avni was standing on her terrace studying with a book in her hand, she stops reading and gets up, and wait for Raj to come on the terrace, a few minutes later Raj comes in his Army pant and White vest, he starts doing push ups, unaware of Avni is secretly staring at him. But he knew that she looks at him daily and if he look at her she will run away. He was smart and had kept mirrors on the terrace in an angle that he could see her even he faces at the ground. See Avni also acted as his energy booster and he did almost 500 push ups daily. But today for the first time after he completed his push-ups, Avni was still there, Raj looks at her and she didn't run away for the first time. Actually she was waiting for him to look at her, and finally it was the moment Avni's smile grew bigger, she was a bit hesitant and blushing. She pointed a finger at herself, then she made a heart with her fingers and then she pointed her finger at Raj! Raj was shocked to see what Avni just showed him, she loves him, and all it meant was "I Love You". Raj had no fear, he took his hands together, puts it on his mouth and shouts "I ... Love... You... Tooo!" Avni blushes, laughs loudly and runs away. Raj stands there with a big smile!"

#

Avni finally reaches the Railway Station it was 1 pm. The train was to arrive at 3 pm but she was so eager to see Raj that she couldn't stop herself. The railway station started to crowd, so as soon as Avni saw an empty bench she sat on it. She was lost in Raj's thoughts and soon she went into her day dreaming habit which she has got since she fell in love with Raj.

//Day Dream//

She listens the train's whistle and runs to the platform and check the train was coming. She takes a few steps back and starts looking at the fast approaching train and her heartbeat got fast, finally the train approaches the station and she watches Raj standing at the trains door, he looked more stronger than she saw him three years ago, he was smiling, Avni starts running with the train to meet Raj...

//

Just then the train whistles and brings her out of her dream, the station was over crowded, and there was no space to stand, so Avni had to stand on her bench. The train arrives at the station but she didn't find Raj on the train's door, she goes a bit sad, soon all the soldiers starts leaving the train, they hugged their families and laughed and smiled with their families. People started leaving the station. Soon the station was almost empty but there was no sign of Raj. Avni runs to each coach and searches Raj's name on the passengers' list pasted near the door of the coach. She searched inside the complete train but she couldn't find Raj. She was heartbroken, she still hope Raj had come but was playing hide and seek with her. Soon the whole station was empty, a couple of soldiers were marching and going somewhere Avni runs to them and ask them about Raj, they said her all the soldiers names here mentioned on the passengers' list and if it's not there maybe they didn't got leave and if mentioned in the newspapers their coffins have come instead.

A tear drops from Avni's eye as she hear the name coffin, she turned back and saw soldiers were taking few coffins on their shoulders. She fainted!

#

Few hours later she woke up and found herself in her bedroom, Devika was beside her. Avni ask her how did she come here. She answers her that she came to station to pick her and found some soldiers taking her, she told them you are her friend and they took you to my car.

Avni asks her "Raj mila?"

Devika: Nai... Shayed woh apne ghar chalegaya hoga!

Avni doesn't say a word and runs to Raj's house but it was locked. She finds an old man and inquires about Raj and his family but he said "They left today morning, as their son doesn't live here anymore!" Avni starts crying and runs back to her home, Bhavna tries to tell her something but Avni was so disturbed about the news that she didn't answered anything and went to the terrace to see if Raj was on his terrace, she had gone mad. Bhavna was touched to see Avni like that as her eyes were teary.

#

Avni comes to the terrace and looks at Raj's terrace. Nobody were there. She remembers Raj used to practice guitar on the terrace and Avni used to listen and enjoy as she studied early mornings. She imagines same guitar tunes coming to her ears, suddenly she started to hearing a song in her ear...

//

Kiska Hai Tumko Intezaar Mein Hoon Na...

Dekhlo Idhar Tum Ek Baar, Main Hoon Na

Khaamoosh Kyun Ho Jo Bhi Kehna Hai Kaho,

Dil Chahe Jitna Pyaar, Utna Maanglo Na,

Tumko Milega Utna Pyaar Main Hoon Na...

