Jodha Akbar

Jodha Akbar 210: Shakespearian heights DT 50 - Page 6

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lovely post aunty...great to have u back and very happy that u have been pulled back by a fab performance by RT and my god what a rocking performance...i allmost felt like he was screaming in my living room...and i really wish our jodha rani who is famously known for her hour long bhashan had no words to help herself out of such a situation but then we all know when they put logic then you cannot have drama in the serial and then no drama equals no trps...so as u keep telling us all we sld just learn to enjoy the show as it is and expect all logic out of the window.may be for logic+romance we should watch some english serial like castle...great to c u in the forum and hope RT keeps pulling u back to the forum with his spellbounding performance.๐Ÿ‘



Sorry to pre-empt Aunty's reply. But Aunty is very much in the forum. Only she gets lost in her own threads. ๐Ÿ˜†

Sorry again dear. But just couldn't resist replying to this. ๐Ÿ˜‰

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Ah now for a leisurely response to a fabulous post!!! My comments are all in red (yes I know I am stating the obvious here๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†).

This content was originally posted by: sashashyam

Folks,

At the outset, my usual statutory warning. This one, my first in 2 weeks, is NOT  going to be about Jodha Akbar over these 15 days, nor even  about the  Friday  episode as a whole.

Waise even I am realising the need for disclaimers and statutory warnings, what with every opinion being called to the carpet!!!

Folly beyond comprehension: It is not going  to be, if I can help it, about the asinine script, especially about the idiotic and patently dangerous vachan Jodha is forced to renew by her Sujamal Bhaisa who clearly tops her in obstinate and illogical folly . 

The English used to build their follies in their gardens - this brother sister duo is building theirs in Agra - the English must have got the inspiration here perhaps!!!

Or about the Keystone Kops sequence  of Dilawar-Sujamal running away from the Agra palace soldiery,  with his khwaja sera costume coming apart, piece by piece, in a  kind of bizarre strip tease๐Ÿ˜‰, while he flails about with his talwar like a farmer scything hay, laying low one unfortunate Mughal soldier with each sweep.

Ahhh... I am enjoying this turn of phrase for the swordsmanship of this Sujamal - After Jalal's fencing, this did seem pedestrian - and there are paeans being sung for it!!!

Or about the bizarre precap,  clearly intended to make Sujamal seem to be one up on Jalal, since the bodies of the soldiers - presumably despatched by him while escaping from the  prison (thus adding himself to the roll of honour of Agra Palace prison escapees, up there with Abul Mali)  - had been deliberately stacked up to look a taller pile than the similar one shown when Jalal was attacked by Suryabhan's soldiers when he was escaping from Amer with the badly wounded Abdul.

Well, TE's act was at once subtle yet bold, this one seems full of pride and loud. Wonder why????

The precap, complete with Jalal sporting  his  usual furious  look, coupled with the total ineffectiveness of his whole band of courtiers, succeeded in bringing the image of the Mughals  down to rock bottom. It also, with obvious intent, simultaneously sought to elevate Sujamal to near mythic status as the swordsman No. 1 in all of Hindustan.

Perhaps this was the deal with the Karni Sena - to show the Mughals as jokers and the Ameris elevated to mythical status!!!

When he finally  dies, after having saved Jalal's life (this privilege is by now reserved for Jodha's family - first Bhagwandas, in that incredibly inept encounter with bandits  at Sujanpur, next Jodha herself, and now Sujamal๐Ÿ˜‰) he will surely be  decorated with a nice 24 carat halo, only a bit smaller than his sister's will be after the Grand Reconciliation next week.

As Sandhya points, the halo for Sujamal in many threads can give competition to Jodha's halo!!!

Of course, in this process , Sujamal's having compounded the idiocy of his reckless khwaja sera charade (how on earth did he think he was going to unearth the conspirator?By eavesdropping on harem gossip?)  by  the worse folly of exposing his sister to the deepest  disgrace, and punishment,  by not releasing her from the vachan even when Jalal had found them together in her hoojra,   will be totally forgotten.

Ofcourse all will be forgiven and forgotten!!! even the fact that it was Sujamal who got Jodha in this situation in the first place!!! I wish Mainavati comes and puts some sense into Jodha over this Vachan scenario!!!

I am not going to follow the standard practice here and issue the usual disclaimer for having, however inadvertently, hurt anyone's feeling by this take on Sujamal. Those who admire him unconditionally are free to do so. As for me, his bidding farewell to Jodha with a long, soulful look(which must have stoked Jalal's fury by another 100 degrees),  and then  letting  her face the music from her  murderously angry husband, was enough to negate any admiration of his eventual sacrifice. If he had told Jalal, even at the last minute, when the soldiers had got hold of him, who he was, and why he had embarked on this charade, so much anguish and suffering would have been spared for his beloved sister, and there would not have been any need for him to die to save Jalal either.  A man who is awash with pigheaded nobility, but cannot think straight,  is a walking menace, no matter how brave he might be.

It is said that the road to hell is paved with good intentions - how apt for this situation!!!

