Drabbles: 30. Episode XXXI- Return of the Jallad (Pg 95) [Note Pg 98] - Page 39

Gunia

@|Persephone|

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

Dude. I'm definitely sticking around! Actually, you're stuck with me! I'll prolly stalk you at some point and read other things you've written (as long as they're somewhere within my interest of couples)! Getting back to the latest chapter, another awesome Drabble! Liked the emotions portrayed bad the way you wrote them! Kudos!

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dreamwinner

@dreamwinner

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Posted: 10 years ago

U took ur own sweet time to give us this update

well it was worth it

It's always immensely satisfying to see a couple in

love cover the distance between them after all the

trials and tribulations and professing what their heart

have been telling them all along .But then who says

Professing love is easy,the insecurities and the chance

of getting hurt makes it all more difficult

For all the drabbles u have written till now 👏

Edited by dreamwinner - 10 years ago

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HemaG

@HemaG

IF-Addictz

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Posted: 10 years ago

very nice one ...so impactful...

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custodian75

@custodian75

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 10 years ago

Wow, atleast paro realized that it was now or never.

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vaish912

@vaish912

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Posted: 10 years ago

I loved tht Paro is taking the matters in her own hand .. Rudra's vulnerability n to show his emotions u don't even need lots of words .. Paro she is blossoming in his existence .. U r simply brilliant ... Eagerly waiting for the next update ..

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sslmay11

@sslmay11

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

It's again a beautiful piece of work. With few words you brought all the emotions that could have played between them. I love the last mischievous lines of Paro...What to know Rudra's thoughts on this...looking forward

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Sonia

@sonia_92

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

that was everything I had imagined and more.

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jisa

@jisa

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

finally...!!!!!!
this was beautiful..!!!
w8ng for next..!

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Suni

@Suni

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

Oh so beautiful and well written! So looking forward to drabble 21.

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tattle-tale

@tattle-tale

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: IronButterfly

Originally posted by: DDC1
[Quote=tattle-tale] Tonight, she gloried in being possessed, in belonging. She didn't know which she wanted more-- his rough eagerness that took pleasure to the point of pain or his contrite tenderness that soothed and left her aching in a different way. [/Quote]

Awesome... so many emotions in 500 words is a feat indeed. Whoever you are or wherever you are, keep drabbling.

I'm guessing Paro is going to donate all his kurtas to the Salvation Army or something ? I so would, lol

Originally posted by: Jaz1990
Wow, that was intense! Ur a great writer!

Originally posted by: awww
Simply Top notch Dear,brilliant work 👏

Originally posted by: current
Hey ..I really like your Tattling tales...I could get used to them..

Hell yes I am..

Today was Finesse ...superb👏

Originally posted by: aruni50218
Awesome - perfectly described Paro's emotions within such a few words...
Would love to know Rudra's POV right now...

Thank you so much! 😊

@DDC1- Forgive me, I took the liberty of editing the html in your comment, I'm rather anal about things like that. 😆 And for the record, I would too.

Edited by tattle-tale - 10 years ago

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