Finally gathered the courage to read the update and finished it!!!!!! Yeah...🤪
But you know what??? The most irritating thing ever happened, the lights went out and with it *off* went my lappy and the entire comment I had so laboriously typed...
Anyways, now its back as well as the comment!!!!😆
Tell you what Nafi... This update had me stumped with your choice of words and your narration...!!!!
It was so vocab-heavy that first I had to gather my guts and only then could I read the entire update...😳
You are one amazing writer!!!!👏
Enough of my blabber now... But seriously this was very, I don't know, vivid???? I mean every thought, every emotion, every action was so well portrayed that it felt like watching everything unfold right in front of my eyes!!!!!
Shyam was a maniac indeed and it was hilarious and serious at the same time to watch his thoughts tumble one after the other...!!!!!😆 The way he was trying to figure out the absence of any doubts/ information regarding his whereabouts, him trying to pull-off an act of everyday routine work... Wow...👏
Reading about the parts featuring Anjali, Arnav and Khushi sure gave me an impression of a storm brewing and coming up... Their silence and stoic exterior was only the calm before the storm!!!!!!🥱
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