Shakespearian heights: This post, folks,  will be almost entirely an ode to the 11 minutes and 56 seconds of Rajat's epic  Shakespearan performance that we were privileged to witness on Friday. A performance that truly deserved that mostly  misused adjective, "epic".

Now for the meat of the post!!! Yes it was truly epic!!!

OTT? Of course!: And before we  go any further, let me dispose of the carping remarks that Jalal was  over the top on Friday. Of course he was over the top!  He had to be.  So was King Lear raging on the heath, or Shylock raving against the injustice of the system he lived under, and so would Othello have been had he confronted his beloved Desdemona,  instead of strangling her in her sleep for being, as he believed, unfaithful to him. At such times, the actor has to go over  the top to convey the depths of what he wants to get across. 

Those who are calling this OTT have not seen Nagesh in Server Sundaram, Smita Patil in Mirch Masala, Naseeruddin Shah in the same movie, Kamal in Moondram Pirai, Heith Ledger as Joker, Anupam Kher in Saaraansh, they have not seen the performances of Lakshmi, Sheila, Dilip Kumar, Shivaji and many others. And they definitely have not taken in truly great stage performances!!!

Those carping about him for being OTT would have been delighted with Jodha, who was decidedly  UTT (under the top).

Well I have been restraining myself but no more - Jodha was a log of wood for 90% of the 11 minutes and 56 seconds. The remaining 10%, the response was not in sync with the need of the situation. I may sound harsh but I have been spoilt by RT's virtuoso performance and as a paying audience (yes we all are paying audience) I have a right to expect good performances, if not excellence.

Symbiotic suffering:To revert, this was a performance that, more than ever before with Rajat as Jalal, erased the dividing line between  the actor and the character, but far more difficult and thus far rarer, between the character and the viewers as well. He drew us in with him into the vortex of agony, of despair, of bitter self-contempt, of the searing hurt of the worst betrayal he could ever have suffered,  that had him in its grip. And this for nearly 12 straight minutes of screen time. Which, in cinema, is an eternity.

Yes!!! He erased the line between the character and the viewer!!! He sucked me into the scene and I was as much a part of TE's suffering as TE himself - for 12 minutes I was a part of it, helpless and for 24 hours after, I was reeling with the impact!!! I now really want to see him on stage - as Othello, as King Lear, as Marc Anthony!!!

As  Rajat's Jalal  turns himself inside out,  as he flagellates himself to the pitch of frenzy, bleeding inside from a thousand lacerating whiplashes on his zehen,  we feel his agony as our own. We  suffer with him as he mocks himself, again and again,  pounding  his chest with bitter mirthless laughter, Kitne nasamjh the hum, kitne bewakoof!

Can I say my hands had fisted themselves, with my nails digging into my palms as I was witness to this agonizing self - flagellation?!?!?! 

We too hold our breath as he almost begs Jodha Begum, citing the faith he had had that she could do no wrong, the almost unbelievable  patience he had shown, hoping that one day, she would come to him, trust  him and tell him the truth. Humein yakeen tha ki aap kuch galat nahin kar saktin, humein yakeen tha ki shayad koyi majboori rahi hogi jiski wjah se aap yeh raaz humse chupa rahi hain..Hum har roz yeh sochte the ki shayad aap ab wo baat humein batayengi, par aap har raat jhoot bolkar is shaks se chori chupe milti rahin? Hum ne bahut   koshish ki aap humein yeh baat batadein, par aapne har baar is raaz par parda dala.Kya aapko hum par itna bhi yakeen nahin tha, Jodha Begum, ki aap humein apne dil ki baat bata sakein?

Can I add that I was mentally shaking her to say 1 word, to let him know he was not wrong in keeping faith?!?!?!

Could there be any appeal more  full of pain, of pathos, of  a helpless emotional dependence that overwhelmed all else that a standard issue husband would have felt? Which man, not to speak of a 16th century emperor,  would bend so far to coax a wife -  whom he had seen consorting with a strange man outside the palace in the middle of the night, and who was now meeting the same  man right in her rooms   in the palace,  into which he had sneaked thru a disgraceful trick -  to trust him,  to trust in  his faith in her integrity ? Not one   in a million. Not then, and not even now.

And this was where I just started imagining the time when he would know the truth and I totally shattered with the implications!!! If my spouse ever betrayed me with another and I confronted him with it - I would be hurt beyond measure - But if I accused my spouse of said betrayal where there was none and he kept quiet and let me believe so - I would be shattered on knowing the facts - that he thought so less of me to let me continue in my belief and agony - I would then actually start thinking that he wants me to be so ashamed of myself that I am unable to even meet my own eyes and hence let me continue with my accusations - this for me would be a greater betrayal that an actual betrayal!!!

Why, any king of those days, Rajvanshi or Mughal, would have first killed the supposed paramour right in front of his wife as soon as he saw them both together, and saw  the lingering look of farewell  with which the stranger regarded his wife  as he was dragged away. And seeing   his wife looking guilty enough to invite capital punishment, he would have decapitated her as well with one sweep of his sword. That is how blind rage and jealousy work in an absolute ruler. But not with this Shahenshah-e-Hind.

