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VM FF || DIL MIL GAYE #6 | CH 92 N 93 on PG 141 (Page 52)

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Posted: 13 March 2014 at 1:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by janvi0513

Great lovely going



thank u... Smile

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Posted: 13 March 2014 at 2:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by naina927

Originally posted by rida001

Nice update
Thanks for the pm
But I have a problem I had to read previous parts to remind the story as I had forgotten it...So can you plz put recap in next parts

Coming to the story
Maanvi's concerns are right, I am confused too. Viraat should understand her. Waiting for the next part to know where he tool her.
Mohit-naina track is going emotional but want them to be together
By the way there was less of Virmaan so try putting more of them
DMG is one of the best stories I have read so dar
Keep it up!!!


ohh i see... will surely add recap from now on... n always feel free to give me suggestion... i really appreciate it... Smile
im glad u liked the update... Big smile
so u want mohit n naina together... i will unite them if ppl want... Embarrassed
thanks again for the compliment... means a lot... Star
there has been virman n virman in the last few updates i guess... but i will surely add more of virman...


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Posted: 13 March 2014 at 6:19am | IP Logged
Awesome update...Clap
but it was really short!!LOL
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Posted: 13 March 2014 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
Awesome update!!!!!
Liked it
Thanx 4 PM
Waiting 4 nextSmile
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Posted: 13 March 2014 at 6:27pm | IP Logged
Brilliant update grl liked it very much StarStarStarStarStar u hav portrayed maanvi's inner turmoil very well ClapClapClapClapClapClap she was 2 much confused about her decision whether 2 continue d pregnancy or not ( its true humans r full of emotions n every 1 hav 1 gud n bad side its dere nature 1s in a life dere a tym cum where u only thinks about urself n ur happiness nothing seems right or wrong 2 u n plus if it is related 2 ur child ) , she was only thinking about her child but whn she realised dat wht she is thinking wht kasak means 2 her she again becum d selfless soul Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smile kasak is d 1 who introduce motherhood 2 her just bcuz only of her virat is in her life she is living a happy life in which she hav everything n every 1 she can't neglect kasak n choose her own child , liked virat's reaction after listening 2 her words he knows wht she is going through  n he doesn't want her 2 over analyze everything , rishbala scene was nice liked it d way he was caring 4 her ( is she suffering 4rm any decease or just not well do tell me wht happened 2 my para madhu Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smile ) n mohit AngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry ( kya mai is ka gala dabba skti hon ek khoon tou maaf hona chahiye ) he is hell bend 2 messed up naina's life by his stupid deeds he is not ready 2 let his past go ( ok ok he luvs her but where d hell was he whn she needs him do make naina confronts him just 4 once 2 let him see whts difference is btw him n maan Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming ) n missed kasak very much SmileSmile sorry 4 much late




Edited by kateyes - 19 March 2014 at 5:30pm
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Posted: 13 March 2014 at 7:20pm | IP Logged
Seriously not getting wat actually want in her life...she herself is very confuse...1st she didnt want her child bcs she dont want to make Kasak insecure...then she wanted to stand on feet...fullfill her dreams...but everything is not that easy...it hs its own cost...thats y everything shud b done at the right time...right now she shud focus on Kasak n her coming baby...thats most important...n y she is so scared n worried fr Kasak? It happens in initian days but she will understand evantually...but fr that her mother shud act tough n sensible...bcs she is 1 who can make her understand these things...

Now y Mohit is trying to spoil Naina happily married life? Chain nahi isko bhi :p

cont soon
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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 5:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rasp_berry

Seriously not getting wat actually want in her life...she herself is very confuse...1st she didnt want her child bcs she dont want to make Kasak insecure...then she wanted to stand on feet...fullfill her dreams...but everything is not that easy...it hs its own cost...thats y everything shud b done at the right time... you asked a valid and important question n then urself answered it... Wink Clap Clap Clapright now she shud focus on Kasak n her coming baby...thats most important... exactly... thats the most impt thing for now... n y she is so scared n worried fr Kasak? It happens in initian days but she will understand evantually...but fr that her mother shud act tough n sensible...bcs she is 1 who can make her understand these things... i agree...

Now y Mohit is trying to spoil Naina happily married life? Chain nahi isko bhi :p he has gone mad i think... cant get over the loss... stay tuned anyways...

