MG#3 Kya pyaar karonge mujhse...PT39/PG104/112/TH#4Added

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Prologue

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Maan


Dev: bro geet aapki patni hai

Aap dono toh ek dusre se itna pyaar karte hai

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He : sir sameera sch kh rhi hai

Sameera : Maan I love you

Geet : Maan aap toh hmare rishte ko mante hi nhi

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Please stop all of this...he screamed and close the both eyes...

Maan : leave me alone

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He opened the eyes after few minutes and see around no one is here...he is alone in own room...

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Maan :  ek taraf asa beeta huya kal hai

Jha maine apne pyaar ko tutte huye dekha hai

Aur aaj whi pyaar firse samne khada hai

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Aur dusri taraf asa bita huya kal hai

Jo mujhe yaad hi nhi

Jha mere sbhi apne khte hai

Mere aur geet ki rishte mein bhut pyaar tha

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Pr mujhe kuch yaad kyun nhi....

 

Geet

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Kaise yaad dilayu mein sb kuch maan ko

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Kaise yakin dilayu apne rishte ke

Apne pyaar ka

Unhe na mein yaad hu...

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Na hamara pyaar

Na wo mujhpe thik se barosha krte hai

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Aaj unka bita huya kal ..unka pyaar (kbhi me hi unka sb kuch thi...)

Tears flow down from her eyes...

Unke samne hai

Jisse wo jante hai

Pechante hai

Sayad aaj bhi pyaa...

She stops in mid...

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Nhi wo sirf Geet ke Maan hai

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Mere babaji unhe mujhse durr nhi kr sakte...

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Please babaji


She fall down on her knees on floor

 


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Posted: 10 years ago
CONCEPT

 

I start this story from where maan lost his memory...he forget beloved wife geet...

In conference room, he knows about the marriage with geet..he blame geet but dev tell the whole truth to him...

Geet is your wife bro...geet leave the mention but maan stop her...but not accept her as wife...


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                             Summary

Maan geet ko ghar toh le aata hai

Par usse wo haq aur samaan nhi deta

Jo ek patni ka hota hai

Din bitate gye

Par maaneet ka rishta whi raha

Badla toh bus itna

Maan aur geet ek dusre se baat krne lage

Sam enter in maan's life back, with geet help misunderstanding 

between maan and sam vanished... geet not knows about maan & 

sam relation... But time realizes geet, she do big mistake of her life 

to helping sam, her belief breaking day by day...

Darti hai wo maan ko khone se

Annie ki wapasi kya maaneet ko karib laa paayengi...

 

 


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                                      INDEX



part 29 on page 1

part 30 on page 10 

new entry on page 19

part 31 on page 25

part 32 on page 34

part 33 on page 42

part 34 on page 48

part 35 on page 60

part 36 on page 68

teaser on page 76

part 37 on page 83 

part 38 on page 93

upcoming  on page 100

part 39 on page 104

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Part 29

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At dining table

Maan sees her in mid, but today she not looking him, she tries avoid his gaze ..., he feel guilty, he unknowingly always hurt her...

One voice takes attention all "surprise..."

Geet : annie

Annie : geet

Both hugged each other...

Daadi felt so happy to seeing geet happy full heartily... and maan surprised to see both bonding...

Geet : tune btaya nhi tu aane waali hai

Annie : bata deti

Toh ye hassi miss nhi kr deti

Aur ye toh mera aur daadi ka secret tha

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Kyun daadi

Geet : daadi

Daadi : bala koi annie ki baat taal sakta hai

Annie : no

Daadi : toh bus

Annie meets with daadi then maan...

Annie: bhai

Maine aap sbko bhut miss kiya

Maan : same here

Annie : really bhai

Par mujhe nhi lagta

Maan : kyun

Annie : aap toh geet ko manane mein busy the

Maan : geet ko

Annie : bhai ab bniye mt

Aur ha

Next time aapne geet ko ase hurt kiya na

Mein aapse baat nhi karungi

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Aur geet tum

Maan bhai ki baat ka itna bura maan liya

Hum sbko chodke chli gyi

Tumne bhi asa kiya na dobara

Toh mein tumse bhi baat nhi karungi

Daadi : are bhut huyi purani baatein

Geet : ha annie

Mein toh ab yhi hu

Tum thk gyi hongi

Tum jaake fresh ho jaayo

Mein dinner leke aati hu

Annie : hmm

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Maan : daadi maine annie ke saamne kuch pucha nhi