I dont think anyone needs to go beyond Shakespeare's Othello to know what would happen - and here we have an Oriental Absolute Monarch who showed 'Patience'!!!

He loves  Jodha Begum beyond all reason, and the one desperate desire of his heart is to somehow, anyhow,  convince himself, despite all appearances to the contrary,  that she is as he had believed her to be, paaksaaf, not an adulteress  who would invite her lover to her own rooms a few steps away from where her husband was, under the same roof.

Yes he does and that is why her silence has made her the guilty one in this situation!!! There are times when the lips need to be sealed - this was not it!!!

Bitter love: He does not even hesitate, so desperate is he, to expose the deepest,the most sensitive secret of his heart: his love for her. This is not the stumbling, shy, gentle confession of the night of the dhakka. That was  from a young man new  to love, who wanted to share the wonder, the sheer loveliness of  his unfamiliar jazbaat with his beloved.

This is distilled gall, the corrosive self-contempt  of a man deeply ashamed of his weakness for  a Delilah, who, he now believes, had entered his life only to destroy him  by condemning him  to a lifetime of agony: Aap yahan aayi thin hum par vaar karne k liye, humse badla lene ke liye. Aapne sab ke saamne imaandaar banne ka dikhawa kiya aur zeher pi liya. Aap jaanti thin ki Benazir ka zeher humein ek pal mein maar dega, par aap chahti thin ki hum har din, har pal, roz marte rahein aapke dhoke se!

Kitne nasamajh the hum ki humne apna dil aapke saamne rakha! Yeh bhi nahin dekha ki aap use todne aayi hain. Kitne nasamajh the hum ki humein laga ki aapke dil mein hamare liye koyi jagah  hai...

Had I been in her place I would have stopped him here with my tears and by falling at his feet for the agony I caused him with my 'Lie by omission' - This was no longer a tentative love - this was total capitulation of his heart - and to be at the receiving end of such love is a blessing that only few receive!!!

As his bitter laughter reechoes thru the room: Kitne nasamajh the hum, hazaron begumat ke malik, Mughal sultanat ke Shahenshah, jise Zille-Ilahi kehte hain, izzat uske saamne jhukti hai, aur wo jhuka bhi to aapke saamne, usne izzat bakshi bhi to aapko! Aut aapne usi ko dhoka dediya?

Jalal's face is rigid with  grief and  disgust. Humara nikaah hua hai aapse, phir bhi  humne aapki izaazat ke bina aapko chua nahin.Aur aapne hamari isi sharafat ka fayda uthaya?

And Rajat  pours this gall all over not just Jodha, but us   as well. I for one knew full well that nothing of  what Jalal raged against was true, that Jodha was innocent, if incredibly foolish and self-centred. But as I listened to Rajat's  Jalal lacerate himself again and again with such bitter self-contempt, such   was the mesmerizing power of his performance that I felt as if a much loved  child  had fallen and hurt himself beyond recall. That I needed, somehow, anyhow, to pick him up and make him well again.

Yes Rajat's Jalal made me forget that this was a stupid silly EK serial - and my heart bled for him and with him!!!

So I hung in there with him as  he raged on against Jodha's obstinate silence, her refusal, even when she saw what her silence was doing to the husband who, by his own confession, loves her to the point of obsession, to give him the answer to his one question Who is this man and what  is he to you?

As he tears  into her Rajvanshi guroor, junoon, jazbe, usool, which he had always respected but which now lay in tatters. As he demands to know what it was about her that had drawn this shaks , in defiance of all those Rajvanshi mores, to his death: her love for him and/or her hatred of her husband?

This - her love for the stranger / her hatred for her husband - had me gasping - since I was already seeing the heartbreak the knowledge of the truth would bring for him - and though there may not be love for another, how does one get over the feeling of possible hatred for self from the beloved?!?!?!

Death from a thousand  cuts: As he finally accuses her openly  of  being an adulteress,  who had not let him, her legally wedded husband,   come near her, touch her, establish a relationship with her, love her, and had pushed him away with a dhakkabut had  invited a gair mard into her rooms. Sharm aati hai, Jodha Begum? Ek gair mard ke saath naajayaz rishta banana mein aapko sharm nahin aayi, par use qubool karne mein sharm aati hai?

Mujhe aayi sharm - aur mera sir abb bhi sharm se jhuka hai - iss baat par ki Jodha ne uss ka apmaan kiya jiska gunaah sirf itna hai ki usne usse mohabbat ki aur uss par yakeen kiya- lekin woh uske yakken ko iss baat se nahin tod rahi ki uska kisi gair mard se koi najaayaz rishta hai - par iss baat se tod rahi hai ki woh usse sach se mehroom rakh kar khud ke nazar mei gira degi!!!

Coelho says that saying No or being selfish when needed or taking is not always a vice and saying yes or being selfless or constantly giving is not always a virtue - can someone tell this woman that!!!