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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 6:10am | IP Logged
 
CHAPTER 77
       ~~ kitni mohabbat hai
 
 
RECAP :  manvi worried about kasak and asks virat whether they should continue with her pregnancy. madhu and rishabh at their usual argument mode and mohit missing naina...
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manvi : M.. M.. MTP what...??? kya MTP...???
virat : medically terminated pregnancy...
manvi : what are you saying virat...??? lets go back...
virat : why...??? you wanted a solution, right... this is the solution... you have a problem with my... i mean with our baby... better abort it... there is nothing wrong...
manvi : abort...???
virat : yup... you always wanted only one child... we have that child as you said... we have kasak manvi... we have our baby...
manvi : you are asking me to KILL my child... how could you...??? how could you...??? (holding a fistful of his shirt)
virat : thats what you suggested me minutes back wifey... just the difference is i said it aloud and clear and you were running around the bush...
manvi : i never said that i want to kill my baby... (screaming)
virat : you meant it baby... didnt you...???
manvi : i dont want to talk... lets go back...
manvi stormed out of the doctor's cabin leaving behind virat who successfully made manvi realise what she was thinking about and the doctor who was clearly pissed off...
virat : sorry doctor and thank you...
 
virat came out of the hospital and saw manvi standing facing the car and her hands on the rear view mirror.
virat : old habit... huh...??
manvi looked questioningly at virat with tears in her eyes.
virat : running away from problems...
manvi : i hate you... you asked me to kill my baby... dont talk to me ever...
virat : you also asked me whether we should continue your pregnancy or not... and that was not because you wanted to know whether i am ready for a baby or not crap... you asked me because you were not sure... you were confused and apprehensive about our baby... and why are you worrying too much about kasak...??? she will understand manvi... she is our baby... she will understand and accept the changes...
manvi : i was scared thinking what if she doesnt... virat i dont want kasak to feel that she is not longer that important...
virat : you are one silly woman manvi... we are there for here, arent we...??? you spoiled her all these years -
manvi : what...??? (glared at him)
virat : what i mean is... that... that you pampered her and i was strict and now lets reverse roles... i will do the pampering... and you... you bear with your mood swings... what say...????
manvi : i feel so stupid virat... thank you... i got it why you dragged me here... fear of losing my baby knocked some sense into me...
virat : finally... now can we go back home... i have a meeting to attend...
manvi ; you always have one thing or other...
manvi made a face and got into the car and virat looked up at the sky asking god to give him patience.
virat : why are you upset now...???
no response
virat : manvi i shouldnt have done this... i am sorry...
no response
virat : you know i love you soo much...
manvi : you are leaving me alone...
virat : huh...???
manvi : main akele ghar pe kya karungi... virattt...
virat (to himself) : iska screw toh nahi gir gaya raaste mein...
virat : mannu office toh  jana padhta hai jaana...
manvi : dont go na... please... (holding his arm and crying like a baby)
virat : hmm... okk... but stop crying first...
manvi : okk... (scrunching her nose)
virat : chalo now lets go home... you need to rest...
manvi : nooo... mujhe na move jaana hai...
virat : huh..??
manvi : haan... any movie... your choice... (looking at her image in the mirror and doing touch up)
virat : manvi better we go back home... what will i say  to dad...?? i cant come today because im going on a movie date...
manvi : arrey bunk kar do na office... college bhi toh karte the... tab toh darr nahi lagta tha...
virat : wo principal tha... yahan office mein hitler hai... i mean dad hai...
manvi : hahaha... hitler... back those days, his number used to be stored in your cell in the name of hitler... i remember...
virat : hmm...
virat wondered why manvi got into flashback mode... why was she suddenly talking about college... and he feared that... becuase talking about college will ultimately bring up maya... and even the mention of maya, will make manvi go mad... she will overreact will be an understatement given her current state... pregnancy hormones already making her go insane and crazy.
virat : which movie...???
manvi : anything you like... (flashing her one of her best smiles)
virat : okk... i think its been a while we went for a movie without kasak... will be a great change...!!!
manvi : great change matlab...??? kya kehna chahte ho...???
virat : again... (saying under his breath)
manvi : what...???
virat : i said that it will be you n me... alone... you see...
manvi : ohh... fine... i thought something else...
virat : hmm...
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virat : now will you please stop crying... its no big deal manvi...
manvi : it is a big deal... he died... its so sad...
virat : she killed him... that lover boy got murdered by the love of his life...
manvi : she was forced virat... dont blame her now...
virat : okk baby... the girl was right in killing her own boyfriend... its the best thing one should do... and karna bhi chahie... okk jaan...???
manvi : you are not making fun of me... are you...???
virat : no ways honey... i love you soo much...
manvi : i love you too... virattt...
virat : yes honey... (a bit irritated)
manvi : but me an ice cream please...
virat : sure...
manvi looked at the ice cream cone in virat's hand...
manvi : only one...??? where is yours...???
virat : i dont want it...
manvi : kyun.,...??? you want me to buy you one... is it...???
virat : no manvi... trust me i dont want to have it...
manvi : hmm... then share with me...
virat : okk i will... first you have it...
manvi : okkk...

