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Awesome
Geet never saw maan
He always lives apart from everyone
Maan's speeches broke geet :(
He bought her to repay the deft of her parents only!!

thank god he is human#
but devil for sure
well cant wait to know more

nice update...sounds pretty interesting... continue soon...

awesum

Mmm
very mysterious kind of first part.Obviously mysterious on the part of Shahabji,our Maan.And the question is,why is he hidden???? Did he really buy Geet to make her pay her parents' debt??? It is clear that his life is dark just like his mansion,and Geet wud become the source of light in his life.


Eager to know all the hidden facts.

Great start.

prologue
awesome...
poor Geet...

part 1
awesome...
nice one...
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...

dreams of a poor girl shattered ruthlessly!!!😭😭

why is maan doing that to her, is he really cruel in this story, continue soon...indeed a very unique story line...