I could see that in all this, it was not Jodha who was suffering the  most, for despite the horrendous shock of the accusation, she was sustained by the  certitude of her innocence. It was Jalal, who was  being subjected to death from a thousand cuts, self-inflicted, true, but deepening and bleeding all the more with every instant of Jodha's  silence that could, to him, mean only  one thing, her black guilt.

Oh his agony has only just begun!!! As I have pointed when he gets to know the facts - I dont want to see him shatter with the thought that she could do this to him!!!

It was as if a kaleidoscope had been turned upside down in his mind.  Jodha's  image there, as the paaksaaf, loyal, infinitely courageous hunar ki khaan he had come to love, was reversed in an instant. Now everything she had ever done, per se and for him, was seen as if thru a distorting mirror, and the image was ugly, very ugly.

..Kab se chal raha hai yeh, humare nikaah se pehle as us se bhi pehle?..Bataayiye, jab aap humse nikaah kar rahi thin, to kya wohi shaks aapke zehen mein tha? Jab aapne humein dhakka diya, toh uski wajah kya is shaks ke liye mohabbat thi? Hum aaj tak sochte aaye ki jab aapne zeher piya aur maut se ladkar wapas lautin to hamare liye, par ab humein samajh aaya ki aap is shaks ke mohabbat ki khatir wapas lautin...

And then the same bitter refrain: Kitne nasamajh the hum, kitne bewakoof the hum! Aur aap kitni shatir!

As his laments, for that is what they  were, laments for  a lost love that had been tainted and soiled even befor e it had blossomed, gather strength and fury, I was consumed with a sense of helplessness. And a sense  of inchoate rage against the  folly of the woman who sat there watching  all this, seeing her lion of a husband being reduced to  a self-hating wreck, with his soul poisoned by the conviction that he had given his heart at long last, but to whom? To, as her silence forced him to  believe,  a traitress of  the worst, most deceitful, most shameless kind.

Imagine his laments when he realises that she was never so and she knew she was innocent yet let him believe her to be all that he called her with her silence and his cry that had he gone ahead and killed that brother of hers, believing the worst due to the very same silence - imagine his dasha - I am dying a thousand deaths just imagining that!!!!

She could have turned the kaleidoscope back  with an anguished protest:  Hum paaksaaf hain, Shahenshah, aap hum par vishwas karein. Ek aakhri baar vishwas karein!Humne aapse koyi  vishwasghaat nahin kiya. Hum abhi vachan ke bandhe hain, Shahenshah, par hum aapko kabhi dhoka nahin de sakte!

She could have grabbed his hand  and held on to it no matter what he did to try and shake her off. She could have wept and raved and ranted about her  innocence,  and fallen at his feet in a paroxysm of self-exculpation. She could have abandoned her ego to save her love, for now she knows that he loves her, and it is her silence that is killing that love, and she knows that she loves him too.  

Yes she could have - and it is only becoz the Universe is with him that her brother escaped in time from that death sentence - the Universe did not want his hands to be bloodied for Jodha's folly - all thanks to the fact that he had the courage to face his fears and no thanks to this woman's fears that she is incapable of facing yet!!! Love?!?! What Love are we talking of that she feels for him?!?!?! She does not even know the meaning of that word!!! She has no clue how painful this feeling is!!!! She is in Romance not in Love - not yet - Wonder if she will ever get there now?!?!?!?!

And then which woman would let herself be accused of adultery - the worst insult imaginable, and that too from her own husband - without saying a word in her own defence? Surely this mistress of sophistry could have found some way out,  some trick of language to keep  her idiotic vachan and still prevent her husband from slipping into this morass of bitter anguish?

And this will kill him even more!!!!

But she does  nothing, and continues to stare at him with wide eyes that say nothing. I felt, even more than Jalal, like shaking her till her teeth rattled and the truth was forced out of her. Not so much for her - she had, to a large extent,  brought her fate on herself - but for him. I could not bear to see him chatpatate huye like a soul in torment, hiding his suffering behind a smokescreen of rage.

And I wanted to shake it out of her to spare him the worser heartache that I am now anticipating!!!

So he threatens her with the most cruel death possible for the man he takes  to be her paramour,  and that too in front of  her ;  his face alight with near hatred as  he asserts Humein yakeen hai ki aap royengi, aapko dard hoga. The savagery of the threat being lost in the almost pleading demand that followed Isliye keh rahein hai, jawaab dijiye humein!JAWAAB DIJIYE!!!

But  it does  not work, and his hand is cut as he smashes it agains the wall in rage, and it  bleeds.  She reaches  instinctively for the bleeding hand, but he now cannot even bear her to touch  him, for her very touch is as if it was acid searing his skin. So  he shoves her away to the other corner of the room in a spasm of violent rejection.

It was more an act of protecting her from his rage than an act of rejection and also an act of desperation - to reject her perfidy if he can.

The last roll of the dice: He has by now nearly exhausted every trick he could think of  to get her to tell him that no, she had not betrayed him, that she  had  not  committed zinakari,  that she had not done all this, or any of this, to take revenge on him  and satiate her hatred of the man who had married her against her will.