//

Avni comes back to her senses and knows she was not imagining, actually it was Raj who was singing in her ear. Avni turns back and finds Raj in front of her, he was singing song for her and slowly stepping back, Avni runs to him and hugs him tightly, Raj was smiling as she hugs him, Avni felt some water dripping on her hand, she looks at Raj and find him in tears, Avni quickly leaves him, he utters "Aah..!" Avni asks him what happened to him, he answers her "Nothing!" Avni knew something was wrong with him she asked him "Medal kahan hai dikhao!" Raj stops smiling and says "I Didn't Get a Medal..." Avni thinks that was the reason and says to him "Koi farkh nahi parta!" She hugs him again, but he utters "Ouch!", Avni quickly leaves him and looks at him "But... A Bullet in My Chest!" He added, Avni's eyes turns watery, Raj wipes her tears and says "No Tears Princess, Your Prince is here!" He hold her hand, Just then Bhavna coughs to inform her presence, she smiles and goes to Avni and Raj and catches their ears and says "Pehle Kyun Nahi Bataya!" The trio starts laughing, Bhavna says to Raj "Suket called you".

#

Raj comes to Suket and salutes him as he was his Boss last year, Suket tells him that he didn't got a medal this year so he want to give him. Raj closes his eyes as Suket puts the Medal on his Shirt, Avni and Bhavna enters, Suket asks Raj to open his eyes, he finds it was not just a medal but a Medal which had Avni's photo. Raj becomes happy and turns back to show it to Avni, Avni smiles and runs to him and hugs him. Suket goes to Bhavna and puts his hand around her and watches the happiness on their daughter's face after a long time.

#

Present Day:

Avni stops writing, removes her glasses and keeps them on the table, checks the time, it was 6:40 in the morning, closes her diary, it was written ...Aur Pyaar Ho Gaya as title and I Didn't Get A Medal... But a Bullet in my Chest as its sub title.


Entry Envelopes Did the Magic!!

 # It's Time for Engagement.

//This was supposed to be a serious comedy story but turned out something else. But worth reading! Alternate name for the Story is 3 Envelopes of Plan B//

The day has come for Raj to bring his proposal for Avni. He had planned each and everything but something was conflicting which could have proved negative for him. He makes a Plan B for his proposal and that goes around something like this.

#

Raj was in his bedroom standing in front of the mirror rehearsing about how he would ask Suket, Avni's hand for him.

Raj smiling and confident, "Bauji, Suket Sir, Bhavna Aunty, Mein Avni se Pyaar karta hoon aur apne liye Avni ka haat aapse mangne aaya hoon!" - He hits his head and tells to himself "Arre Raj tu aise bolega to woh Hitler tujhe tabhi goli se udayega! zara sambhalke..."

He tries once again, gets serious, stops smiling, makes his eyes a bit watery and says "Suket Sir mein ghuma phirake baat nahi karna chahta hoon aur nahi jhoot bolke apni zindagi ki shuruwaat karna nahi chahta, Mein Avni se saccha Pyaar Karta hoon aur apni aakhri saans tak use pyaar karta rahoonga!" he looks into the mirror and says to himself "aise bolunga to abhi ke abhi ghuma ghuma ke meri aakhri saans nikalenge woh!... kuch teda sonchna chahiye"... He looks into the mirror for one more time he gets bit comedy and tells "Suno Sasurji ab maan bhi jao! dedo mujhe apni beti ka haat, kyunke mein karta hoon usse behat pyaar!" - He starts laughing and says "Aise bolunga to mujhe ek haat se thappar lagayenge aur kaat khayenge.,. waise bhi ek se badkar ek namoone hai puri family mein, Sirf Avni ..." he was about to say about Avni just then his phone rings!

