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chapter 7
Location:in jungle
Pratap and ajabde are searching their way in the jungle but due to darkness it was getting difficult upon tat pratap's wound had also started hurting too much.but pratap was still very angry,he wanted to punish maldev severely but couldn't do it due to his army.maldev dint get punished this thought was making him mad.he was moving soo fast in anger tat ajabde was finding it difficult to match his steps.she was scared seeing pratap soo angry .never had she seen him in such rage.she dint know how to start a conversation with pratap.
Ajabde(self thought's):hey bhagwan,ye kunwar pratap ka gussa dekhkar hame bhay lagraha hain.kitna kuch kehna chahtey hain hum inse lekin mukh se kuch nikal hi nahi raha hain .she sees pratap's back drenched in blood and panics.
Ajabde(fearful):hey eklingji kunwar pratap kitna khoon beh raha hain.aapke toh saare vastr kahoon se latpat hogaye hain.
Pratap den notices ajabde aftr long ,her pained expression seeing his wounds,her care,her fear,all were making him drown in her.except her ranimaa no one has ever showed such genuine feelings for him.the connect which he feels with his mother he hasn't felt for anyone except ajabde.
Ajabde:kya zarurat thi maldevji se ladne ki?,kya zarurat thi hamare liye apni jaan khatre mein dalne ki?.kuch hojata aapko tho?kya jawaab detey hum ranimaa ko,RANAJI ko boliye.
Ajabde was soo scared seein pratap hurt tat she kept on blabbering thinking wat would have happened if dey dint run on time.but pratap took a complete different meaning .he thought tat ajabde still wants marwar-mewad relationship ,she still wants him to respect and forgive maldev this thought made him immensely angry.
Pratap(in anger,shaking ajabde tighly):oh toh hum aapko bachana aaye aapko acha nahi laga ajabde.AAP ab bhi chahti hain ki hum us rao maldev jaise insaan se sambandh rakhe?,phool se vivah kare??
Ajabde:nahi kunwar prat...
Pratap:BAS kuch nahi sunna hame ajabde.bahut manmani karli aapne.bahut faida uthaliya hamare prem ka.hum aapse atadhik(immense)prem kartey isiliye AAP humse saari baat manwaleti hain ,haina.lekin ab aur nahi hum aapki koi baat nahi sunengey ,suna aapne aaj ke baad hum wohi karenge jo hamara Mann karega .aur haan aapko bata de ki humne phool se apna vivah tod diya aur isse pehle AAP hame phool ka fil todne ke liye sunane lage hum aapko bata dey ki phool bhi hamare nirnyay se sehmat hain aur unhone bhi hamse vivah na karne ka faisla kiya hain.hame prasannata hain ki kamse kam woh to hamari Mann ke peeda ko samjhi.says pratap painfully with moist eyes.
Ajande felt terrible hearing pratap's words.she had given him soo much pain firstly due to his denial and den by asking him to sacrifice for matrbhoomi.but now she would fill his life with double joy she promised herself.she would melt his anger with her love.before she could speak to him dey wer surrounded by some aadiwasi .getting scared she hugged pratap .he assured her by keeping her hand on her hand.
Aadivasi:koun ho tum log??is samay jungle mein kya kar rahe ho?
Pratap:hum kunwar pratap hain.maldev ke sainik hame dhund rahe hain isiliye hum bhag rahe hain lekin andhere ke karan Rasta bhatak Gaye hain.
Adivasi:AAP chittor ke rajkumar haina ,koun nahi jaanta aapko AAP toh gaurav hain hamare desh ka.hamara pranam sweekar kijiye kunwar pratap.dey all bow down in respect.
Pratap:arey yeh kya kar rahe hain AAP.hame sharminda mat kijiye .
Adivasi:kunwar pratap ab aapko us maldev se darr ne ki koi awashayakta nahi hain.hum sambhallenge unke sainiko ko.chaliye hamare saath chaliye raat mein aise jungle mein bhatakna khatarnaak hota hain.hamara kheeme idhar hi lage huwe hain.subah hote hi hum aapko gaon mein chod denge.
