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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved ur os.. plz continue 
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Beautiful and cute OS! Loved it!
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Thanks guys for all wonderful comments m continuing my OS ...

part 4

While Raman and Ishita were reconciling their differences on the other end of the spectrum was Adi lost in the world of lies, betrayal, self doubt and guilt. He was going through myriad of emotions which he cud not share with anyone.
He was almost going to enter his teen years n already was showing rebellious streak...
He was not sure what exactly was happening with him nor he had any one who he had to share his doubts... Ever since the case closed his mom shagun was drifting away from him, all that he could recollect of the court proceedings were his m and his biological father fighting with each other and him looking for answers with his meek eyes...
Flashback scene :
The court proceedings were going on and Ishita comes to know through CCTV footage that adi is the culprit she wants to confront Raman... Whereas raman n shagun r fighting over the case in front of Adi.

Shagun : bass hogaya aur bardasht nahi Hota mujhse ... Main Bol deti Hun ki adi culprit hai ... Neil me kaha hai ki jyada se jyada Adi ko 6 mahine ki saza hogi aur woh Bhi juvenile center mein ...

Raman: (screaming at top of his lungs) pagal toh nahi hogayi Ho na shagun yeh kya baat kar rahi Ho

Aadi ko kuch nhi hoga main aadi ko kuch nahi home dunga

Shagun: pagal main nhi Tum Ho Jo apni chalak bhenji ko sambhal nahi sakte Ho
Kuch Bhi karle yeh case ko rafa dafa karo ya main court mein Sachs Bol dungi ... Main jail nahi jaa sakti meri society mein kya value reh jayegi ??? 😛

Adi who was a mute spectator to all that was happening did not believe that his mom was betraying him whom he loved so much n he started crying ...

Seeing Adi cry Raman was trying to console him by sayin : beta chup hokao ... Pappa loves u ... Tumhe kuch nahi hone denge ...

Adi (who has received shock of his life doesn't trust his father) : Jhoot Jhoot aap Bhi mujhe akele chod denge ... Aap apni ki biwiki mom k liye kuch Bhi kar sakte Ho ... Aur agar aapko kuch karna hi tha toh aap pehle hi karate ...

Raman : aadi try to understand ...
Shagun yeh sab tumhara kiya dhara hai ... Aaj mera beta meri baat tak nahi maan raha ... Ka ash tumne aur ashokne aadi ko gadi nahi fi hoti ...

Shagun: oh shut up yeh sirf adi ki galti hai Maine use gadi chalane k liye gift nahi ki thi ...

Meanwhile Ishita was listening to all this crap enters the scene n is clapping her hands
Ishita: wow kya nazara hai galti ko sudhrne k bajaya aur bigsda kaise jaye yeh koi Tum Dono se seek he ...
Galti Bacche se hui hai n uske parents bann kar samjhane k bajaya iss case ko kaise mitaye yeh soch rahe Ho ... Bacche toh paisa kiye Lekin sambhalna Tum Dono mein se kisi ko nahi aaya ...


Shagun : oh please abb mujhe ek banjh se nahi sikhna ki Bacche kaise sambhalte hai ... Get lost from here ...

Raman : SHAGUN agar Tum adi ki ma nahi hoti toh Pata nahi kya kar baittha ... [:X]

Ishita : Raman rehne dijiye aap kuch mat boliye plZzz ... Shagun main yaha tumhe kuch sikhnne nahi aayi Hun ... Main sirf adi se baat karna chahti Hun...
Waise Bhi Maine yeh case Rockne ka 1 mauka diya tha tumhe jab Maine kaha ki main case waspis le lungi agar Tum mafi mango meri Amma se but tumne apni ego k chalet aisa nahi kiya ... (Raman is super irritated after hearing this n just wants to kill shagun at that moment ) [:d]

Ishita: Dekho adi mere pass proof hai ki tumne meri Amma ka accident kiya hai ... Abb Tum either meri Amma se mafi mango n main case chod dungi ya Tum jail jao choice is urs ...