Par ye kis baare mein baat kr rhi thi

Daadi : maan aap us phlu ko bhool chuke hai

Jis baare mein annie kh rhi thi

Asa bhut kuch hai jo aapko yaad nhi

Par hum aap dono se ek baat khehna chahte hai

Maan : khiye daadi

Daadi : annie ko aapke accident ke baare mein humne kuch nhi btaya hai

Wo nhi jaanti

Aap geet ko bhul chuke hai

Uske liye aap dono perfect couple hai

Aur hum nhi chahte annie ko abhi kuch pata bhi chale

Maan : par kyun daadi

Daadi : aapne dekha nhi wo kitni khush thi

Jb geet chali gyi thi aapki wajh se

Usse kitni takleef huyi thi isse

Aur hum apne beti ki chehre ki khushi firse nhi chin na chahte

Isliye acha honga aap dono usse is baat ka jikr na kare

Maan : daadi

Par ye galat honga

Hum usse sch kyun chupaye

Daadi : sch toh ye bhi hai maan

Geet aapki patni hai

Par fir bhi aap geet ko wo jgh aur samaan nhi dete

Humari ek beti phle hi dukhi hai

Aur hum ab dusri ki aankho mein aansu nhi dekh sakte

Maan : daadi

Par

Daadi : waise bhi

Aajkal aap humari baat kaha maante hai

Jaise aapki marzi

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Geet : annie tumhare exams kaise huye

Annie : ache huye geet

Tum sunayo

Tumhare aur maan bhai ke bich sb thik hai na

Geet : ha annie

Maan come to meet annie but stop on door listening both talk...

Annie : tum sch kh rhi ho na geet

Geet : ha annie

Mein jhooth kyun kahungi

Par tum kyun pcuh rhi ho

Annie : geet pata nhi kyun

Mujhe aaj tum dono ke beech kuch missing laga

Geet : asa kuch nhi hai

Wo maine bhi office join kr liya hai firse

Annie : that's great

Romance ghar pe bhi...aur office mein bhi

Geet : annie

Annie : aur btao na

Bhai ne tumhe mnaya kaise

Geet : mein unse jyada der naraaz kaha rh sakti hu

Bus thoda hurt thi

Isliye tumahre bhai ko thode papad balane pade

Annie : like

Geet : like he became driver

Annie : what ?

Geet : hmm

Par mujhe bilkul acha nhi lagta tha

Jb unhe koi kuch khehta tha

Maine unhe kitni baar waha se jaane ke liye kaha

Par woh nhi gye

Wo tb tak whi rhe

Har dard shte rhe

Sirf mere liye

Toh unki geet kaise naraaz rh sakti thi unse

Usse toh manana hi tha na

Annie : wow

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Koi mujhe bhi milenga na

Itna pyaar krne wala

Geet : jaroor milenga

Ab tum so jaayo

Annie : good night

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Bhai aap

Maan : ha wo mein

Tumse hi baat krne aaya tha

Annie : khiye na bhai

Maan : ab hum kal baat krte hai

Tum thk gyi hongi

Annie : bhai saaf - saaf khiye na

Aap geet ko lene aaye the

Maan : asa kuch nhi hai

Annie : bhai mein sb smjhti hu

Ab le jaaiye geet ko

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Maan : geet

Geet : ji

Maan : wo

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Wo

Geet : maan aapko khehne mein kbse jijak hone lengi

Maan : geet

Tum aapna samaan mere room mein shift kr lena

Geet : maan

Maan : ek minute geet

Mujhe apni baat puri krne do

Annie ko mere accident ke baare mein kuch pata nhi hai

Aur daadi abhi usse kuch batana nhi chahati

Aur mein bhi apni bhehn ke aankho mein aansu nhi dekh sakta

Uski khushi hume sath dekhne mein hai

Toh thik hai

Hum sath rahenge ...sirf uske liye

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Geet isse humare bich kuch nhi badelega

Geet : pata hai maan

Jb phle hi itna sb kuch bdl gya

Aur ab kaha jgh rh gyi hai

Kuch badalne ki

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Annie : daadi humara first plan toh pura ho gya

Par

Daadi : par kya

Annie : hum ye thik toh kr rhe hai na

Daadi : aap khehna kya chahti hai

Annie : daadi

Ase bhai ko majboor krke

Daadi : ab hum kr bhi kya sakte hai

Unhe karib laana hai

Toh ye sb toh krna hi padenga

Dono sath rahenge

Tb hi toh karib aayenge

Nhi toh maan ne itni lambi lakir khich di hai apne rishte ke bich

Kb tak geet ase rahengi

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Ab toh geet ka hosla bhi tutne laga hai

Annie : hmm

Daadi I wish bhai aur geet phle ke jaise khush rhehne lage

Daadi : chahte toh hum bhi yhi hai


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Edited by priya_21 - 10 years ago
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finally their is a bit light in maneet's relationship. i hope dadi and annie's plan worked. geet's all hopes become disappear. i hope maan realize his love for geet. maan hears his own heart's voice. waiitng for next dear
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congrats on the new thread! Lovely update! Poor Geet! Annie arrives bt is unaware of everything! Dadi tells Maan y she did nt tell Annie! Geet n Annie talking! Maan overhears! Maan tells Geet to shift in his room as Annie does bt knw anything! update soon! Well written! pls update Jaane Dil...
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Superb update...Poor Geet..Loved Dadi and Annie...hope their plan will be succeed..waiting eagerly for the next update
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Originally posted by: alekhika20

Lovely partupdtsoon


thanks dear