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Waiting for update...nice teaser
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Nice teaser!! Now all family knows that Geet is Maan's wife..What happen Meera?
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simply amazing
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Behaari Meera
Uski to samajh me hi nahin as raha ki ho kya raha hai
Why Maan is behaving with her like that
Kaash she gets her memory back soon
Update soon Indu
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      Updating...๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Thank you Mayu for the beautiful Banner...



Hello friends...Here is the next update of Humsaaya... 


Part 23...


Geet - main toh... Geet was confused how is Rb responsible for her accident...she wanted to know what Rb did...pehle yeh Batao ki Rb ne Kya kiya...

 

Rb explained her what he did... And geet started laughing... Maan and veer just came at that time...

 

Anu - itna kyun has rahi ho geet...Rb ne Jo kiya Woh galat tha...dekho tumhara Kya hua...agar tum Nahi jaati toh Ali bhai jaate aur unhe bhi chot lag sakti thi...

 

Geet - Nahi Anu...RB ka prank sunke ke mujhe hasi aagayi...yeh toh bachoo wali prank hain...Maine bhi issi tarah tej veerji aur meera di ko darna ya tha ...bhoot banke jab main 15 saal ki thi...Woh yaad aagaya...meera di itna darr gayi thi ...ki unhone mujhse do din baat Nahi ki... she started laughing remembering her prank in their purani haveli...

 

Anu - Oh..no...tum bhi...Anu whined ...mujhe ek aur prankster Nahi chaiye ghar mein...


Geet - daro mat Anu...Maine Woh sab chod diya...uss incident ke baad...toh tum log safe ho...aur ek baat mujhe Nahi maloom tha ki Rb ne aisa kuch kiya...kyun ki mujhe aise kuch Nahi dikha waha...

 

Rb - matlab...

 

Maan came forward and asked ...toh tum waha kaise pohunchi geet... Aur kya hua waha...tum kaise gir gayi...aur chot kaise lagi

 

Geet - maan waha mujhe Kisi ne Nahi bheja...main khud gayi thi... Actually yeh hai ki kal Anu aur Rb tum sab ki bachpan ke baatein bataye angel ko...main bhi wahi thi...aur kaise aap log khelte the... Phir Anu ne bataya aapke basket ball ke bare mein...Jo aap ko dadaji ne diya tha... Aur aapki pehle bike Jo papaji ne diya aapke boards ke first aane pe...maan eyes moistens listening about the bike...aur Anu ki cycle ..Jo papaji ne kahi se mangaya tha...aur bhi bohut saari baatein batayi Anu ne... Aur angel ne kaha ki usse Woh cycle dekhna hain... Mujhe bhi Woh sab cheezein dekhni thi...

 

Dinner ke baad Rb ne Ali bhai se kaha woh cycle nikal ne ke liye Jo store mein tha... lekin Ali bhai ko dadi ne bulaya aur woh chale Gaye...phir main store mein gayi woh sab dekhne... Maine ek darwaza khola...aur andar gayi...phir light ke liye switch board dhoond rahi thi aur mera dupatta door ke ek nail se lag gaya... Maine usse Zor se kheencha... Dupatta paht Gaya aur main kheechne ki force se peeche gayi...mera balance Gaya aur gir gayi...mera cir Kisi se takraya...aur shayad main behosh hogayi... Geet completed...

 

Maan sighed and came closer to her and said aisi kyun karti ho geet... Subah tak wait Nahi kar sakti Kya...

 

Geet - main apne aap ko rok Nahi paayi maan...aur aap bhi busy the...ek call tak Nahi kiya ... Aur Main aapko miss karr rahi thi...she said last line in a whisper...


Maan remembered ... His encounter with Inder and Sanjeev Mehta ... And his talks with his friends...

 

Maan - Main busy tha geet...something unexpected came and I couldn't call you... Ab main samajh Gaya hoon...Agli baar galati Nahi hogi...

 

Anu, veer and Rb were gaping at both of them...this is new to them...their brother giving explanation to some one... But they know geet is not some one and they could see the love in their eyes... They are happy that their maan bhai got his life in the form of love...his geet...

