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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb. ..really liked the way you redeemed phool character
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome SS!!!
read all five parts in one go...
like the story line very much 
good dialogues and character portrayal 
do cont soon 
excited for next part as it will have PrAJa
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chapter 6
Ajabde is sitting like a dead body and all Dasi's are applying haldi to her .she is lost in the beautiful moments of chakrapani's marriage.everything was soo good just like a fairytale but when has her happiness lasted it is always snatched away from het before she can feel it.same happened with kunwar pratap before she could drown in feeling of love she was brutally awakened from her dream.
In the evening
Dressed in a red embroidery lehenga with stones and pearls.having worn beautiful jewelry of kundan ajabde looked no less then a princesses but her eyes were sad .a bride's eyes always twinkle with thought's of new life but ajabde's eyes declared her helplessness.she was surviving becoz she knew pratap would come but the knife safely tucked in her Ghagra's side was a sign tat due to any circumstance if he couldn't come den she would kill herself then and Der but will never ever become anyone else's .
Pratap had reached ghanero.he was tensed,scared to lose ajabde but mostly he was angry on RM to have put his filthy eyes on his treasure.
Pratap(self thought):hum aagaye hain ajabde aapke pratap ab koi aanch nahi aane denge AAP par .hum aagaye hain.with red fuming eyes he moved towards the mandap .the sight which he saw burnt his soul and pierced his heart.the priest was asking ajabde and maldev to sit In the mandap.he saw ajab removing a small knife from her Ghagra.tat was enough for pratap to understand wat ajabde was upto.he shouted In his loudest voice ever .
Pratap:AJABDE!!!!
everyone present in the hall was startled hearing the scream.but dey wer more baffled when dey saw kunwar pratap running like a cheetah to ajabde taking her knife away from her hand and throwing it to the farthest corner of the hall.and den somethin happened which left everyone speechless dey saw pratap hugging the bride with tears ,squeezing her delicate body into his rough ones .kunwar pratap was hugging maldev's would be wife well that was the biggest news everyone stared whispering among themselves.saubhagyavati was very very happy seein prAja Milan and maldev was burning seein his would be son in law hugging his would be wife.pratap was ditching his granddaughter dis thought was enough to bring out the beast in maldev rao.
Maldev rao(angrily):KUNWAR PRATAAAPPP!!AAPKA ITNA DUSSAHAS AAP HAMARE VIVAH MEIN AAKAR HAMARE HONE WALI PATNI ..
PRATAP(VERY ANGRILY):KHABARDAAR AGAR HAMARI AJAB KO APNI PATNI KEHNE KE CHESHTA BHI KI TO AAPNE .ISI SHAN AAPKA SAR DHAR SE ALAG KARDENGEY.
maldeb rao removes his sword and same does pratap.both lookin at each other fiercely.ajabde is scared she had full faith on her pratap and his abilities but she knew now pratap was alone and maldev had atleast 1000
Soldiers with him .she had to get pratap out of here somehow .she had to think fast.
Maldev:hamari poti se vivah karne jaa rahe hain AAP aur yahan is samanth putri se prem jata rahe hain .aisa dussahas kaise kiya aapne.
Pratap:dussahas to Aapne kiya hain hamari jaan,hamari zindagi,hamara samman,hamari taqat,hamari ajabde ko dukh pahunchaneka .aaj hum aapko chodengey nahi Rao maldev .Jab tak aapko khatam na kardey hamari Mann ki aag thandi nahi hogi.
Maldev:ha ha ha starts laughing hysterically .AAP hame maarenge Hume bhuliye mat AAP chittor mein nahi ghanero mein Khade hain Jo hamara shetr(territory) hain aur yahan se zinda toh AAP bachke nahi jayenge kunwar pratap.mrityu aapki hogi hamari nahi aapki.
Pratap:nahi dartey hum aapki khokhli dhamkiyon se,sahas hain toh humse ladiye.aaiye ladiye says pratap determinely.he dint wanted to leave RM to have hurt his ajab.
Here ajabde was experiencing shock aftr shock pratap's love declaration made her heart swell in pride and her eyes moist.her pratap loves her to this extent and wat did she do always used his love to blackmail him .to make him dance to her tunes .she felt soo small infront of pratap's love.she was now determined may be she was not worth of pratap's love but now she won't let him sacrifice ,she won't let him die each passing minute by marrying phool.she would fight for her love,she would liberate pratap from this meaningless relationship with phool.she would stand by him in his every decision now.with tat determinantion she clasped her hand with pratap's hand providing him strength .
Pratap was shocked by ajabde's gesture but he felt somethin warm cover his heart seeing ajabde's gesture it accelerated his confidence.
Maldev rao was fuming seeing prAja hand in hand standing like each others pillars.he ordered his soldiers to kill pratap .pratap bravely tackled them.ajab was worryingly lookin at him.he was skillful very aptly he defeated some 15-20 soldiers in minutes but suddenly maldev attacked him from back slashing his back .ajabde screamed pratap's name in fear.she pushed maldev with such a force that he fell and hit his head on one of the walls rendering him unconscious.
Ajabde(sobbing):kunwar pratap uthiye .kunwar pratap kitna kahoon beh raha hain hey bhagwan yeh sab hamare karan.kunwar pratap uthiye kuch to boliye kunwar pratap.ajabde was baffled she couldn't understand anything.whereas our pratap was niharofying his love .she looked cute with worried face .he had a smile on his lips seeing her getting soo concerned about him.
Ajabde was out of her mind she kept on kneeling on pratap asking him to speak .den she saw him smiling his same mischevious smile ,she also had a smile seeing tat but suddenly she saw many soldiers entering the hall she panicked.
Ajabde:chaliya kunwar pratap hume yahan Se nikalna hoga .uthiye jaldi kijiye.
Pratap(stubbornly):nahi rao maldev ko maare bina hum nahi jayenge ajabde.unhone aapko ajabde aapko takleef pahunchayi nahi hum inhe shama nahi karenge.
Ajabde(irritated):AAP kuch tab kar payenge jab hum jeevit honge.dikhiye kunwar pratap maldev ji ke paas kamse kam hazaar sainik hain is samay aur AAP akele unka saamna nahi.kar saktay isiliye chaliya Hume chalna hoga.aapko hamari kasam.
Pratap was bound with ajab's promise now he couldn't say no.saubhagyavati told dem a way from back door wich will lead dem to forest from where dey can go to the town mangalpur.pratap knocked some more soldiers and made his way with ajabde towards the forest ,while saubhagyavati misled the soldiers to another way..

Precap:prAja romance in air ,initiated by ajabde.get ready for passionate moments between prAja πŸ˜‰Edited by farru786 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
THANK U SO SO MUCH
I M ONLY WAITING U NXT PRT
NW I M HAPPY
N BEAUTIFUL PART

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Posted: 9 years ago
oh dear ! πŸ‘
i'm so glad to read this !! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
awesome thoughts... i want pratap to kill rao maldev and capture marvar , as this is fiction anyways πŸ˜‰... 
continue soonish πŸ˜³πŸ˜³
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow Pratap ne hero ki tarah entry ki aur le gaya Ajabdeh koπŸ‘
Nice Part 
Waiting for next part as it has Praja moments
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Posted: 9 years ago
wonderful!!!
eagerly waiting for precap
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow 
loved it 
LOVE❀️
RADHI😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesomeee too good very nice part waitinggg for next asap.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yaar please update soon. So nice of u ... update ASAP!!!