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Posted: 01 November 2014 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
Wow that cliffhanger !! I like story Is picking up pace now

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Posted: 02 November 2014 at 12:13am | IP Logged
Finally Khushi's so called 'family' got to know the truth behind their supposedly characterless daughter. Seriously, I don't know why Khushi let them walk over her all the time and not say anything back to them and defend herself.

I can seriously accept Arnav believing all the shit Khushi had said about her loving shyam and Arnav not trying to find the real reason or that Khushi might be lying to all of them because seriously, from how long had he known her? Few months? A year?
With all the insecurities and the past that Arnav had was all the reasons for him to just accept what was being shown to him by Khushi.

But her family, they knew her from childhood. They are well aware of what king of girl she is in real. But they never tried to find the real reason. The real story and nothing is more hurtful than having your family who had known you your while life, giving up on you and calling you names. That is just disgusting.

Now that the truth is finally out and I have no expectation from her family in believing this also. I think they would have beloved that Khushi was dying if they got to see her dead body. The solid proof. But she is alive and I bet they will also call this a bullshit.

But whatever, they believe it or not I don't want Khushi to just living happily with them now that they know and just to forgive them, if, a big if, they ask for her forgiveness. That would be just so unfair.

A very good update. Can't wait for the next one.

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Posted: 02 November 2014 at 12:17am | IP Logged
Terrific... Bang on update ridz.. I cant wait now to read d next update.. Pls update d next part on saturday.. Pretty please...

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Posted: 02 November 2014 at 12:22am | IP Logged
Have just reached chapter 14 and if Khushi lied to everyone just because she had some illness , then she deserves every bit of cold shoulder and disdain that she gets...of all the hare brained reasons...
 
From what I have read, it sounds like she was diagnosed with cancer. So did she believe by lying about her affair with Shyam, disgracing her family, hurting the man she loved in the worst possible way, she was actually doing them a favour?
 
Cant be that reason, that's too bizzarre even for Khushi :-) so shall wait to read on and find out !! Whatever I have read of your writing, I believe there is more to it!


Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 02 November 2014 at 7:42am

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Posted: 02 November 2014 at 12:36am | IP Logged
awesome updates...Thumbs Up

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Posted: 02 November 2014 at 1:16am | IP Logged
Read all the chapterz.

Love the story

Khushi left years back because she was sick.
And including arnav all misunderatood her

Continue soon

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Posted: 02 November 2014 at 1:17am | IP Logged
Awesome update 
i really love lavanyah. Thank good ness she was with khushi and with just using three words she gave everyone piece of mind. If she would be not be khuhsi, she would have again became target of her so called family's cunning words. I am surprise that how easily their thoughts for khuhsi changed in a giffy, the girl who had spent more than her half life with them. And why not khushi still keep quite. i don't think her babuji will dislike if she answer back her family. 
Thank you so much for continuing this story and please update this story's next chapter ASAP.

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Posted: 02 November 2014 at 1:20am | IP Logged
Love this story. My only complaint is the gap between updates

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