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VM FF || DIL MIL GAYE #6 | CH 92 N 93 on PG 141 (Page 58)

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Posted: 19 March 2014 at 6:15pm | IP Logged
Fabulous Update StarStarStarStarStarStar  virat took a very bold step 2 make maanvi realise her mistake dat wht she is thinking is not rite killing a baby is not rite ( it took a lots of courage 2 do sumthing like dat whn u know wht d child means 2 u ) he make her understands dat dey hav 2 make kasak understands d situation n accept d chngs in her life n now dey hav 2 switch dere roles 4 pampering her n virat's ideas work very nicely Big smileBig smile , maanvi n her mood swings LOLLOLLOLLOL poor virat got trapped btw 2 drama queens ( ek k sath ek free WinkWinkWink ) n kasak was adorable as usual her cute antics n questions she was so excited 4 d baby she will definately accept d chngs in her life n share her luv with baby 2 n finally her wish got fulfill i was smiling while reading whole update it was really sweet luved it Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smile

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Posted: 20 March 2014 at 5:45am | IP Logged
Again it took so long...Angry
anyways...loved the update...Big smileClapStar
Kasak...is so cute...damn cute!!Smile

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Posted: 21 March 2014 at 4:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ambarsariya

Again it took so long...Angry
anyways...loved the update...Big smileClapStar
Kasak...is so cute...damn cute!!Smile
 
 
its okk... glad u liked it... Big smile
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Posted: 21 March 2014 at 4:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by GOOGLU

Srry dear once again super late... its okk... i understand...
Its all my hectic schedule. ...
Abt update. ...always ur writing skill and wrk made my day... thank u... means a lot...!!!!
Always enjoyed it...
Part 76
Its outstanding dear...
In awsm way u show manvi' s emotions, ,,, her confusion, ,,,, her insecurities related kasak...
Love the way u show her selfish and self less characters. ..
Really outstanding job...  glad u appreciated it... Big smile

Part 77
Frst I m scared wd virat' s action. .
But he vry well knows his manvi...
His way of making manvi understand was superb. ..  thank u... thank u...
Again love mother and daughter part...
Mumma sanam kya hota h? ?????...love cutie pie kasak...
Manvi' s mood swing part was lovable. ..
Awsm wrk Naina...loved it..
Really thanks alot dear for ur regular pm..
Waiting egrly for next update. ... next will be up in few mins Big smile
Keep rocking
 
 
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Posted: 21 March 2014 at 4:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kateyes

Fabulous Update StarStarStarStarStarStar   thank u soo much kanwal... Big smile  virat took a very bold step 2 make maanvi realise her mistake dat wht she is thinking is not rite killing a baby is not rite  yeah bold... but worth it... ( it took a lots of courage 2 do sumthing like dat whn u know wht d child means 2 u ) he make her understands dat dey hav 2 make kasak understands d situation n accept d chngs in her life n now dey hav 2 switch dere roles 4 pampering her n virat's ideas work very nicely Big smileBig smile , maanvi n her mood swings LOLLOLLOLLOL poor virat got trapped btw 2 drama queens ( ek k sath ek free WinkWinkWinkyeah... poor viru LOL LOLn kasak was adorable as usual her cute antics n questions she was so excited 4 d baby she will definately accept d chngs in her life n share her luv with baby 2 n finally her wish got fulfill i was smiling while reading whole update it was really sweet luved it means a lot...!!! thanks... Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smile 
 
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Posted: 21 March 2014 at 4:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hindujareddy

tnx for pm
nice upt
cnt soon
 
thanks Big smile
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Posted: 21 March 2014 at 5:03am | IP Logged
 
CHAPTER 78
       ~~ tu saath hai...
 
RECAP : virat asked manvi to abort their baby which efficiently knocked some sense into manvi that isnt the right option. virat gave an idea that he n manvi should swap their roles  and make kasak understand and accept the changes that will come her way...
 
