nice one... 👏 i didnt expect the twist 😆 Poor Yudi...🤣 Arjun is very smart !! he let his wifefy touch touch and then tells her the truth 🤣 Lovely os 😳👍🏼
I don't know what to say after reading you extremely touching OS!!!!!!!! I am now under a deep feeling within my heart for all three of them! But I must say that you showed a very real picture 👍🏼⭐️ I hope that people who think that Yudhishthir was jealous to Arjun regarding Draupadi will be positively effected by your writing.
Please keep writing didi 😊
P.S: some members here found the end part funny, but I felt pain for Yudhishthir 😭 it showed his patience & tolerance again. Edited by Urmila11 - 9 years ago
Draupadi's mental state here is straight reflection of Vyas's description- A passage on her in Vana Parva. Incidentally, there too, baring her deep feelings (for Arjun) to Yudhishthir only.😆 But with a slight difference; Arjun had recently left them on his individual ascetic quest and Yudhi was not as unperturbed as here. 😛 He was 'all concerned'! Perhaps a base for His ultimate 'assessment'?
Your ideas are quite interesting and covering with a light hearted tecnique of story telling you have very clearly indicated the inner turmoil of their mind. Good work but why have you not continued with some other interesting moments of pandavas and panchali's lives?Please update soon.
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