 

Maan's mobile rang and they were brought back from their thoughts...

 

Maan attended the call...dadi has called him...he heard what dadi said and cut the call...

 

He turned to geet and said... Lo geet ek aur pareshani ... Gayatri dadi is coming tomorrow ...

 

Geet panicked...Kya... dadi is coming...no... Maan kuch kijiye...unhe kaise bhi rok a hoga...

 

Maan - Haa geet kuch sochenge... Pehle ghar chalte hain...

 

Anu, veer and Rb were confused why geet is panicking hearing about her dadi's arrival...

 

On the way Anu asked Geet... Geet itni pareshaan kyun ho... woh tumhari dadi haina...toh aane do unhe...


Geet - Nahi Anu... abhi nahi... Unhe pata nahi hain ki Meera di yaha hain... agar woh meera di ko dekhengi toh dono ke liye theek nahi hoga... pata nahi dadi kaise react karengi... agar woh gussa hogayi toh unki tabiyat bigad jaayegi... aur Meera di ko kuch kehdiya toh meera di ko bhi kuch hosakta hain... hum abhi risk nahi le sakte...


They reached KM and geet got down... Dadi who was present there came forward and hugged her... Aapne Hume Dara diya geet...ab kaisi hain aap...

 

Geet cutely smiled and said...sorry dadi...meri wajah se aapko takleef hui... Ab main theek hoon...


Angel peeped from behind... Geet saw her and called her... Angel came slowly...


Angel - I am sorry Pari... Apko meri wajah se chot lagi... Papa ne bohut daanta... she said...


Geet  - Arre nahi angel aap ki wajah se nahi lagi chot mujhe... main hi girgayi thi... meri adat haina... she said and winked... 


Angel looked at Geet's bandage on  her forehead and asked pain horaha hain kya...Angel got scared seeing the bandage...


Geet touched her bandage and said thoda... agar angel mujhe ek kiss degi toh woh dard bhi nahi hoga... she said cutely...


Angel came forward and kissed geets injury...Geet said  thank you angel... mera dard choo hogaya... 


Every one laughed at the cute girls...


Maan asked them to go inside... But dadi stopped him... And called naina... Naina came with arti... She did the arti and hugged her... She whispered welcome home bhabhi... Geet looked at her wide eyed...

 

Naina looked at veer...geet got that veer might have called her and told about her being maan's wife...

 

Geet and maan went inside... Meera came and enquired about geet's condition...geet replied she is good...

 

Dadi - dinner ka time hogaya hain... Chalo sab dinner karlijiye...

 

Everyone had dinner... Geet had light dinner...after dinner dadi called all of them as she wanted to talk to them...Meera was also there...


Dadi - Gayatri zidd karr rahi hai ki Woh geet ke lene yaha aayegi... Toh aap Kya kehti hain beta...

 

Geet - aap unko rokiye dadi.. Waist bhi Hume...she stopped and then said... Mujhe jaana haina ...toh Woh kyun aaye... Unki umar kehisab se itna travel karna theek Nahi hoga...

 

Dadi - Maine unse kaha... Lekin Woh maanne ke liye tayyar hi Nahi hain...

 

Maan - dadi... Yeh puja ab karna zaroori hain Kya...Kya kuch din ke liye post pone Nahi karsakte Kya... He asked...

 

Veer also supported maan...

 

Dadi - sochaiyaga bhi mat maan... Gayatri toh ab pehle se zyaada adi hai apni baat par...ki pooja honi hi chahiye... Yeh bhi sahi hain... Geet ko kuch bhi hosakta tha... Gayatri ka kehna hai ki yeh sab issi liye hua kyun ki geet ki kundli ke hisab se... And she stopped herself... As geet pressed her knee... Dadi turned and looked at geet... Geet showed meera through her eyes... Dadi nodded... 

 

Dadi - Woh sab chodiye maan ... Pooja toh ab zaroor hogi... Aur gayatri ki zidd ko aap Nahi jaante... Haina geet bte...