Raj: Avni ka phone! Aane ko bolegi! (He receives the call)

Avni: Hello Raj! buri khabar! Papa ka mood accha nahi hai! Tum aaj mat aana!

Raj: kya? kyun? kya hua? kisliye? kaise?

Avni: mere paas tumhare questions ke answers nahi hai bas itna maloom Papa ka mood off hai! Tum please aaj apna proposal mat lana!

Raj: Avni main ek bar jo sonchleta hoon to bas use kar hi dala hoon! Is bar jo hoga dekha jayega!

Avni: Kya dekha jayega? na bol diya to! I love you so much Raj I can't see you getting insulted and Papa rejecting you!

Raj: Na bolenge to kya! tumhe ghar se uthake le jaunga! Haha!

Avni: Raj mein mazak ke mood mein nahi hoon!

Raj: accha baba, mein kuch sonchta hoon! Waise tumhe Chess aata hai?

Avni: Raj mujhe chess se kya lena dena, mujhe bas tum chahiye!

Raj: acha ok ok... mujhe bhi sirf tum to chahiye! (He tells in mind Tumhare Hitler papa ka mein kya karoon!)

Avni: accha tum kuch soncho aur mein kuch sonchti hoon.. love you bye!

Raj: Accha baba.. Love you too.. Bye Princess!

#

Raj enters into the Khandelwals house, he looked completely different, had a new haircut looking sharp and handsome wearing a black coat with a red tie. He comes and greets Bhavna and finds Suket and Bauji sitting in the hall. He goes and greets them both. Bauji compliments Raj for his new look and asks him to sit, offers mangoes to eat as it was Summer time and Mango Season, Raj gives a smile and sits opposite to Suket. Suket was as usual angry about something but had his anger was under control.

Raj keeps quiet for a moment which irritated Suket. Finally after taking a bite of Mango, Raj opens his mouth, this got him few more seconds to remember his dialogues.

Raj slowly removes three envelopes from his coat and puts it in front of Suket. Suket asks what all these envelopes are for. Raj says he want to talk to him something important and will answer all his questions after his talk. Bauji and Bhavna takes attention, and sit firmly listens to Raj. Avni comes out of her bedroom and listens everything from above.

Raj continues. "Yeh pehle envelope mein mera resignation letter hai, Mein aapki company chodna chahta hoon Suket Sir" Suket gets serious and about to question, Bhavna asks but why, Raj stops her and tells "let me complete" he continues "Yeh dusra envelope invitation letter hai, Main aaj meri hotel ka inaugration kar raha hoon aur aap sab ko invite karne aaya hoon!" Bhavna smiles and Bauji congrats Raj. Suket asks about the third envelope!

Raj takes a deep breath closes his eyes for a second and gets serious and speaks "Hmm... Isse Pehle Mein Yeh teesra envelope doon mein kuch bolna chahta hoon, Mein kisi ko jhoot, ya cheat ya manipulate nahi karna chahta hoon, meri life ko simple aur sahi ke raste se shuru karna chahta hoon, I know my parents must talk about all this but it's my decision and about my life so I must tell you first... mein ghuma phirake bhi bolna nahi chahta..(Raj pauses for a second) hmm.. Har kaamyab aadmi ke peeche ek aurat ka naam hota hai aur jab mein kaamyab hoon to woh naam Avni ka ho... Mein Avni se saccha Pyaar karta hoon aur Avni ka Haat Mere liye maange aaya hoon... aap se! Yeh envelope mein mere saare details hain..."