But he has  not yet quite given up. He tries once more, hoping against hope that she would, even at this late stage,  throw him a lifeline, and drag him out of this whirlpool into which he is sinking.  Khuda ki kasam, Jodha Begum, aap batayengi to hum sunenge! He boxes  her in with kasams on  all those she held dear - Kanha, Kaali Maa, her parents. It is a strange echo of his earlier appeal:Agar aap mein insaniyat baaki hai, toh sach batayiye!

All he wanted was 1 word - that his yakeen was not false, that his heart was not wrong - why o why could she not have given him that?!?!?!?!

The very strangeness of his first question shows the extent of his desperate need to  see her redeem herself, any which way. For what sense does it make for him to ask her whether she knew the man she had been meeting outside the palace at the dead of night, and now in her own rooms? He just  wants her to say No, I do not know him!, however incredible that might sound. And when she does not oblige him and confesses that yes, she knows him, Jalal cannot even bring himself to do what 99 men out of a 100 would have done, hit her.

And they call him abusive - and they are all 'Honorable women'!!!

The rest follows, as the night follows the day, as Jodha confesses that yes, she had known that shaks since her childhood (why not  add three words, you foolish woman, mere bhaisa hain? ), that she loves him. And so, finally,  the curtain falls on this act of a Greek tragedy.

And what a tragedy it is - all self inflicted by Jodha on herself and on TE, thus making it self inflicted even for him!!!

Jalal is a creature  of extremes,  and his emotions are all kingsize. So he roars full throatedly  in his agony, as he did when his Khan  Baba was no more, and takes his rage out,  not on the woman who was its cause, but on the inanimate objects in the room.

And they call him abusive - and they are all 'Honorable Women'!!!

Noble closure: Someone had written the other day, in all seriousness,  that Jalal is an abuser who hits Jodha. I wonder which serial that person had  been watching (there are plenty of hitters and slappers scattered across the other  soaps on Zee). On Friday, any abusive husband would have pummelled his wife black and blue. And any king of those days, faced with such a situation, would most likely have killed her on the spot.

I was proud of Jalal, who, despite his black fury and terrible sense of betrayal, managed to contain his rage and did not take it out on Jodha.

He restrained himself thrice - yet they call him abusive - and they are all 'Honorable Women'!!!

Instead, he turns to his only refuge, bitter, self-mocking laughter at his having made himself so sharmsaar, and the Mughal sultanate as well. I have  rarely seen anything as heartbreaking as the smile on his face as he tells Jodha that, and adds, Bahut hunar hain na aapme..lekin yeh badla lene ka aapka yeh hunar sabse niraala hai!

But the helplessness, the crippling sense of loss in love, wells forth again:Humein aapse mohabbat ho gayi thi , Jodha Begum.. Hum  aapme ek mohabbat ki  roshni dekhne lage the..Aur aapne apni zinakari se us roshni ko naapaak kar diya..

He is by now at the end of his tether, and all he wants is to get away from her presence, to escape the searing pain the  very sight of her gives him. So he formally releases her from  the bond of  marriage with him, and tells her  to leave Agra. As Jalal  turns and walks out of her room, all that he feels  can be seen in his body language, in the stoop of his shoulders, in the weariness of his stride.

In his defeat, he was victorious - he picked up the shattered pieces of his soul and started putting them back again - becoz he is not just a lover - he is a son to a mother, a husband to his wives, a father to his Khan Baba's son, a brother to his siblings, but most of all he is the Emperor who is the one and only light of benevolence for his subjects.

In the closure he chooses, Jalal  is being merciful far beyond the norms of those days.He does not imprison Jodha, or shame her publicly in the Diwan-e-Khas, as he  might well have done. He probably  feels that to do so would be a tauheen of his love for her, however soiled and betrayed that emotion might be. 

There can be no greater love than this, which can forgive even the worst betrayal and stay true to itself, retaining  its dignity and its depth.

Yes, he is being merciful but most of all he is being courageous and he has let go the need to possess - the ultimate act of the lover - one who truly loves and understands love!!!

Coup de Maitre:I do not how far I have been able to do justice to Rajat's coup de matre, a turn so masterly and so dazzling that it left me, for once, bereft of words, and I had to cast about to find them. Perhaps not too well, for it needed the Bard of Avon himself to  describe this Shakespearian performance.  

No words can ever do justice to such performances, Shyamala - we will always fall short in our reviews. But the fact that all who watched it were affected by it is proof of its impact!!!

Rajat must have done it at one take; having worked himself up to that pitch, he could not have interrupted it to do the scene in parts. I am not over fond of the CVs, but I must say that for once, the script gave Rajat all that he could have asked for as a performer.

Yes and now I know why Paridhi was upset!!!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

What would I not have given to see him live, on the stage, in this scene! He could never have got such a 11 minutes and 56 seconds all  to himself  -  seeing that his heroine was mostly passive, like a prop -  in any film, only in the theatre.  Or in Othello, where he could have let himself go even more, seeing that his Desdemona would have been angelically asleep! Now this is something that I am dying to see him do!!!

