Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath
Res!!
Let me get some air back first....Unres.!!!!!!!!! asdsgfdhjhkgjghdsd !$##%$&()**^&%%@ ?????!!!!!!Mandy!! WHAT EVEN! I AM JUST SO. Out of breath still. Out of words still. And I juts seem to get it right now. Its just so. Ugh. Grrr!! ☺️Your saying this is your first attempt on this stuff?! Seriously?! First?! It looked like your a pro in this! ;) I mean the way you have described everything EVERY DAMN THING so darn perfectly! WOW! Simply wow! Brilliance at its best well almost! There is a proper way to describe everything erotic in a subtle way which doesn't sound weird and vulgar, and you have written it juts so beautifully! <3 I am in awe of you Mandy! You are a gorgeous writer!The convos between, can I just say was the BEST! <3 It took all the feelings to a new level. Her feeling brave in between and he giving her all the liberty to do that. She feeling suddenly lost when bereft of his touch. So damn beautiful!It all felt so loving and romantic. Hot and seductive. All at the same time. I loved how you picturised whole scene of their clothes being discarded at the pile below, her bangles falling silently. It felt just awesome.And then how he said those words when she felt asleep in his arms close to his chest <333 PLAIN BEAUTIFUL. I can't say this enough. It just was so good! I am still in sorta trance, it would be hard to get over it. I am gonna read it again n again!I am so glad you're continuing it and stopped it there. THERE! I liked when you stopped it there THIS TIME😆. The morning after now. Can't wait for that! ;)
Originally posted by: Marybarton
Ok, what to say? That was not a SR at all. That was love-making. It was beautifully written. You concentrated on every detail without crossing into rough territory. I loved the idea of a nude lace. That was beautiful. Also liked how you worked Sanam's discomfort and inexperience into the equation. Aahil was exactly as he would be as a husband.
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