Originally posted by: hamesha_always<font color="#0000ff">Poona,</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Your Lines in redbelow...</font><font color="#ff0000"><font size="4">Another symbolic forewarning ... He had ripped her Duppatta, had trampled on it and now, he rips the Gota from her kameeze ... Her honor, her dignity, in play again ... But not just a layered symbolic warning ... Also a deep hidden subtex ... The setting, her bedroom, their first time together, laying in bed ... The act, the ripping of her shirt, A latent, frustrated need, a furious, seething, unfulfilled, </font><font size="4">uncontrollable white hot desire ...</font></font><font color="#0000ff" size="4">Please excuse me a second while I recover from this...</font><font color="#0000ff" size="4">Seriously, between the loaded looks he gives her, the spell she unwittingly casts on himand your prose which flies off the pages more like poetry, I am a dead woman. </font>
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