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Posted: 10 years ago
This content was originally posted by: Nuts_shantanu

It's so cute 😳

Do write more 👍🏼


Thnx so much!!!:))

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome first attempt yaar ! good to see Vrushan OS , after along time !
beautifully wriiten !👏 
plz do write more! 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really nice OS!
Keep writing dear!
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This content was originally posted by: ikki215

awesome first attempt yaar ! good to see Vrushan OS , after along time !

beautifully wriiten !👏 
plz do write more! 

ThanK U!!!:)

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Posted: 10 years ago
This content was originally posted by: taanikapoor101

Really nice OS!

Keep writing dear!

Thnx!!!:))

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Posted: 10 years ago
it was amazing and fabulous os... liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it! Keep writing re... VruShan ke baare mein padke mann nahin bharta... :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was adorably cute :) Superb for a first timer.
The way you explained everything it was fun to read, all the characters behaving accordingly looked appealing. My favourite part is when shantanu says to ameeta mam that "it is none of my business but this twist looks interesting", it was the perfect line and this is exactly how one can explain shan in real life. So kudos to you on that!

Plus it was really cute how you didn't end this on a confession, it was surprising as well as didn't bother me much because the whole thing is written very nicely.

Ofcourse continue! No need to ask on VruShan ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
This content was originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

it was amazing and fabulous os... liked it

Thnk u so much!!:)

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Posted: 10 years ago
This content was originally posted by: roshni_rj

Loved it! Keep writing re... VruShan ke baare mein padke mann nahin bharta... :)

Thnx... sme here!!:)

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