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Vanshika : but im not understanding this mohit... come and stay with us for few days...
mohit : maami ji i... how can i...
vanshika : why...?? is anything wrong...???
mohit : no but...
vanshika : you, pragati and didi are coming...
mohit : pragati and mom will surely come maami ji... and i... i stay in office only these days... bahut kaam hai...
vanshika : arrey... ghar toh aate hi ho na... tum aaoge... bas...
mohit : okk... toh fir milte hain...
vanshika : haan...
vanshika disconnected the phone and smiled seeing kasak running in the whole house.
 
vanshika : kasak ji...
kasak : daadiii...
vanshika : aaj toh u are very happy... got full marks in the exam.,...
kasak : no daadi...
vanshika : then...??? got a chocolate...
kasak : arrey nahi...
vanshika : fir kya...???
kasak : main toh hotel jaungi... dad ne ticket gift ki mujhe...
manvi : reservation karwai thi M.I.L... surprise mila humein...
manvi said walking out of her room and sitting beside vanshika.
vanshika : virat didnt tell me about it...
manvi : i also had no idea maa... so its a pleasant surprise
kasak : aur na wahan swimming pool bhi hai daadi...
vanshika : ohhh wowww... take me also with you...
kasak made a sad face and sat on the dining table opposite the sofa where vanshika and manvi where sitting.

manvi smiled and waited for another story that her little chef was surely cooking in her mind.
vanshika : kya hua...??? dont want to take daadi daadu...
kasak : le jaati par -
manvi : par...
kasak : hotel mein na kai baari theives bhi hote hain... toh apne mummy pap ke saath jaana padhta hai daadi...
manvi giggled while kasak continued...
kasak : aur na daadi humare room mein toh sirf main mumma n dad rahenge... apko akele room mein darr lagega... bhoot hua toh...
vanshika : ohhh... par agar tumhare room mein bhoot hua toh...
kasak : huh... mumma...???
manvi : kasu ke saath mumma hai na... hum bhoot ko itne tang karenge  ke woh khud hi bhaag jaega...
kasak : haha...
vanshika : so when are you planning to go..???
manvi : tomorrow afternoon... its friday and then weekend...
vanshika : okk... waise i called mohit and asked them to come and stay here...
kasak : chachu and bua and daadi...
vanshika : yes...
manvi : hmm... so are they coming...???
virat : who is coming...???
manvi : you came back...??? abhi toh gaye the...
virat : you know dad literally kicked me out... he said ke office band karne ke liye aane ki kya jarurat thi...
vanshika : hehehe...
virat : mom...
vanshika : vikram is right...
kasak : vikram nahi... daadu...
vanshika : haan... daadu is right...
manvi : so you werent welcome... great...
virat : its okk sarcasm queen...
manvi : did i say anything...??? kuch bhi...
virat : arrghh... accha tell me who is coming...???
kasak : mohti chachu, pragati bua and daadi...
virat : mohit aa raha hai... its been long we met...
manvi : but when are they coming maa...???
vanshika : may be tomorrow... i dont know...
virat : tomorrow...
virat looked at kasak and felt sad for her thinking that they should cancel their plan for now. but next moment realised, this cancellation shouldnt happen in any case...
vanshika : virat...???
virat : we cant cancel our plan mom... you should have atleast asked us once...
vanshika : i had no idea what you were planning...or for that matter; you were planning something or not...
manvi looked at kasak and then at virat and vanshika and then leaned back on the sofa... really uninterested in the conversation anymore...
kasak ran to manvi and held her hand.
kasak : kya cancel karenge mumma...???
manvi : i dont know kasak...
kasak : planning kis ki kari mumma...???
manvi : i dont know baby...
virat : manvi why dont you inside and take rest... kasak take mumma inside honey...
kasak : okkk... (smiling at virat) chalo na mumma...
kasak took manvi with her to her bedroom.
vanshika : you can go virat... im not stopping you son...
virat : i know mom... but it doesnt seem nice that we invited them for a stay and now we ourself going out...
vanshika : i will tell them i didnt know about your plan... it will be fine...
virat : it wont look nice but i cant cancel the plan also... kasak will feel really bad...
vanshika : one should look out for the happiness of his child first... so kasak's happiness should be of the foremost concern to you...
virat : oh my god mom... what dialogues...!!!
vanshika : on a serious note, its about mohit... i want to talk to him... we want him to move on...
virat : which i doubt (whispering)
vanshika : what...???
virat : nothing... i said its nice... good effort...
vanshika : hmm...
 
