Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice work,  Panchaali.  I somehow read  to the point  where Karna saves Panchaali  from the fall, and then it became interesting.
So  Panchaali  didn't tell him that the war is over,  that he is actually dead, blah blah blah?
Posted: 9 years ago
 A time travelling Dwapar Yug Kshatriya! Nice!
Posted: 9 years ago
Nice panchu ..interesting time travel...:)
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by .Vrish.


Nice work,  Panchaali.  I somehow read  to the point  where Karna saves Panchaali  from the fall, and then it became interesting.
So  Panchaali  didn't tell him that the war is over,  that he is actually dead, blah blah blah?

actually Panchaali still can't believe that he is Karna..it will take time 😊 
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Arijit007


nice story.

Thankz bro ðŸ˜Š
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by riti4u


Nice panchu ..interesting time travel...:)

Thankz Sasu Maa 2 for accepting the story ðŸ˜ƒ ðŸ¤—
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by thearcher


 A time travelling Dwapar Yug Kshatriya! Nice!

Thank you ðŸ˜Š
Posted: 9 years ago
Brilliant and interesting story...I was completely engrossed ðŸ˜Š
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by -Shani-


Brilliant and interesting story...I was completely engrossed ðŸ˜Š

Thank you ðŸ˜Š

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