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VeeBa SS: Veera ke Dil Ki Baat Conclusion Updated on Pg 5. (Page 2)

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luvly start dear ...waitin 4 nxt update.plzz asap...

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Part 2

At Ranvi and Veera's house...

Veera: "Yeh meri diary kahan chali gayi? Abhi tak toh is table pe hi thi? Kahin Veerji ne meri diary Gunjan didi ko gulti se dedi toh?

Veera was hoping that that was not the case because even if Gunjan didn't read her diary, she knew that there would be one person who would, Baldev.

At Baldev and Gunjan's house...

Gunjan: "Arre, Veera ki diary kahan chali gayi? Maine toh sambhal kar yaha rakhi thi."

Gunjan was looking everywhere for Veera's diary but couldn't find it anywhere. Just then Gunjan's phone rang. It was Veera.

Veera: "Gunjan didi, kya aap ke paas veerji ne galti se meri laal wali diary de di kya?"

Gunjan: "Arre haan Veera, main abhi hi tujhe bulane wali thi. Maine sab jagah dhunda, lekin kahin nahin mili. Mujhe lagta hai ki teri diary kisi ne le li hai, aur tujhe pata hai kisne.."

Veera (replied in frustration): "Baldev! Main use chodungi nahin. Main abhi vahan aapke ghar a rahin hoon. Baldev hain na vahan?"

Gunjan: "Haan, aur ab mujhe samaj main aaya kyu veerji mujhe bahar lena chahte the, taki unhe teri diary mile."

Veera arrived at Baldev and Gunjan's house ready to pick a fight with Baldev.

Veera: "Baldev, Baldev. Kahan hai tu. Jaldi bahar aa. Mujhe pata hai tune meri diary li."

Baldev angrily came downstairs from his room dressed in a stylish t-shirt which was tight around his arms, clearly showing his nice, strong, muscular body. Veera couldn't help but look and admire him, forgetting for a second why she was here in the first place.

Baldev: "Arre kya hai, subah subah pind di musibat kyun mera dimaag kha rahi hai?"

Veera quickly looked away from Baldev before replying,

Veera: "Mujhe meri diary vapas chahiye."

Baldev: "Tujhe koi aur nahin mila tha iss pind mein jisse tu pasand karti hain. Tujhe mujhe hi mila tha pasand karne?"

Veera is shocked that Baldev read that part of her diary, the one part she especially did not want anyone, especially Baldev to ever read and find out about.

Veera: "Oi, mujhe bhi koi shock nahin hai ki main tujhe pasand karoon. Lekin mere dil mein jo hain maine likh diya. Tujhe kya problem hai. Kya maine tujhe kahan ki tu mera boyfriend bane ya phir mujhe tujhse shaadi karni hai? Tujhse toh accha Karan hai. Jab woh yahan pind mein hain, toh main kyu sochun tere bare mein."

Baldev didn't know why he was suddenly getting irritated by Veera not admitting to liking him more than she let on. And that is why Baldev replied differently this time.

Baldev: "Sheher ka ladka Karan? Iss pind mein koi ladka nahin mila kya, ke tu us Karan ke saath ghoomne lagi hai?"

Veera was confused with Baldev's sudden change of reaction. What was wrong with him? She couldn't understand Baldev making fun of Karan.

Gunjan was watching all this unfold from her room upstairs. She decided it was time for her to be the peacemaker between her veerji and Veera.

Gunjan: "Bas..aap dono aise hi ladai karte rahenge kya? Toh kya hua veerji agar Veera ko aap acche lagte hain. Aap kyun itna gussa ho rahe hain. Waise bhi, aap aur Veera kabhi saath nahin ho sakte hain. Aap dono kitne alag hai. Veera rahi padhi likhi, aur aap ko angregi bhi nahin aati."

Baldev couldn't believe that Gunjan was insulting him in front of Veera of all people.

Baldev: "Oi, ki matlab hai tera. Veera aur main is pind ke hi hain. Hum ek doosre koh bachpan se jante hain, aur ladai jhagda karte aain hai. Toh kya hua ki voh mujhse aur padhi likhi hai?"

Veera smiled a little. She couldn't believe that Baldev was actually being nice to her. Baldev noticed Veera smile at what he said.

Baldev (thinking to himself): "Arre, yeh maine kya kar diya? Ab yeh Veera soch rahi hain ke main bhi usse pyaar karne laga hoon. Nahin, kabhi nahin." He decided he had to take action before Veera actually fell in love with him.

Baldev: "Mera matlab yeh hai ki kaun iss bhootni se shaadi karega. Main tujhse kabhi pyaar nahin kar sakta samjhi. Ab mujhe bahar jana hai kaam karne."

Baldev left leaving Veera and Gunjan confused.

Gunjan: "Arre Veera, lagta hai veerji sach main tujhse pyaar nahin karte. Naraaz ho kar phir se chale gaye."

Veera: "Gunjan didi, aap bhi na. Baldev ko main bahut acchi tarah se janti hoon. Main zaroor uske dil mein hoon, bas use ehsaas dilaana hai. Mujhe pata hai kya karna hai."

Gunjan and Veera smiled at each other.

That's it for Part 2. Hope you like it. Feedback would be greatly appreciated. Hope you enjoy reading.

 

 

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Part 3 of Veera ke Dil Ki Baat OS VeeBa

4 months later...