Jodha: Unbearable silence:  There is nothing much I have to say about Jodha, except that I wish the script had let her go at least halfway to match the depth, the power and  the fury of Jalal. As she was shown, Jodha was pathetically lacking in resourcefulness, her trademark loquaciousness, in  emotion and in depth.

There should have been a helpless agony in her face and her eyes, black  despair as she sees her  relationship with the man she  claims to love in tatters, terror at the awful fate that awaits the brother whose life she seeks to protect by adhering to the vachan he has forced on her. There should have been terrible  anguish at what she was putting her husband through, the hell of the betrayal of his innermost feelings into which he has been thrown and from which  only she can rescue him.

There was nothing of any of this, bar a few shots of a pleading look in her lovely, tear-filled eyes.

In fact, I  do not know how much Jodha understood of the soul-searing  agony her husband was going thru. Not much,  judging from her reactions. This is not surprising, for as  I  described her once, she is like a clear, burbling  brook, transparent and without any dark nooks and corners, but  shallow, simple,  and uncomprehending of deep passions. Her face yesterday did not indicate much grasp of what this betrayal (as he was bound to see it) by the wife he had come to love does to Jalal. 

If I had been in her place, it would have been what I was doing to this husband who loves me that would have mattered the most.  Besides, was that not the most sacred of the vachans she had ever taken, her marriage vow  that for her, her husband , jis se hi uska soubhagya hai, would come above all else? How is it that she has either forgotten that vachan, or ranks it below the one now forced on her by her Bhaisa? Strange and totally  incomprehensible.

Most of all, Jodha should have had something substantive, telling, convincing, and appealing to say in her own defence, and  to try and  rescue Jalal from his raging depression. This is, after all, the bhashan ki malika,  the woman who could, by a clever play on words that defied logic but sounded convincing, managed to  get the besotted Jalal time and again to do what he was dead against - about Bakshi Banu, about Sharifuddin, about Tasleem. It seems that this hunar too has failed her at the most crucial moment,  just as Karna, in the heat of the battle against Arjuna at Kurukshetra, could not remember  the mantra for the Brahmastra.

The editing of Jodha's shots was also bewildering at times. When Jalal is declaiming about the hazaar  begumaat in his harem, and  lists the various reasons for which he married them, ending with bachpan ki dost,  ie Ruqaiya,  Jodha stares at him with  shock  and fear in her eyes. Why on earth would  she look afraid at that point?

Then again,  when he says, at the very end, Humein aapse mohabbat ho gayi thi, Jodha Begum, she is completely out of sync,  still nodding her head in negation from the previous shots, and they retained that!

Apart from her pretty much solo emotion shots throughout, the way she cries at the very end, after Jalal has left, is  very odd. Here was an occasion which called for grand tragedy, for stormy wailing and lamentations, and Jodha sounds, with her Aanh..aanh..aanh, for all the  world, to quote my young friend Anne (AJSharma79), as if she had failed in her mid-term exams!

Paridhi should take the CVs and the director to task for having shortchanged her so badly in such a major, climactic, demanding scene. She would not have been able to match Rajat at his superb best, true, but with a good script, she would have done vastly better than she was allowed to do on Friday.

I will not comment on Jodha - it will give me ulcers - just for Paridhi's performance - she maybe otherwise good but in those 12 minutes she was way below par in performance - and though she is otherwise a capable actress she needs to realise that she is facing brilliance - and in such company, capable and good are just not good enough.

The Great Vachan Factor: There has been  a lot written about Jodha's helplessness because of the vachan she had given Sujamal. Leaving aside the overriding loyalty she should have had to  her marriage vows, as noted above, let us see the logic of what Jodha does.

She was forced to take that vachan on her brother's head, and the reason she clings to it is because he will, she believes, die if she breaks it. It is this  belief that underlies the weight attached to a vachan/kasam.

What was Sujamal's  original reason, tenuous as it was, for the vachan he had  made Jodha take? That Jodha should not get into trouble by being seen to meet an enemy of the Mughal sultanate. Now, that vachan has been renewed, her hand on his head, for  exactly the same reason , unhe tum par sandeh  ho jayega.

But  once Jalal has seen the fake khwaja sera in Jodha's rooms, all this went automatically out of the window, and there  was no longer any rationale for this vachan . Sujamal, who is presumably not a dunce, should have realised at once what Jalal was bound to think as soon he saw them together, if he was not told that Sujamal was her brother. Why, if Bharmal has seen a strange man in his daughter's rooms, he would have executed both the daughter and the intruder. Remember his reaction to Jodha's moonlight boatride with Suryabhan, her fiance? He wanted to strangle her.

Anyone, Rajvanshi or not, would know what any husband would think of his wife under such circumstances  if the situation was not clarified at once. So why does Sujamal  not release Jodha from the vachan at once? Instead,  he departs after a long, soulful look at Jodha that, as noted above,  must have raised Jalal's fury by 100 degrees.