 

Meera in a trance said... Haa dadi... Gayatri dadi toh bohut ziddi hai...yeh baat mujse behtar kaun janta hain...

 

Geet smiled... Now she is confident that one day meera will regain her memory... She looked at maan... Maan nodded his head...

 

Maan - Lekin kaise dadi... Geet aise kaise jaayegi...

 

Dadi - Jana toh hoga maan... Doctor ne bhi toh kahana ki koi complication Nahi hain... Kyun Nahi jaa sakti...

 

Geet - hum jaayenge dadi... Geet said...

 

Maan was annoyed and stood up ... Agar aapne decision le liya hain toh mujhe kyun bulaya hain... Main jaa raha hoon. Mujhe kaam hai... And he was about to leave...

 

Dadi - baith jaayiye maan... Hamari baat abhi poori Nahi hui... Maan sat down...

 

Dadi continued... Aap toh waise bhi jaane wale the na maan ...Amritsar humari taraf se pooja ke liye... Ab hum chahte hain ki aap geet ke Saath jaaye... Usse aisi halat mein akele Nahi bhej sakti...

 

Maan didn't give any response... So dadi continued... Kyun geet aapko koi aitraz toh Nahi haina...

 

Anu thought OMG... Dadi hamesha inka Saath deti hain aur Hume kuch bhi pata Nahi chala... Dadi ...you are great... And suddenly a naughty thought crossed her mind...

 

Anu - dadi... Geet akeli kyun jaayegi... Main bhi jaaoongi uske Saath...

 

Maan looked at Anu not understanding what is cooking in her mind...

 

Geet excitedly told... Haa dadi... Anu ko aane dijiye na... Main sab ko Anu se milana chalti hoon...

 

Maan said in a murmur... Ab dono nanad bhabhi ek hogaye hain... Veer heard and said... Yeh toh shuruwaat hai bhai...Aage Aage dekho Kya hota hain...

 

Dadi agreed to send Anu with geet...

 

Maan - main phir se Kehta hoon dadi... Pooja ko post pone Karne ko kahiye dadi ji se...

 

Dadi - maan phir wahi baat...

 

Maan - why can't u understand dadi... Can geet sit in the pooja for hours with that injury... Kya yeh pooja geet se Badh kar hain unke liye...

 

Dadi - Maine pehle bhi kaha hai... Gayatri ka maanna hain ki ek baar shanti ki pooja hojaaye toh koi khatra Nahi hoga... Aur aaj ke incident ke baad main bhi unke baat se sehmat hoon... Aap geet ko leke jaayenge ...bas Hume aur kuch Nahi Sunna hain...

 

She turned to geet and said... Aap ab so jaayiye geet... Hum gayatri se mana karenge yaha aane ke liye... Geet nodded... She thought... Agar dadi yaha aagayi toh badi mushkil hojayega...  Iss baar ke liye toh yeh baat tal gayi Lekin hum kitne din yeh baat chupaayenge...

 

Anu shook her as she was not responding to her... Kya hua geet... Kuch pareshani hai Kya,... Geet said... No... And stood up to go to her room...

 

She wished all of them Good night and left...

 

Anu took her to the room and helped her... Geet took her medicines and soon slept...

 

Even dadi left with geet... Maan and veer left for study...

 

Meera was waiting for maan... She wanted to talk to him...


Veer and maan were discussing office matters... She waited them to complete their discussion...

 

Maan came out of the study and was going to his room( samjha karo yaar , kaha jaa raha hain, ab toh dadi bhi samajh gayi... ,, Maan unki baat Nahi manega ) and meera called him... Meera - maan ...

 

Maan turned to look at meera and said... Kya hain meera ... Bolo...

 

Meera - aap do din baad aaye aur mujhse mile bhi Nahi...baat tak Nahi ki... She asked little hurt...

 

Maan - tum dekh rahi ho na meera... Main kitna busy hoon...

 

Meera - aap kab aaye maan, ghar Nahi aaye aur seedhe hospital chale Gaye...

 

Maan was getting annoyed...as he was very tired  and now meera is not leaving him ... But he kept his cool as... if he say something rude... Geet may not like it... And will be hurt...