Suket Bhavna and Bauji were literally jaw open! Bhavna and Bauji were happy but Suket was confused! Raj had not left anything to question, he is leaving his office because he got his new hotel business, now he is establishing his career and he wants to establish his personal life everything is understandable, he is honest and asking it truthfully and in rightful manner, but...! Suket questions him "Payal kahan gayi! Raj laughs and tells "woh kabhi thi hi nahi! Woh to Samarth ko mere aur Avni ke saat rehne ka problem ho raha tha so I made him to take his decision by showing I love Payal... Main Avni ke side se rishta nahi tootna chahta tha... Waise bhi Godji ko bhi woh manzoor nahi tha! Aur Payal ki next week Shaadi hai..." Suket got his mouth sealed, Raj was about to leave, Avni comes down and says "Mujhe Shaadi nahi karni hai!" Suket gets happy and turns to Avni, Raj tells "aap sab aaram se decide kijiye... Mujhe jald baazi ke decisions pe trust nahi... Aur Maine abhi Shaadi ki baat bhi nahi ki... (He secretly winks to Avni) and leaves greeting everyone)". Tells to god "Godji yeh ladki kitni na samajh hai.. Thodi buddhi dena ise shaadi se pehle!"

#

Avni calls Raj and tells him "Maine aane se mana kiya tha na Raj"

Raj: Haan to kya karoon, umar bhar aise hi bethne ka irada hai kya..

Avni: Raj maine aise kahan kaha..!

Raj: haan haan mujhe hi jaldi hai shaadi ki tum to daily meri photo ko nahi dekhti jaise bol rahi ho!

Avni: (Goes to the balcony) haan nahi dekhti...!

Raj slowly unhide himself in the balcony gets close to Avni finds his photo in Avni hand, he steals it! "Jab asli wala yahan hai to photo ki kya zaroorat!" He starts laughing and starts playing with Avni and teases her to get it, Avni runs behind him to get it but Raj makes faces and teases more, finally he gets at the edge of Balcony Avni tries to get back the photo but Raj was about to fall, Avni holds his hand instead and photo falls down from the balcony. Raj gets closer to Avni and holds her in his arms and removes the clip from her hair, strokes his finger into her hair and tells, "tum gusse mein aur bhi zaida pyari lagti ho! Mujhe tumse ...Aur Pyaar Ho Gaya" Raj gets close to kiss but Avni gets a bit uncomfortable, Raj tells "daro mat mein aisa kuch nahi karoonga..." He kisses on her nose instead and tells "yeh choti si naak par bada sa gussa aata hai to tum aur bhi pyaari lagti ho... Usi pyaar ko taste kar raha tha.."

Avni hits him on his shoulder, Raj lifts Avni into his arms and takes her into the room and lands her on the bed.

Avni: Raj mein sach mein abhi shaadi nahi karna chahti hoon, mujhe studies puri karni hai!

Raj: Mein jaanta hoon, par hum engagement to kar sakte hai na? Phir hum officially bina kisi dar ke mil sakte hai, date pe ja sakte hai nobody will disturb us. Engagement ke baad ki love story bhi different hoti hai...

Avni: Haan woh to sahi hai! (Avni was sleepy she slowly gets up and hugs Raj while sitting on the bed, she kisses on him cheek) kal maa se bat karungi!

Raj strokes his hand on Avni's head for a minute and leaves, Avni was already asleep.

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Avni gets up early and goes downstairs she didn't find Bhavna so she goes to the kitchen to find her. Bhavna was busy in the kitchen.

Avni: Maa mujhe aapse kuch baat karna hai...

Bhavna: mein jaanti hoon...

Avni: kya?

Bhavna: Tum Raj se pyaar karti ho na?

Avni gets a bit shy to confess, she just nods as she accepts.

Bhavna turns to Avni and tells "Kal jab Raj aaya tha na, meine uske aakhoon tere liye pyaar dekha tha aur tere dil mein dar... usko khone ka! Sahi kaha na maine? ... (She smirks and tell) Maa hoon teri itna bhi nahi jaanti kya?

Avni: Par Papa?

Bhavna: mein tere papa se baat karoongi tu tension mat le...

Avni hugs Bhavna and leaves.

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Everyone were doing breakfast, Avni looks at Bhavna to tell Suket about Raj. Bhavna was still planning how to bring the matter in front of him, but Suket started his talk. Bhavna went quiet.