Shagun : nahi adi beta aisa Matt karna agar Tum accept karoge toh yeh log tumhare khilaf jarur case ladenge ...

Raman : shut up shagun for once ...

Adi thinks for a while n he knows that he has to do this last thing to save his hide he knows that both his mom n dad r useless

Adi : ok Ishita Aunty le chaliye mujhe Amma k paas

Shagun : nahi beta meri baat suno

Raman : shagun u plzstay out of this aur main adi ko tumhare ghar pahoncha dunga ...

At iyer house , Adi apologizes to Amma ...

Amma : it's ok beta tumne Jo kuch kiya jaan bujhkar nahi kiya but beta meri Jagah koi aur Hota ya tumhare mom hoti toh tumhe kaise Lagta ? So beta tumhe mafi tabhi milegi when u promise ki Tum jab tak legal age k nahi hote tab tak gadi nahi chalaoge n uske bass Bhi Shyam se chalaoge ...

Adi : who had tears listening to this yes ... I am sorry Amma I promise abhi Aajke bada legal age tak gadi nahi chalaunga ...

Amma : haan yeh hui na baat abb issi baat mein yeh lo ladu kaao ( n she stuffs adis mouth with laddu)

After seeing all everyone has a sweet smile n tears on their face ...

Mrs bhalla : our Balle Balle dil Khush kar ditta tusi samdhanji [:d] aaja adi put tar ghar chal tujhe Teri pas and ka khana khilati Hun ...

Adi was overwhelmed with all the love that he got from his elders ...

Raman : Adi beta agar Tum chaho toh aa sakte Ho Humari ghar kabhi kabhi ...

Adi: no thanks Mr Bhalla Main thik Hun jaha Hun ...

Adi had a houseful of people but none who cud listen to him
Shagun realized she made a mistake irking Ashok n hence was trying to cozy up to him more ... Both of them were spending more n more time with each other in dinners outings n parties ,...

She had started thinking that adi was her biggest hurdle in marrying Ashok n she needs to get rid of him soon ... She distanced herself from adi to concentrate more on Ashok ...

Adi was left all by himself even Baka sir had stopped coming he didn't knew the reason y ...

Adi as a child was never like this he was a meek child he had to put up this facade of arrogance to cover up for his meekness ... When he was in hostel he could play around with boys that he grew up with ... He suffered a lot initially as he wud've get bullied by these very same boys who wud've call him names coz his mom stayed with another man n not his dad ... He transformed himself into another bully under peer pressure to let himself through the group ...

But the boys at the new school were no fun they wud've go on outings with their parents n wud've have less time for playing with him ... He was hating his life he had every other luxury that any child needs but no one to speak to ...😔


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very interesting update. It's nice to read about the matter from Adi's point of view!
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just read all the parts..lovely SS...plz continue soon n pm me plz if possible
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Thanks all for the feedback ... I will b updating in next 15 hrs or so ...a bit busy now ... N please dearies kindly criticize my POV ... I just want to know counterviews too ... Thanks again for appreciating my efforts ... 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice. I read the 4 parts n liked it. 
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Just read all the parts..loved it
Well written dear

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Contains some mature contents

Part 5

It was raining heavily that night when Ishita reached home she knew papaji mummyji n simi had gone for a marriage ceremony and wud not return before 4 am as punjabi weddings usually are...
She got completely drenched just in the span of 2 mins after parking her car and before reaching her building staircase...
Clock struck 10, Ruhi her angel must b sleeping peacefully with her chitti she thought ...
She had a hectic and tiring day and thought of having a quick shower before going to bed ...
Just as she finished she realized that she forgot to get her night clothes ... Luckily she had at least got the towel ...
She was unsure if she shud step out like that although there was no one home ... Just then she remembered Raman ordering Mihir to not let any of the employees leave office before 2 am as they had an important client meeting the next day and Raman had planned for an office meeting for the next days presentation at 12.30 ... Which meant Romi n Raman were to be in the office till 2 at least

She wrapped the towel around herself and reached her bedroom and started looking for her night clothes from her cupboard .

