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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello everyone.. Well I am back with a OS. But this OS no one has requested me. I am writing for myself. So here it goes
Remember the episode where priya buys a wallet for ram but never gave him the wallet. Ya that episode of their Australia honeymoon. So I am making some changes in the episode.. Their honeymoon gets extended for 2 days more due to bad weather conditions. This change I am making.. :P

Priya and ram goes to the mall with daljeet and his wife. 
Ram is talking on the phone with vikram.
R: hi vikram. Hum do din tak nahi aa sakte
V: kyu? Itni pasand ayi Jagah? Kya bhabhi se pyar ho Gaya tumhe?
R: shut up vikram. Weather thik nahi hai yahan.
V: arre ha jab do dil milte hai chup ke chupke ye sab toh Hona hi chahiye. Baat aage badi?
R:Kya aage badi? 
V: apna rishta. 
R: No pls. Ye sab baat band kar yaar. Chal mujhe Jana hai. Bye tc
V: chal bye. Priya k liye ek achha sa gift le Lena. 

Ram cuts the call. He goes to a shop and buys a shifon red color saree and a beautiful set for priya. A diamond and very delicate necklace.

Priya is buying for him a wallet.
Daljeet: parjaiji ye shop chalte hai
P: ha chal. Vaise kaun se color ka wallet?
D: parjaiji brown colour?
P: nahi unke liye black perfect hai. It suits him the best..
D: ha vo bhi bht achha hai.

Priya takes a black and simple wallet. 
Priya pays the money and then ram and priya collide with each other. Daljeet and kuljeet watches this.

D: inme pyar hai lekin Inhe nahi pata. Dekho kaise dekh rahe hai ek dusre ko
K: mujhe toh pehle se pata hai.

Priya and ram are still staring at each other. Now their friendship has become deeper and they too don't have idea of being in love.

Daljeet comes in between now.

D: praji
They come to their senses and go to the car. 

In the car all the time both are teasing our raya.
P: mr kapoor what's in the bag?
Ram gets tensed.
R: nothing some private things. 
Priya remember private sticker and understands.

It's evening they reach their hotel and go to their room

R: priya here take this. This is for u.
P: matlab mere liye?
R: yes. 
P: why did u lie to me?
R: pehle se dono kitna pareshan kar rahe the. So isiliye. Pls peheno isse and u look good in open hair.
Priya blushes so much
P: okie 
She goes to the washroom and changes.

Priya comes out catching her dori of blouse.
P: mr kapoor if u could help me with this. 
Ram goes near her. 
His hand touches her skin. And. She shivers. Ram ties the dori and then takes out the necklace and makes her wear it. She is blushing and loving all this.

Ram hugs her from behind.
P: mr kapoor ye sab?
R: vo we are more than friends now. I have somewhat started understanding you and liking u priya.
Priya gets shocked and she is loving all this from her man.

Priya goes inside and gives him a wallet

P: this is for u. Simple and sweet just like u.
R: thank u priya..

Then ram takes her hand. Let's dance on my fav song..

He switches on the music and the song starts

Aise Na Mujhe Tum Dekho
Seene Se Laga Loonga
Tumko Main Chura Loonga Tumse
Dil Mein Chhupa Loonga[X2]

Hmm Hmm

Dheemi Dheemi Aag Se Ek
Shola Bhadkaya Hain
Door Se Tumne Iss Dil Ko
Kitna Tarsaya Hain (X2)

Mai ab iss dil ke saare
Aarman nikalunga
Tumko Main Chura Loonga Tumse
Dil Mein Chhupa Loonga
Aise Na Mujhe Tum Dekho
Seene Se Laga Loonga
Tumko Main Chura Loonga Tumse
Dil Mein Chhupa Loonga

hmm hmm

Pyar Ke Daaman Mein Chunkar
Hum Phool Bhar Lenge
Raaste Ke Kaante Saare
Door Kar Lenge (X2)
Jaaneman Tumko Apni
Main Jaan Bana Loonga
Tumko Main Chura Loonga Tumse
Dil Mein Chhupa Loonga

Tere Dil Se Ae Dilbar
Dil Mera Kehta Hain
Pyar Ke Dushman Log Mujhe
Dar Lagta Rehta Hain (X2)

Thamlo Tum Meri Baahein
Main Tumhe Sambhaloonga
Tumko Main Chura Loonga Tumse
Dil Mein Chhupa Loonga

Aise Na Mujhe Tum Dekho
Seene Se Laga Loonga
Tumko Main Chura Loonga Tumse
Dil Mein Chhupa Loonga
Hey Hey Hey Hey

Hmm

Main Ab Iss Dil Ke Saare
Armaan Nikaloonga
Tumko Main Chura Loonga Tumse
Dil Mein Chhupa Loonga

Aise Na Mujhe Tum Dekho

Seene Se Laga Loonga
Tumko Main Chura Loonga Tumse
Dil Mein Chhupa Loonga
Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm...

Aise Na Mujhe Tum Dekho..

The song plays and they both dance with the rhythm of the song.
Priya keeps her head on his chest and says softly

I also like you mr kapoor...

Ram gives him a kiss on his forehead.

This is just a time pass OS. Hope u all like it...





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Posted: 9 years ago
Riddhima Dear,
Cute & Romantic OS😃
Can u please continue this OS
It's my Request
Waiting
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Hey why did u stop there pls wrie more n pls ccontinue soon
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This content was originally posted by: rosinagoor

Riddhima Dear,
Cute & Romantic OS😃
Can u please continue this OS
It's my Request
Waiting

thank u.. But I can't promise u
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This content was originally posted by: dhristikpd

Hey why did u stop there pls wrie more n pls ccontinue soon

I can't promise that I would continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
This content was originally posted by: rampriyarocks

thank u.. But I can't promise u


Few seconds before only, you commented like that in FB group na
No Problem, as your wish Dear 😃
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Few seconds before only, you commented like that in FB group na
No Problem, as your wish Dear 😃

ya I did comment. I am having lot of study load. So but when I would be free I would surely.. But not atleast by Monday.. I have a test..
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Posted: 9 years ago
This content was originally posted by: rampriyarocks

ya I did comment. I am having lot of study load. So but when I would be free I would surely.. But not atleast by Monday.. I have a test..


Dear,
Study well 
All the very best for your exam  & do well  👍🏼
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Dear,
Study well 
All the very best for your exam  & do well  👍🏼

thank you so much... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice one riddhu 
short and sweet 
Thanks for pm