Suket: Bauji maine Avni ke liye ek accha sa ladka choose karliya hai (Everyone is shocked, Savri gets happy and pokes Avni and makes her irritated. Bhavna and Avni gets shocked and sad.)

Suket: Bauji ladka smart hai, paise wala hai, saccha hai, har kaam jaanta hai, sanskari hai, apne traditions ko acche se jaanta hai aur apne father ke saat saat apna bhi business sambhal leta hai...

(he removes a photo from his pocket and says) Aur sabse badi baat... Woh Avni ko pehchanta hai... (Everyone is eager to see the photo, he turns the photo and shows it to everyone, It was none other than Raj!

Everyone gets happy except Savri, Suket says "Avni usse pyaar karti hai par darti hai, dekhiye isne kya likha hai peeche" he gives the photo to Bauji, Bauji reads "Dear Raj, I Love You! Par mujhe abhi shaadi nahi karni hai, mujhe studies complete karni hai!" Bauji smiles and tells mein jaanta hoon.

Everyone is shocked!

Bauji tells "Mujhe Raj ne sab pehle hi batadiya tha! Aakhir koi mujhe se bacha hai aaj tak?" everyone starts laughing.

Bhavna confesses "Mujhe bhi Avni ne sab bata diya tha..." Avni gets shy and leaves to her bedroom.

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3 Months Later:

Raj and Avni were on a beach,

Raj: Avni phir kya hua?

Avni: phir kya hona tha, Papa ne tumhe bulaya aur baat kiya...

Raj: Tumhe pata hai woh photo Suket Sir ko kisne di thi?

Avni: kisne?

Raj smiles "Tum kitni buddhu ho!"

Avni: tum buddhu ho...

Raj smiles and tells "Woh to mein hoon..!"

Avni: to tum mujhe Australia fight karne laye ho? Who bhi summers mein!

Raj: Arre Avni tum bhi na... Ok... Tumhe yaad hai? Us raat mein tumhare paas aaya tha? Tumne photo mere paas se lene ke liye kitni koshish ki thi? Tab woh photo neeche gir gayi thi. Yaad hai?

Avni: haan yaad aaya!

Raj: Meine jaan bujke photo girayi thi... Neeche Suket Sir the!

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He slowly takes Avni's hand as she was lost in thoughts, it had Diamond Engagement Ring, Raj kisses her hand, Avni blushes and runs away smiling. He smiles and runs behind her, lifts her from behind and gets close to her, Avni turns and hugs him tight, later they both had some fun time making Sand Castles on the beach and imagine it to be their home. Raj was lost in Avni's beauty. Avni loved being with him, they walk on the shore, hand in hand. Avni kept staring at Raj and Raj knew it, he kept smiling.

Entry You are My SuperHero!!!

#Innocent Girl and Her SuperHero.

It all began when I confess Raj that I too loves him and not just love him told him I love him more than he loves me. And our competition started, I'm not going to tell you about who won or who lost because in the end we both were winners, if I lost, I got the most loving life partner and if I won Raj knows he got the best girl for him. Today I'm just writing the last thing we had done to prove our love to each other and that was the day I got my Superhero!

Avni starts writing her diary, it's the same day she had got her Superhero but what really made her say "You Are My Superhero!" Is the point of this story.

The story begins by Avni singing "Aaj mein upar... Aasman niche... aaj mein aage aur zamana hai peeche..." As she enters happily into the kitchen, unaware of the fact that Bhavna was in the kitchen chopping down onions with a sad mood that Suket had left for office without eating breakfast. Listening to Avni she quickly wipes her tears and asks why is she so happy. Avni had no answer and afraid of Bhavna getting to know she is happy these days because it's the effects of Love on her. She changes the topic and says "Maa, I need permission!"

Bhavna: Kiski?

Avni: Maa.. Woh Summer Camp ke liye... please mana mat karna...!