Veera couldn't believe that it she was only two weeks away from leaving for the UK for further studies. Baldev was back to his usual self after the diary incident. Veera was deep in thought thinking about her veerji, beeji and chaiji whom she would miss when she got a call. It was Karan.

Karan: "Veera, kya tu dhaba pe 5 minute mein aa sakti hai? Mujhe tujhse kuch zaroori baat karni thi, actually ek surprise hai hamare UK jaane se pehle."

Veera was curious to know what was so important that Karan wanted to tell her.

Veera: "Haan, main abhi aati hoon."

Veera arrived at the dhaba and saw Karan sitting at one of the tables in deep thought. When he saw her he gave her a huge smile.

Veera: "Kya baat hai. Tu bahut kush dikh raha hai. Kya hai yeh surprise?"

Karan: "Jo mujhse tujhse pehle heen kehna chahiye tha."

Back at Baldev and Gunjan's house...

Baldev was busy having his breakfast and didn't know why ever since that diary incident with Veera, he could not stop thinking about her. But things were back to the way it used to be between them. Their usual nok jhok and fights, like nothing had happened.

Baldev (to himself): "Baldev, kya ho raha hai tujhe? Uss Veera ke bare mein main kyu soch raha hoon? Woh pagal ladki sirf meri dushman rahegi, aur kuch nahin.

The phone began to ring and Gunjan picked it up. It was Veera.

Gunjan: "Kya hua Veera?"

Whatever the conversation was about between Veera and Gunjan, suddenly Gunjan's eyes widened and she said

Gunjan: "Kya, sach! Karan ne sach much woh kiya?"

Gunjan was so loud that Baldev couldn't help but eavesdrop on the conversation.

Gunjan: "Main abhi vaha tere ghar aa rahi hoon."

Baldev: "Ab kya hua? Tujhe abhi kyun uss Veera ke ghar jaana hai?"

Gunjan: "Veerji, aap yakeen nahin karenge, Veera ne bahut khushi ki baat kee hai. Karan ne use woh shaher wale jo dete hain na, promise ring, jaise sagai ki angoothi ki tarah, use de di."

Gunjan was looking very happy when she said this. Baldev who was busy drinking his tea began to cough.

Baldev: "K..Kya? Veera ki sagai Karan se? Yeh nahin ho sakta...Mera matlab hai, acchi khabar hai. Kum se kum ab woh bhootni is pind chod kar jaigi aur mera dimaag nahin khaigi."

But Baldev couldn't help but feel anger and irritation at Veera.

Baldev (thinking to himself): "Yeh Veera aisa kar kaise sakti hai. Sirf apne bare mein sochti hai. Usse toh pata bhi nahin ki uske parivar par kitna bada karz hai uss Surjit Singh ki vajah se."

Gunjan was going to Veera's house to congratulate her when she turned to ask Baldev:

Gunjan: "Veerji, aap bhi aiye na Veera ko badhai dene. Waise bhi woh ab 2 haftoh mein videsh jaane waali hai."

Baldev: "Haan, haan, chal hum dono chalte hain Veera ko badhai dene?"

At Ranvi and Veera's house...

Veera was home all alone when Baldev and Gunjan arrived. Baldev couldn't help but look straight at Veera's ring finger to confirm whether she was actually giving her vaada to Karan of all people. Sure enough, Veera had on a gold ring on her ring finger.

Veera: "Arre wah Baldev tub hi mujhe badhai dene aaya hai?"

Baldev: "Haan, mujhe bahut khushi hai ke tu bahut jald iss pind ko chod ke ja rahi hai uss Karan ke saath."

Baldev couldn't help but notice that Veera was looking very pretty in the salwaar kameez suit she had on. The earrings and bangles really brought out her beauty even more.

Veera: "Oi tu teekh toh hai na? Aise mujhe ghoor ghoor kar kyun dekh raha hai?"

Baldev: "Tujhe ghoor nahin raha hoon. Soch raha hoon ki bechare Karan ne tujhme kya dekha ki tujhe usne promise ring diya?"

Just then Karan came over to Veera's place.

Karan: "Veera, good tu ghar pe hai. Mujhe tujhse kuch baat karni thi."

Baldev: "Arre, haan haan, Karan main aur Gunjan toh nikal hi rahe the, tujhe Veera se apni parivar se milane aur apni zindagi ki planning karni hai na."

Karan looked confused by what Baldev said.

Karan: "Matlab? Main kuch samjha nahin?"

Veera and Gunjan quickly looked at each other nervously.

Veera: "Nahin, kuch nahi Karan. Yeh Baldev bhi na kuch bhi kehta rehta hai. Chal hum woh zaroori baat karte hain. Bye Gunjan didi aur Baldev. Aur thank you badhai dene ke liye."

Baldev couldn't put a finger on it exactly, but he knew that something was up. What was Veera upto? And why did Karan look confused when Baldev mentioned Karan's engagement to Veera?

That's all for this chapter. Hope you'll like it. Once again, feedback would be greatly appreciated. Chapter 4 will be put up soon.

 

 



Edited by pinkrose90 - 10 January 2014 at 4:56pm

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Nice update dear loved it
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Hmm Veera is too smart ... Baldev ko ullu bana rahi hai ... Nice Plz update soon :)

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Once again an amazin update..Tfs..waitin 4 d nxt update

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