Pratap(gratefully):ji dhanyawaad aapka,chaliye ajabde.
Adivasi:yeh koun hain kunwar pratap??
Pratap:ji yeh ..
Ajabde:patni hain hum inke declared ajabde full authority shocking pratap to the core.but he kept quite due to those Adivasi's.
While walking pratap asks slowly
Pratap:kyun kaha jhoot aapne umar ki AAP hamari patni hain?
Ajabde(mischieviously):jhoot humne kya jhoot bola .kyun AAP hamse vivah nahi karenge??thode din mein hamara vivah hojayega na toh yeh jhoot kaise huwa aur vaise bhi hum aapko kabka apni pati Maan chuke hain .says Ajabde with full confidence and love.
Pratap was baffled seeing Ajabde's new avatar.the girl who couldn't speak a sentence without stammering had was speaking soo confidently today.before he could react they reached the Adivasi people's camps.the camps were decorated seems like some function was goin on.the Adivasi was speaking to his head explaining him about pratap.the Adivasi people welcomed them whole heartedly.dey the head did pratap's aarti and praised him for his achievements .ajabde was proud of her love.she seemed soo happy seeing her pratap being showered with soo much love and appreciation.seein pratap's wound the head asked pratap to take rest in the tent and ordered for herbal lotion to be made to treat his wound.pratap was led to a tent by all male's whereas ajabde was taken away by ladies to another tent.pratap wasn't ready to leave her even for a second but he trusted these people.
Ajabde sat between giggling ladies who sat teasing her about pratap seein her dejected face due to her separation from pratap.she got to know tat one girl mridula was gettin married in two days to her childhood love saanjha.she was glowing as a bride and Ajabdr felt nice seeing mridula get her love.she praised her beauty and imagined how would she feel as bride.her reverie was broken when one of the women handed her the herbal paste asking her to apply it to her husband.she took tat bowl nervously and proceeded towards pratap's tent.she was very boldly declaring pratap her husband few minutes back but now she was hell nervous .the thought off seeing pratap half naked was making her jittery.but thinking about pratap's wound she discarded all apprehensions and moved towards the tent.she saw his bare torso and blushed but his wound bought tears to her eyes.he was lying on bed with his back.she came and sat and very softly started applying the paste.pratap flinched with the paste's contact on his wound and ajabde started blowing air sending tingling sensations to pratap.he immediately recognized her .
Pratap(surprised):ajabde AAP kya kar rahi hain yahan.
Ajabde(slowly):kuch mat kahiye kunwar pratap hame ye Lep lagane dijiye.
Pratap fell silent ajabde's soothing hands was enough to cure his pain he savioured her feel on his skin.after applying the paste she stood up to leave but suddenly she bent and placed a feather kiss on his back jolting pratat and her own self .dey felt a shiver running down their spine.ajabde became tomato red .before she could leav pratap got up and caught her hand.
Pratap(teasing):kya baat hain ajab aaj bahut hi alag tarah se pesh aarahi hain aap.hamari bholi bhali ajab itni himmatwali kaise hogayi.he bought her closer by holding her waist.she became more red if possible.pratap smiled looking at his queen .she was soo ethereal,soo beautiful.her innocence was heart warming.he kissed her forehead,eyes and cheeks passionnately and started moving towards her lips.both were breathing heavily.their hearts racing,but suddenly someone called pratap breaking their concentration .ajabde ran from Der unable to hide her blush any longer leaving pratap with a beautiful heartfelt smile.

Precap:more romance of prAja 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG!!!!
Itna zyada PrAja romance. Main to sharm ke maare mar hi jaungi.
I jut can't say anything.
The last paragraph just made me blush.
☺️
You are an amazing writer. Please update soon.
Just can't wait to read the next part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG...i cant stop bluching...d last para was juzz tooo gud...waiting for d nxt part eagerly...☺️
(did i mention tht u r a gr8 writer...!!! 
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Oh god..so much romance. ..blusher mode on