 

Maan - Haa main airport se seedhe hospital hi Gaya tha... Ghar ka koi hospital mein ho ... usse dekhne wala koi toh hona chahiye na... Aur main iss ghar ka bada beta hoon toh yeh meri zimmedaari hain meera... Tum Nahi samjhogi...

 

Meera - Nahi maan...aisa Nahi hai... Aap apna khayal bhi toh rakhiye... Aap Mumbai se Aate hi hospital Gaye... Agar aap kehte toh main aajati hospital...

 

Maan - Kya tumhe kisine roka hain Kya hospital aane se...

 

Meera - Nahi... Main bas...aapko intezar...

 

Maan - agar Sach mein tum chahte toh aajati... Meri Haa ka wait Nahi karti... With that maan left...

 

He went to his room...locked it and jumped into geet rooms balcony and entered the room...he saw geet sleeping... He joined her and she hugged him... She wished him goodnight in her sleepy state and they both slept...

 

Meera felt bad... what ever she does...it has reverse effect... she just wanted to share maan's stress but maan is not ready to share anything with her... she started felling that she is the guest in the house not geet... agree she lost her memory but that doesn't mean all will ignore her... even Anu, who used to interact with her ... is now with geet all the time... meera is in a dilemma how she is going to cope up with the situation... all are taking advantage of her state... she thought to talk to Dadi next morning... she went to her room and slept...

 

 

Next morning...

 

Dadi convinced Gayatri Dadi and she agreed... It was decided that Maan Geet and Anu will go by train... as Geet has an injury and she might not feel comfortable in the flight...as high altitudes may cause inconvenience... Rb got tickets and he booked his ticket also... thought to manofy his brother...

 

They packed the luggage and left for the station... the train is scheduled at 1.30 and to reach Amritsar around 10 ( this is purely my imagination... i don't know whether there is any train like that.. ..)

 

When Rb boarded the Train... Maan enquired Anu...she told him that he is also coming...Maan didnt say any thing...


All enter their coupe and sat down... the train started...


Anu - Geet mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aaraha hain...plz kya hua theek se batao... Maan bahi meera ko leke kyun aaye...aur unki shaadi tumse kaise hui... aur meera ki accident kaise hua... mujhe sab batao...




Phew Finally updated... Waiting for your review friends...



From Next part flash back will start... don't know how many parts will come... but will try to complete it in 2 - 3 parts... 

 


Plz ignore mistakes both hindi grammatical and spelling


Edited by -indu- - 9 years ago
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geet tho hassne lagi RB ki prank sunkar๐Ÿ˜†
she wanted to see maan's childhood belongings as she was missing him๐Ÿ˜ณ
maan ne sorry kaha geet ko aur sab ko shock laga ye dekh kar๐Ÿ˜›
chalo geet ghar wapas agayi
hehe gayathri dadi ane wali hai ye sunke sab darr gaye
chalo finally unhe rokh liya kaise bhi karke
uff ye GM ๐Ÿ˜ก 
RB bhi ja raha hai saath mai taki wo maan ko maan sake๐Ÿ˜›
eagerly waiting for next part๐Ÿค—
 
 
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Lovely update Indu๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
RB told everything to Geet and Geet laughed to hear that
then she told how she reached there all sibling were surprised to see Maan behaving with Geei in an entirely different manner 
why not after all she is his love  
OH No
gayathri dadi is coming๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
thank God Maan's dadi convinced her not to come as Maan and Geet were going there only for the Puja
wow ..Meera again got some memory when she heard about gayathri dadi
all are now very hopeful that she will be fine soon
Bechhari Meera- as I said about her earlier in teaser
now all boarded in train and Geet is going to tell anu and RB how they got married
waiting to know the past

Loved the update very much
invisible hug yaad hai na tujhe๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by rashmivaish - 9 years ago
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How come 2BA updates only when RA updates ๐Ÿ˜›

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Originally posted by: JeevanaP

How come 2BA updates only when RA updates ๐Ÿ˜›

mutual understanding hai๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†