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manvi : ab hum kasu ko school lene chale...???
virat : do have a option...???
manvi ; you are soo boring... okk do one thing, lets pick kasak, then lunch, then drop us home and then you can go to office...
virat : awww... so cooperative mrs. vadera...
manvi : i mean it virat...
virat : i also mean it jaan...
manvi : you behave like some oldie...
virat : and you like an insane woman...
manvi : insane...??? you think im mad... im in this state because of you... you got me pregnant...
virat : argghhh...
virat switched on the music player and increased the volume...
" chiii... itna loud... "
kasak screamed as soon as manvi brought her into the car...
virat : good afternoon to you too...
kasak : okk thank you...
manvi giggled on seeing this scene...
manvi : sarcasm i tell you...
kasak : what is sarcar...???? (finger on her chin)
manvi : sar-ca-sm... its what you daddy uses very often...
kasak : par ye sarcasm kaunsi thing hai mumma...???
virat : pagalon ki toli hai... (muttering under his breath)
kasak : volume toh kam kar do... (covering her ears)
manvi : switched off baby... (looking at virat) problem solved...
virat : like i care...
kasak : arrey i also care... sharing is caring... hai na mumma...???
manvi : yes baby...
kasak : dad ki chutti thi aaj...??? meri toh nahi thi...
manvi : papa ne chutti maari... bad thing...
kasak : hawww... very bad dad...
virat : sorry girls... dont worry im going to office as soon as i drop you home...
manvi : no... you promised me virat...
kasak : virat... hahaha...
manvi : i mean... you promised me dad...
virat : no momma... i am going... i have work...
manvi : haawww...
manvi threw kasak's bag on the back seat and nudged kasak...
manvi ; tell him you want to have lunch...
kasak : mujhe lunch karna hai dad...
virat : haan baby thats why we going home... jaldi jaldi...
kasak : okk...
manvi again poked kasak and signalled her to say something in reply...
kasak : par abhi khaana hai... im very hungry...
virat watched manvi nudging kasak from the corner of his eyes and tried controlling his giggle.
virat : talk to mumma... and we will be home in 2 minutes...
manvi : dhokhebaaz...
kasak : its lier mumma...
manvi : no kasu its dhokebaaz... bewaffa sanam...
kasak : sanam...??? who sanam...???
manvi : we want to go to a restaurant... i dont want to eat at home... i dont feel like...
kasak : yaaa... me too... mujhe bhi bahar hi khana hai dad...
virat : haha... my drama queens... relax... we are surely going out for lunch...
kasak : yeyyy...
virat : and yes before the restaurant i need to stop at a place for five minutes... is that fine...???
manvi : yeah yeah... right kasak...???
kasak : right mumma...
virat : thank you...
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kasak : where dad gone...???
manvi : i also dont know...
kasak : why mumma...???
manvi ; dad didnt tell me...
kasak : hmmm... humare house mein small baby kab ayega...???
manvi : very soon kasu...
kasak : how many days mumma...???
manvi : months baby,...
kasak : months... 4 months...???
manvi : no... about 7...
kasak : ohh nooo... jaldi nahi ho sakta...???
manvi : haha... noo... jaldi nahi ho sakta...
kasak : maine toh sabko bol diya... Ouch
manvi : kya...???
kasak : ke mere birthday pe small baby bhi hoga...
manvi : woh toh hoga hi jaanu... Big smile
kasak : promise...???
manvi : haan promise... kyunki aapke birthday mein abhi 9 months hai...
kasak : thank god... warna sab mujhe lier kehte...
manvi : no ways... my kasu is not a lier... she is a sweetheart...
virat : yeh lo... (getting into the car)
manvi : what took you that long...???
virat : excuse me mrs. vadera... kasak this is for you...
kasak : for me... wowww...
virat opened the packet and give a paper to kasak...
kasak : mujhe nahi padhna ye...
manvi : show me...
kasak : bekaar hai mumma...
manvi : ohhh nooo... woww... great...
virat : ahem ahem...
manvi : thank you soo much...
kasak : kya hua...????
manvi : we are going to a hotel... hotel room... you wanted it na...
kasak : haan... swimming pool wala hotel...
virat : haan... so happy now...???
kasak : bahut saara...
kasak went to virat and hugged him and kissed his cheek...
kasak : thank you dad...
virat : your welcome baby... im happy that you are happy...
manvi smiled and agreed that thisis the time virat and she should switch their roles... he knows how to bring a smile on one's face and till the time he is there with her and kasak, nothing can ever go wrong... !!!! they are perfect in their own way...!!!!
 
 
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Edited by naina927 - 15 March 2014 at 1:08am

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