Bhavna: Tu friends ke saat jayegi na...

Avni: Of course Maa...

Bhavna thinks Avni will be bored at home and will miss her friends so she gave permission. "Accha tera itna mann hai to ho aa.. Par zaida din nahi..."

Avni becomes very happy and says "You are the best Maa in the world! Love you maa... "And she gives a tight hug and a kiss on her cheek and leaves the kitchen dancing with happiness.

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Avni comes to her bedroom she was extremely happiness that she got permission for Summer camp! She immediately calls Raj.

Avni: Hello Raj,

Raj: Haan Avni...

Avni: Maa ne mujhe Summer Camp ki permission dedi.. Tum aaoge na mere saat...

Raj: Avni mujhe office mein bohot kaam hai... Sorry, tumhe akele hi jaana hoga...

Avni: Raj please chalo na...

Raj: Sorry Avni... Suket Sir ne mujhe bulaya hai.. Bye! (He ends the call abruptly and thinks about something)

Avni ends the call and becomes sad thinking she will have to go without Raj.

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Avni had no other option then to go alone, she was not in a mood to go and missed Raj a lot as she sat in the Bus and remembered her beautiful moments with Raj...

//Flashback//

It is a moment during Avni and Raj's sunset date, Avni tells Raj to look at the beautiful Sunset, Raj tells her he is looking at the most beautiful creation of god, he was looking at Avni. Avni blushes and pushes his face to look at the sunset and tells "Dekho Raj, woh panchi kitne khush hai na... Aasman mein sab se door... Ek dusre ke saat, ek dusre ke khareeb... Kash mein bhi ek panchi hoti aur yoon hawaon mein, aasmano mein udti..." Raj smiles and looks at Avni and tells her, "Aur sirf hum dono ho us aasman mein, ek dusre ke saat, in panchiyon ke jaise gaana gaate kushiyon mein doobe muskurate..."

Avni laughs and says "Par aisa ho nahi sakta.. hum thodi panchi hai Aasman mein udne ke liye.. Tum bhi na Raj... kabhi kabaar over Romantic hone ke chakkar mein sab bhool jaate ho...". Raj was about to say something, Avni leaves on the cycle...

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The bus reaches the camping location. Avni comes back to her senses as Devika tells her "Chal ab to Raj ke khayalon se bahar aaja, woh nahi aane wala... Usne bola na!" Avni nods and gets up...

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Avni and Devika were standing at the mountain edge and looking at the Sunset, they find a sky glider in the sky and gets excited and happy to see it, they were unware that it was heading towards them and soon it arrived and landed beside them.

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The Man in the glider removes his belts and comes to Avni in Batman's costume, he stares at her and looks at her from head to toe for a moment making Avni feel awkward and uncomfortable, he asks "Hey Girl! You wanna take ride?"

Avni gets afraid and says No! He starts laughing and removes his mask and reveals himself - He was Raj!

Avni shocked at him.. And says - "Raj tum!" Raj slowly looks at Devika and winks at her to give them some privacy, she leaves smiling.

Raj pulls Avni closer and says "Meri GF bulaye aur main na aaoon?" Avni tries to get herself away being angry at him for not coming with her, but Raj holds her tight, "Raj.. Chodo na.. Koi dekhlega!" Raj "Aan haan..! Pehle tum glider ride ke liye haan bolo!" Avni being forced that anyone may see her in Raj's arms says "Ok.. Baba.. Ab to chodo..!" Raj smiles and takes her hand and kisses, Avni's heart skips a beat and she runs away blushing...

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All the girls were sitting in front of the fire, Raj comes and sits a bit far, teacher asks if anyone knows to play a guitar, Avni suddenly takes Raj's name. Raj gets surprised to know Avni was thinking about him as he was also thinking about her, he says ok to the teacher and takes the guitar, he says "I dedicate this song to someone special in my life" staring at Avni and starts playing it. He moves around and keeps staring at Avni and Avni too keeps looking and smiling at him and both have an eyelock as Raj plays the guitar and sings the song.