virat went to his bedroom to saw manvi lying on the bed and kasak brushing her fingers in manvi's hair and telling her a story...
kasak ; fir na woh frog na prince ban gya mumma... par ye kaise hua...???
manvi : magic baby...
kasak : kiss mein magic...???
virat : kya...??? what are you girls talking...??
kasak : arrey woh na story mein na ek princess hoti hai fir-
manvi : let it be kasu... dad knows the story...
virat : yeah yeah i know...
kasak : fir theek hai...
manvi : what was the topic out there...???
virat : nothing much...
manvi : you are sure...????
virat : yeah...
kasak : kal na main chutti kar loon...???
manvi : why...??
kasak : packing karni hai na...
manvi : i will do it my sweetheart... dont act smart baby...
kasak : mumma please na...
virat : okk... no problem...
kasak beamed with joy and gave virat a flying kiss...
virat : you seemed super happy kido...
kasak : yes...
manvi : but she can go to school tomorrow...
virat : cmon manvi... let her be...
kasak : haan manvi...
manvi : what...??? what did you say...???
kasak : i mean haan mumma... LOL LOL
 
*************
at night
mohit : maami ji called and invited us... so i said a yes...
pragati : i know... meri toh packing bhi ho gayi...
mohit : woww... greattt
pragati :  you annoy me soo much... any specific reason...
mohit : nope... its just that i love you soo much...
pragati : i love you too weirdo...
mohit : i heard that...
pragati : so...??? should i get scared or what...???
mohit : yes you should... especially when im coming towards you to catch you...
pragati : dont you dare...
mohit : dont dare me...
pragati : nahi na... please...
before pragati knew she was being tickled by mohit and she was laughing uncontrollably as she feels ticklish even with a simple brush of someone's hand.
pragati : haha... so.. haha... sorry...
mohit : better...
pragati wiped the tears of joy from her eyes and controlled her uneven breath.
pragati : i miss you bhai...
mohit : im here only prags...
mohit turned around and wiped a single drop of tear that rolled down his cheek.
pragati : come back bhai...we need you...
mohit : prags tell mom to pack her stuff... i have some work to complete...
saying this mohit returned to his room.

*************
 
****skype convo****
radha (rishabh's mother) : how is madhu...???
rishabh : better i guess...
radha : rishu do take care of her...
rishabh : im doing it maa...
radha : accha how are you...???
rishabh : theek hoon... i miss you and dad...
radha : we too miss you and someone else also misses you...
rishabh : dad...
radha : no... someone else beside dad...
rishabh : who...??
ME...
rishabh : hiii maan... how are you...???
maan : i am good... and naina misses you too...
rishabh : so mom n dad are at your place...???
radha : no rishu... maan had some work here in london...
rishabh : you left my angel alone there...??? maan im disappointed...
maan : rishabh ji i am sorry but your angel is too busy to leave canada... lots of friends there you see and moreover she has joined some painting classes... i dont know for what exactly...
rishabh : she loves nature... so thats why painting n all...
maan : dekha mom... he already started defending his nainu...
radha : haan... he is naina's lawyer and she is his...
rishabh : but seriously she is fine na...
maan : absolutely brother... i just talked to her an hour back...
rishabh : great but she never calls me now... did you do some black magic on her...???
radha : rishu...
maan : yes... its a magic called love...
rishabh : haha... okk now i gotto go... i need to check on that witch... time for her medicine...
maan : gosh how much you guys love each other...
rishabh : yeah...
ending the call, rishabh giggled and made his way to his room.

 

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from now on the story will speed up, I THINK... Embarrassed

 

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