Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome
Geet never saw maan
He always lives apart from everyone
Maan's speeches broke geet :(
He bought her to repay the deft of her parents only!!
Posted: 10 years ago
thank god he is human#
but devil for sure
well cant wait to know more
Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update
geet thinking maan to be her savior 
maan is so mysterious here!!!!!!
eagerly waiting for the next part...
update soon!!!!!

Posted: 10 years ago
nice update...sounds pretty interesting... continue soon...
Posted: 10 years ago
awesum
superbbb upd
bechari geet k saath ho ky rha h 
abi2 to usko save maan ne
aur islia save qki slave bana ske 
oh god aage kya hoga
luv story kaise start hogi
jaldi se upd kro
waiting for d next part
Posted: 10 years ago
Mmm
very mysterious kind of first part.Obviously mysterious on the part of Shahabji,our Maan.And the question is,why is he hidden???? Did he really buy Geet to make her pay her parents' debt??? It is clear that his life is dark just like his mansion,and Geet wud become the source of light in his life.


Eager to know all the hidden facts.

Great start.
Posted: 10 years ago
prologue
awesome...
poor Geet...
Posted: 10 years ago
part 1
awesome...
nice one...
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...
Posted: 10 years ago
dreams of a poor girl shattered ruthlessly!!!😭😭
Posted: 10 years ago
why is maan doing that to her, is he really cruel in this story, continue soon...indeed a very unique story line...

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