Just then he smelled a fresh draft of lavender and turned around to look at the most beautiful sight in his life... His wife smeared with hot droplets of water on her shoulder ... Right out of fresh shower in a bath towel ... He thought he lost his senses for a second or so which seemed like eternity ...

The moment he turned around she noticed that she was not alone in the room ... She too turned around just to look at him ... Transfixed his eyes onto her holding his file in his hand ...

She could feel him scanning her each n every part of her body ... She felt as if she was not even wearing that towel... Slight redness had crept on her cheeks and she felt as if she was a teenager again to be kissed by her crush from school ...She felt rooted to the place to where she was standing ... She cud'nt understand what was going on ...

Slowly he started taking steps towards the beautiful woman in front of him ... He felt something which pulled him towards her just as iron gets attracted towards magnet... His mind was bursting with ideas with all he could do to her ... How he could rip the towel off her body ... How he would touch and feel her ...

When she saw him coming towards her she felt as if her whole body melted and she could feel his touch on her bare skin... She was not sure if it is right to feel like that but she badly wanted him to touch n feel her body all over ... In anticipation to that her bosom started heaving and she slowly started getting breathless ...

Her act was not unnoticed by him but that made it much harder to resist ... He felt as if restraint was not much of a solution as that was driving him more towards having her ,...

The moment he was almost onto her she backed off pinning herself against the closed wardrobe doors and trying to catch some breath ...
He knew any moment his mind is going to go insane and he would not b in control of it ... He started feeling hazy ... He had to support his palms on the wardrobe behind as he knew touching her would throw him into depths of desire from where it would be difficult for him to come back ...

She could almost feel his breath on her lips , his warmth and those eyes piercing onto hers as if trying to make her subdue... She knew this was the moment when she lost it to him ... And yet she was happy about it ... She knew that the next moment he would be onto her ... She reciprocated by shutting her eyes and quiver on her lips ...

Her antics made him break off the spell ... He smirked and yelled "Bewakoof Aurat" with a soft chuckle and went out laughing holding his file ...

This was it! She had never felt so foolish in her entire life... She muttered "Praand Ishu what were you thinking... Urgghh" ... She felt dejected, stupid and embarrassed at the same time ... Slowly all the above emotions turned into anger and she vowed to herself that she would teach her Ravan kumar a lesson some day ...

When he returned back to his room at 3 he saw his wife sleeping peacefully on the couch ... He remembered all the happenings in a split second a let out a sweet smile at his wife's stupidity ... He knew he would've gone overboard in that moment and done all the things that he wanted to and he also knew that she would've let him but he wanted to resist his temptations ... He had already hurt his wife in Adi accident case and he wanted to slowly build that very trust which was broken by him ...

Only he knew how difficult was it to him to hAve a platonic relationship but he never wud've liked to force himself onto her ... He was ready to wait and he wud've waited till eternity for her ...

After he had almost confessed to her about his feelings to her she had said " let's start over as friends" ... He didn't knew what she was contemplating but he didn't wanted to spoil any chances ... At the back of his mind he knew she did like him a lot but was unsure if she loved him ...

He thought it's not necessary to explicitly say that he loves her and he knew that she would be able to feel about it ... All this while he was sitting close to her thinking about things had changed within such a short span of time and smiling to himself while looking like a complete idiot ...
He didn't touch her although he badly wanted to as he didn't wanted to break her sound sleep ...

Little did he knew after he left to change his clothes that his wife was awake all the time observing him from the small corner of her eye ...,
She knew after his almost confession that he loved her ... But she was not sure if that was love or mere attraction ... When today all that happened she had seen fire in his eyes to own her and she knew it was more than plain simple infatuation ... She knew he resisted and his this very action confused her... At that very moment she knew this was not attraction but something more than that...

The very thought that Ravan kumar didn't use her in her weakest point proved that he wanted more from this relationship beyond physical needs ... She smiled at that thought and started faking sleep as he entered the room...

Both spent the night tossing in their respective places by trying to block the thoughts that crept coming up about their encounter a while ago...😆


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Freaking Amazing OS Dear!Pls do write more on Ishra & pm Me!