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Very nice update both couples are very interesting with Rachna calling KT brother and G with her dangerous girl antics and eating
Originally posted by: mkakkar93
ya but just posted the chap as in this travelling of two long days i tried to complete the half chap which i left in mid way before going so updated it 😳
Originally posted by: sb1410Very nice update both couples are very interesting with Rachna calling KT brother and G with her dangerous girl antics and eating
Originally posted by: anks209Hmmm... Amazing... Its different n that's what I like the most about it...:)
Originally posted by: PINky733very good going saranya
Update is very nice
And comedy my god I like so much
Wow gunjan mental girl she eating like she was mad
Rachna is so funny she was calling kt brother
U r too good saranya
Thanks for pm
Saranya dont kill me for my bad english
Originally posted by: sandjanaraiLovely dear
Sorry for commenting late
Mayank and gunjan are naughty
Kabir and rachna super brother? ??
Nice dear
Chap:3
Mayank n Gunjan were walking along the road carrying all their luggages,which made them more tired.
Gunjan:Am so tired how long we can walk like this
Mayank:Actually there's a bus stop here in few kms
Gunjan:Few kms oh god I really cant walk
Mayank:That's y I asked u to eat less
Gunjan:Hey actually I ate so less today
Mayank raised his eyebrow n looked at her for which Gunjan put,her tongue out.
Gunjan:Ok boss cool down.My problem now is I will bcum dark If I walk in this sunny day
Mayank:So now u r cautious of ur beauty
Gunjan:Ya ofcourse then who will marry me
Mayank:Oh as though now alone many r waiting in queue to marry u.
Gunjan:Hello you know how many fans I had in my school
Mayank:Ha Ha you want me to bliv that,look at u how plump u r n u had more fans ha ha
Gunjan:am plump..How dare you speak like that
Gunjan went to hit him n he ran from her ,but she chased him n he reached the end of dead road,He searched where to go when Gunjan
Surrounded him,Being so irritated on him she just dragged his shirt collar n pulled him too close to her,suddenly she lost her balance n fell on the road n Mayank fell on her n they ended rolling on the road as road was more steep.In their rolling travel whenever Mayank came above her he admired her eyes which was shrinked n closed in fear,Mayank was lost in it n he was admiring her without getting up.
Gunjan:Mayank get up pls
Mayank stood up n gave his hand to her to get up.When they finally stood up Both remembered how they rolled n felt bit awkward to face each n continued walking.
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Kabir:Rachna,How you know Mayank
Rachna:Hnmm my family friend
Kabir:Oh so how you both fell in love
Rachna to herself "oh god he thinks me as Mayanks girlfriend, Hmm fine let me use this story itself.
Kabir:Rachna u hear me?
Rachna:Ya actually he cums to my home often n we both wee childhood friends as well
Kabir:Oh that's nice
Rachna:Mayank is so cool,handsome I just cant control me before him.
Rachna said n giggled Kabir was getting irritated since she was praising his enemy.Kabir was driving harsh on hearing her
Rachna:Brother drive slow.
Kabir:Am not Mayank to do what you order.
Rachna:but am scared drive slow pls.
Kabir didn't hear her n driver more fast,Car was going left right in,the road which made Rachna's head hit on her seat again n again. Kabir didn't notice it until Rachna's forehead hit on her seat hard n she shouted in pain.Kabir stopped the car atonce n looked at her with so much guilty in his face.
Kabir:Am sorry Rachna I didn't know you didn't wear seat belt
Rachna:That's ok.But pls drive slow
Kabir:Rachna put seat belt first
Rachna tried t but she was not getting it,Kabir pulled the belt from her hand n he tried it now,Rachna was shivering inside when Kabir's hands were so near her waist,kabirs hands were caressing her lower hand when Kabir was tying belt n when he put the lock he found Rachna's hair in hands raised up.
Kabir:Rachna can I turn off ac y u shivering so much
Rachna:Hmm no nothing like that
Rachna to herself"Thank god Kabir didn't find that,his touch made me. Week."She said rubbing her hands where he touched.
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Mayank:Gunjan its difficult to walk in noon I think the speed which we rolled if we would have rolled for some more kms we would have reached bus stop,ha ha
Gunjan didn't respond to hhim n instead walked fast,
Mayank:What's wrong with you now..Y u behaving different
Gunjan eyes were filled with tears n she was weeping like a child Mayank:Hey you crying what hapn now?Missin ur family?
Gunjan:Am I really fat?
Mayank bursted out for laughter.He laughed hard that made tears pour out
Gunjan:You stop laughing..Am crying here
Mayank:Oh my sweetheart you are so cute n a beautiful one ok
Gunjan:Really..You think am beautiful
Mayank looked at her face which was so fresh in excitement.And he was admiring that.
Mayank:Yes you are
Gunjan in excitement hugged him which shocked Mayank he never expected this from her,his hands went to reach around her back but she broke the hug soon n ran off.Mayank stood there blushing.
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Rachna:Does my brother have girlfriend
Kabir pretended like he didn't hear it n was driving
Rachna:Kabir am asking you only
Kabir: if u call me brother I will not answer
Rachna:hmm sorry Kabir ok
Kabir:That's like a good girl hmm girl friend yes I do have but they are only my friends
Rachna:You mean you never loved anyone
Kabir:Love is boring..Love is for losers.
Rachna:What rubbish statement is this?
Kabir:Actually see Rachna When you want to enjoy life you should be single this bachelor life s only for few years in that why should we lift the burden of love n I feel its all extra tension,what say?
When he turned to her seat he found Rachna has dozed off.
Kabir"Best insult to me,this girl s really driving me mad.What made Mayank fall for her?."
In this thoughs he didn't notice the road he suddenly put the break seeing Gunjan blocking the road and asking for lift.
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End of chap 3
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