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Muskurane ki wajah tum ho

Gungunane ki wajah tum ho

Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na..

O re piya re..

Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na..

O re piya re..

O re lamhe tu kahin mat jaa

Ho sake toh umr bhar tham jaa

Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye naa..

O re piya re..

Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye naa..

O re piya re.. piyaa re..

Dhoop aaye toh, chhaanv tum laana

Khwahishon ki baarishon mein

Bheeg sang jaana

Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na

O re piya re..

Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na

O re piya re.. piya re..

Jo mile usme kaat lenge hum

Thodi khushiyaan thode aansu baant lenge hum

Jo mile usme kaat lenge hum

Thodi khushiyaan thode aansu baant lenge hum

Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na

O re piya re..

Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na

O re piya re.. piya re..

Muskurane ki wajah tum ho

Gungunane ki wajah tum ho

Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na

O re piya re..

Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na

O re piya re.. piya re...

Piya re...

Wo o ho... oo...

//

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It was late night Avni comes to Raj's tent, he wakes up and is shocked to see Avni in his tent. She was wearing Jeans and a white shirt fully ready for Glider ride. She says "Raj I'm ready... chalo Suraj ab nikalne hi wala hai" Raj says "Umm hmm.." Which meant NO! He goes close to her stares at her for complete five minutes, Avni feels he is lost and clips his fingers on his face which brings Raj back to his senses, Avni laughs a little as she knew Raj had gone mad looking at her completely different look, he gets closer to her, Avni stops him thinking he may kiss her "Raj...!" He puts a finger on her lips and gets even closer, looks at her back and removes the pencil from her tied hair and says "Maine kaha tha na khule baal tum par acche lagte hai.." Avni blushes and says "haan, par tumhe mushkil hogi na!" Raj utters "aan haan.." And keep staring at her.

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Raj takes Avni to a mountain top and they both tie themselves to the glider and jumps from the mountain, they starts gliding into the sky, Avni closes her eyes, and asks Raj "kaise dikh raha hai Raj."

Raj says "Jaise Jannat mere saat hai, bohot khareeb." Avni knows Raj is talking about her, Raj slowly moves her flying hair from his face and looks at Avni's face, she was so afraid that she had tightly closed her eyes, He says "Avni mein tumhare saat hoon, tumhe kisi baat ki darne ki zaroorat nahi.." She slowly opens her eyes and tightens her grip on Raj's hand. Raj becomes happy starts singing,

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Ude, khule aasman mein khwabon ke parindey

Ude, dil ke jahaan main khaabon ke parinde

Oho, kya pata, jaayenge kahan

Khule hain jo pal, kahe yeh nazar

Lagta hai ab hai jaage hum

Fikrein jo thi, peechhe reh gayi

Nikle unse aage hum

Hawa mein beh rahi hai zindagi

Yeh hum se keh rahi hai zindagi

Oho, ab toh, jo bhi ho so ho

Ude, khule aasaman mein khwabon ke parindey

Ude, dil ke jahaan main khwabon ke parindey

Oho, kya pata, jayenge kahaan

Kisi ne chhua toh yeh hua

Phirte hain mehke mehke hum

Khoyi hain kahin baatein nayi

Jab hain aise behake hum

Hua hai yun ke dil pighal gaye

Bas ek pal mein hum badal gaye

Oho, ab toh, jo bhi ho so ho

Roshni mili

Ab raah mein hai ik dilkashi si barsi

Har khusi mili

Ab zindagi pe hai zindagi si barsi

Ab jeena hamne seekha hai

Yaad hai kal, aaya tha woh pal

Jisme jaadoo aisa tha

Hum ho gaye jaise naye

Woh pal jaane kaisa tha

Kahe yeh dil ke jaaun dil ki tu

Jahan bhi leke jaaye aarzoo

Oho, ab toh...