Let us for a moment  leave aside Sujamal's unbelievable folly in  leaving her to face the music from a murderously angry husband. Let us stick to Jodha alone. Why does she not ask Sujamal to release her from the vachan, since the situation was bound to be fatal for him if she stayed silent?

For  if she keeps quiet, she is condemning the very brother whose life she wants desperately to save - which is why she will not break the vachan -  not just to certain death, but to  the most horrendously painful death that Jalal can think up, and this in front of her.

Whereas, if she confesses that he is her brother and also why he came into the palace  as a khwaja sera, all will be well. Maybe Sujamal will get a token punishment, but his life will be saved, not to speak of Jodha's honour and her nascent relationship with Jalal.


So how does what Jodha is doing make any sense? I am here leaving out entirely the terrible anguish she is inflicting on the husband who, she now knows from his own mouth , loves her.  Anguish that is tearing him apart, and will do so for the rest of his life unless he learns the truth somehow.

As noted above, Jalal might well have killed her on the spot as an adulteress. Most kings of that ear, Mughal or Rajvanshi, would have done precisely that.

Now, how much time  would  it have taken her to say Woh mere Sujamal Bhaisa hain aur woh mujhe batane aaye the ki mahal ke andar hi koyi aapki jaan  lena chahta hai.? 10 seconds? She is  never at  a loss for long, edifying, convoluted speeches. Why not blurt out this one single line and save her Bhaisa's life and her own honour? Instead, she behaves exactly like the worst kind of 1960s Hindi film heroine.

Ahhh...the vachan. All I can say is, TE has Madame Universe in his corner - that she ensured Sujamal did not die by his hands - warna I shudder over what TE's agony would be if he had given that sure shot death to Suja bhaisa and then got to know the facts!!!

What lies ahead: I simply do not care, I am afraid.  The last part of the Friday episode  was back to the old format, with Jalal pacing furiously up and down the Diwan-e-Khas, and then running to dispatch Sujamal, looking exactly like the Energiser bunny. The last shot of his glaring eyes as he contemplates that pile of corpses, so artistically arranged,  was hardly edifying.

I preferred to go back of  the 11:56  minutes of the previous segment, harrowing as it was. I hope The Great  Reconciliation Scene is not too mawkish, and that Jodha is given something substantial to do  there at least. I have grown fond of her from her Kajri days, and I want that girl back!

There is a new TT spoiler that Jodha too apologises for hiding the facts about Suja Bhaisa - if this does happen I for one will be happy for small mercies - what will still gall would be that TE kneels and Jodha does not - so here is my hope that she too kneels with him.

The New Promo: One pertinent point, especially  for those waiting with bated breath for The Kiss. If Jalal  is going to kiss Jodha, he is going to have to figure out in advance how to deal with her cartwheel of a nose ring. I do not see how anyone could kiss a woman sporting that thing.๐Ÿ˜‰

And in the final Grand Embrace scene in the promo, Jalal,  who is only as tall as Jodha , looks to be a good   half a head taller. This is probably what is meant by her helping his all round growth!๐Ÿ˜‰

 

Shyamala B. Cowsik


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What a beautiful piece of lovely writing , Shyamala di. I totally agree with each word you say. You're right , may be things are happening too fast for Jo to clearly think it over in her head , plus she just doesn't understand what Jalal is going through . I've always believed that Jodha's love for Jalal could never match with Jalal's. She loves her calmly , naturally , like we do eating n breathing , it is almost habitual. I've my doubt whether she even understands what betrayal can do to a man.
But Jalal has fallen for her in a kind of surrender , after fighting with his inner demons a lot, despite himself , so to speak. The depth n passion of that kind of love is completely of a different tone n tempo, compared to Jodha.
I really don't know what she was really thinking to keep her mouth shut even at this point , as ,even if she puts her beloved brother ahead of her husband this time, which she in fact does, how the hell can he be saved , as far as she knew , from the death that is coming for him, as grimly promised by Jalal as a grim reaper ??
On a funny note, I think, if Jalal was emotionally some what less exuberant than he was in his torment, Jo would've understood to some extent what was happening inside him. Jalal in is full emotional glory just flies far above her head, n she just couldn't wrap her head around some thing so much so big..
Ohh , most important thing, your new display pic is beautiful. You're a beautiful lady, inside out. 
Take care auntie. ๐Ÿค—
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Ah now for a leisurely response to a fabulous post!!! My comments are all in red.



Very well said...

A too hope SHE apologizes to HIM for making him question his own sanity, hiding things from him and most importantly insult his love for her. Then only meri aatma ko shanti milegi ..๐Ÿ˜ญ

Sam
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We could well have 'Bhajan Mandali replaced by 'Honourable Women'. What an apt term for an apt situation.
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Adi

We could well have 'Bhajan Mandali replaced by 'Honourable Women'. What an apt term for an apt situation.



I know Sandhya. Since the day I have seen the term abuse associated with TE I am seeing RED!!! 