Jo bhi ho so ho

Jo bhi ho so ho

Ude, jo bhi ho so ho

Ude, jo bhi ho so ho

//

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Soon the journey on glider was over, Raj slowly lands the glider and removes Avni's hair from his face, Avni looks at him and gives a smile, she blushes a little, Raj slowly undo all the belts and the leave the glider. He ties the glider on the ground and comes to Avni, and asks "Kaisa laga?"

Avni had no words but she slowly thinks something and says "Mujhe height se dar lagta tha, par jabhi bhi tum mere saat hote ho na mujhe kisi baat ka dar nahi..."

Raj was shocked to listen Avni also has a phobia of heights. He says "Mujhe bhi sach bolna chahiye! Mujhe bhi height se dar lagta hai, aur ye glider mein pehli baar without tutor ke yahan udane laaye!" Avni too gets shocked and asks "Tum aisa kyun kare, tumhe kuch hojata to?" Raj keeps quiet for a moment and says "I love you more! Isiliye!" Avni starts laughing and Raj starts staring at her beautiful smile.

She tells him "Raj mujhe tumhe kuch gift karna hai! ...Apne aankhe band karo!" Raj closes his eyes, Avni goes close to him rests her hands across his shoulder, Raj felt she was hugging him but Avni wanted to say something in his ear "You are my Superhero!" She said, and she slowly gives a kiss on his cheek.

As soon as she kissed Raj opened his eyes, Avni immediately leaves him feeling odd and slowly starts stepping back, she adds "And I Love You!" She winks as she turns back and starts running, she was blushing very much but her heart felt something more than happiness, it was love!

Raj stops her for a minute, she pauses herself but still blushing, she controls and looks at him with her innocent smile, Raj sends flying kisses to her and shouts "...Aur Pyaar Ho Gaya mujhe tumse Avni... I love you...!" Avni starts laughing and runs back to her tent, Raj starts laughing uncontrollably in happiness as the first rain pour down marking an end to the beautiful summers
Edited by SpunkyTigress - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Congratulations and best of luck to all the participants!!

May the best one win!!

Have read all the entries and choose my best 3 which are listed here below:

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Entry no. 3: Perfect You & I

Entry no. 1: Incomplete without you.

Entry no. 5: I didn't get a medal

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These are my choices and may the best one wins!!

Thanks & Best of Luck!!
Edited by subham101289 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
@Amy: Thank you for holding this contest๐Ÿ˜Š
@All participants: Wish u all the Luck๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
May the best 1 win๐Ÿ˜Š

Wil read and vote later...
@Subham: U r too fast lil bro...itne jaldi parke vote bhi kardi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow! all entries equally awesumโค๏ธ
@All participants: gr8 job guyz...U al made my day...Thank u so much๐Ÿค—

ok now my vote goes to...

Entry # 1 : Incomplete without you

Entry I Didn't Get A Medal!

Entry Envelopes Did the Magic!!


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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally it's up...All d best to all..๐Ÿ˜Š

Very busy these days..๐Ÿ˜†..but will read n vote soon..๐Ÿ˜‰

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Posted: 9 years ago
Ok..here r my votes...๐Ÿ˜‰

Entry # 1 : Incomplete without you

Entry # 7 : You are My SuperHero!!!

Entry # 6 : Envelopes Did the Magic!!



btw all did super awesome worksโญ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘..loved each n every OS...was very hard to choose...๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Princyz_Belle

Ok..here r my votes...๐Ÿ˜‰

Entry # 1 : Incomplete without you

Entry # 7 : You are My SuperHero!!!

Entry # 6 : Envelopes Did the Magic!!



btw all did super awesome worksโญ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘..loved each n every OS...was very hard to choose...๐Ÿ˜†


u rite ShruPartner, it wz hard 4 me 2๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago
all entries were just to  fab...!!
was so much confused with four entries...!!
here goes my vote...
entry 1
entry 3
entry 5