For all their talk of battered women, they truly don't understand abuse or the fact that it has nothing to do with gender - they all need to read Foucault!!!
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Thank you so very much, my dear Divya. It was somehow tough to do; I had to watch that segment 5 times, and that was bad enough, but the actual writing was not easy either. Anyhow, I am glad I did not disappoint you.

You never disappoint Aunty! Thanks for all the effort for us. I could only watch the scene once. 

As for your comments, I agree with them in toto. Especially about that mohabbat bit. She was awful, the idiotic woman.

Glad you agree. The mohabhat question made me cringe. 

Shyamala Aunty

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Yes, my poppet, I timed it. I record the episodes on the HD  of my DVD recorder and edit out the ads before rewatching them. So, I can tell the exact duration of any  segment. This one was exactly 11 minutes, 56 seconds.

God, it was a very, very tough scene from the point of view of the actor's craft, his technique. He had to maintain the emotional pitch, raise and lower it by turns, like  a sine curve, modulate his voice to match, and remember all those lines perfectly, for the slightest hesitation would have called for a retake from the beginning, to maintain the emotional continuity.  The boy can do anything.

The only other such scene I can remember was that of Mohit Raina as Jalandhar in DKD Mahadev, when he was holding his dead wife in his arms, talking to her  and refusing to acknowledge that she was no more, and then again as he sits by the side of her burnt out  pyre, running his hand thru the cold ashes and once again talking to her. That was at the other end of the OTT  scale, very  soft, but it gave me goose pimples.

But it was not this kind of one take 12 minute monologue, with a blank-faced woman who gave him nothing to play off. It is but rarely that one gets to see anything like this onscreen. We were lucky. And if he had had an even halfway good co-actor, the scene would have been so much better. As it was, as I  wrote, one wanted to pick him up and make him well again.

Yes, they must have dropped her on her head as a baby, probably from the third floor (I do not suppose the palace at Amer had more than 3 stories).

As for the cartwheel, yes, technically speaking, but hardly a comfortable option, don't you agree? I have finally seen the promo, and he kisses her right cheek. I never understood all this desperate expectations and fuss over a kiss, but in the end,  what they showed was more logical at this stage of their relationship.

Shyamala Aunty

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Aunty about the kissing question you raised...

 
He could actually kiss her through the cartwheel...its big enough to fit the lower quarter of his face!!!
 
I hope so badly that the Kajiri Jodha will come back soon. she was such an enjoyable treat for the tired eyes.  In that track, she told him that I notice that you get hungry often and like to eat every few hours...she through her own feminine instict noticed things about her husband.  Which is what naturally women do.
 
But this Jodha is so completely foolish and blinded by her vachan that she cannot see the complete breakdown of his poor heart? if a many showed even half of the emotion Rajat's Jalal did in that 11 minute and 56 seconds (really? you timed it??) I would have hugged him if just to release him of his pain.
 
She feels the pain of every other soul, even unborn ones, but not the very alive and very in pain husband of hers?
 
Her parents dropped her on her head during infancy...only logical explanation for this.

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As usual lovely post Shyamala๐Ÿ‘
U kno wat, since this track started, I was slowly drifting towards Jalal and against Jodha. But seeing members here support Jodha so much (except Adia, Jeannie, Sandhya, Shweta, fatma, Trips), I started doubting myself ki kaash mein partial tho nahi ho rahi hoon towards Jalal and tat I am failing to understand another woman's POV๐Ÿค”

But after reading ur post, I am relieved to see that I am not prejudiced in this๐Ÿ˜†.

I saw the eppy today 3 times and man, wat a performance. I had only one wish tats unfulfilled, during all that ranting and shouting I wished one lone tear wud fall from Jalal's eyes. Tat wud hv snatched it for me. But still one cud see the dampness in Jalal's eyes through out the confrontation. And I felt so sad, mad and bad.

I don't want to talk abt Jodha/Paridhi cos thr is not much to talk abt her and everyone else here have already said abt her.

I wish I could do the "Eternal Sunshine of spotless mind" to Jalal. It was tat heartbreaking to see him so down.

  - Krishi

P.S: Hope u get well soon
P.P.S: U look like Asha Parekh in ur profile pic๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Great post as always Shyamalaji. I am as big a supporter of jodha as u seem to be of jalal's character and I did mention my point of view in the last post of yours. I however do agree that even though she was bound by the vachan given to sujamal who by the way I completely blame for this whole mess specialy the second vachan which could not serve any purpose at all, however jodha could have tried in a round about way to talk to jalal even of only to mention that she was innocent but bound by a promise hence unable to clarify. Now whether he would have been ready to accept anything other than the whole truth in that point of time is doubtful but she at least on her part should have tried instead of being silent. 
I do hope that once the misunderstanding clears they don't forget abt jalal's confession of love n the same friendship track starts once again with both of thm praising each other n being nauseatingly sweet. The cvs have a track for forgetting their own past writings n if can be quite frustrating n I do hope that in the scene where jalal is shown apologising to jodha we also see jodha apologising for not telling him n hurting him in the process.