VeeBa SS: Veera ke Dil Ki Baat Conclusion Updated on Pg 5.

Posted: 10 years ago

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Veera Ke Dil Ki Baat

Veera was busy in her room writing in her red diary
when her brother, Ranvi came in.


Ranvi: "Veera, tu har bar us laal wali diary mein ki
likhthi hai?"


Veera: "Arre, veerji kuch cheeze na private hoti
hain, mera matlab har cheez main aapko nahin bata sakti."


Ranvi: "Lekin tu itni saari baat hum sab se karti aur kehti hain, phir aur kya bacha hai jo tujhe likhna padta hain?


Veera: "veerji, hum ladkiyan na kuch cheese bata
nahin sakti, isliye hum diary mein likhte hain."


Just then Veera's phone rings and its Gunjan.


Veera: "Hello Gunjan didi, kya baat hain? Sab theekh
toh hain na?"


Veera noticed that when she said Gunjan's name Ranvi
started to blush.


Gunjan: "Haan Veera sab theekh hai. Voh tenu pata
hai voh love ishtory ki kitaab jiske bare mein tune mujhe bataya tha, jo hindi
mein hai, woh na mujhe padhni hai aur angrezi wali bhi?" Mainu shaadi se pehli
kuch angrezi toh aani chahiye."


Veera: "Arre waah Gunjan didi, main aapko voh dono kitaabe
zaroor doongi. Main vaha aakar aapko dedeti hoon."


Gunjan: "Arre nahin, main aati hoon vahan. Yahan
veerji abhi bhi tujh se naraaz hai, kyunki tune unhe ranvi se maafi mangne ko
kaha. Main vahan aati hoon."


Veera: "Theek hai Gunjan didi, lekin actually mujhe
bahar jaana hain karan ki madad karne, lekin veerji aur chaiji hai ghar pe. Toh
aap unse dono kitaab le sakte hain."


Veera kept her books ready for Gunjan which were kept
with some other books.


Veera: Veerji, woh laal wali kitaabe na Gunjan didi
ke liye hain, aap unhe vo wala de dijiye. Thank you."


Ranvi: "Haan, tu ja, mainu pata hai ki karna hai."


At Baldev and Gunjan's house...


Baldev: "Kahan ja rahi hai tu?"


Gunjan: "Woh veerji, main ek kitaab lene Veera ke
ghar ja rahi hoon."


Baldev: "Tu har baar us Veera se kyu milti hain, koi aur saheliyan nahin hai ki
jiske paas woh kitaab hai?"


Gunjan: "Nahi Veerji, aap kyu pareshan ho rahe ho,
main bus abhi aayi."


At Ranvi and Veera's house...


Gunjan: "Ranvi, Ranvi."


Ranvi: "Arre ki baat hai Gunjan, tujhe woh kitaab
chahiye na. Ek minute main le aata hoon Veera ki kamre se."


Gunjan: "Sach mein Ranvi, tu bahut accha veerji hai,
mere veerji ki tarah nahin, jo mere liye itna sa kaam bhi nahin karenge."


Ranvi smiled. Ranvi went upstairs to Veera's room
and found the red book that Veera told him to give Gunjan. But for the other
book, he noticed that there were two books in English. He decided to give both.


Ranvi: "Yeh le Gunjan, Veera ki kitaabe. Aur voh
angrezi wali bhi hain isme."


Gunjan: "Theekh hai, thank you. Main chalti hoon
varna veerji mujh par phir se gussa honge."


Gunjan left and when she arrived home she saw Baldev
was still fuming.


Baldev: "Aa gayi tu us bhootni se kitaab leke?"


Gunjan: "Arre, veerji aap bhi na, har baar veera pe
gussa hote ho, voh toh bahar gayi hai, karan ke saath."


Baldev: "Arre waah, pind di sherni pind me sabke
saamne Karan ke saath akeli chalti phir rahi he."


Gunjan ignored Baldev and went upstairs to her room.
For some reason, Baldev was curious to know what those books were that Veera
had given Gunjan. He decided he would look at it later when Gunjan was busy.


Gunjan: "Arre, yeh teesri kitaab toh Veera ki diary
hain. Main use vaapas kar deti hoon. Baldev who had been passing by Gunjan's
room heard this and couldn't believe his luck. Veera had left her diary in his
house. This was his chance to get back at her for all the times she had
outsmarted him.


Baldev: "Gunjan, ki hoya? Tu itni pareshan kyu dikh
rahi hai?"


Gunjan: "Woh kuch nahin veerji, bas aise hi."


Baldev thought of an idea.


Baldev: "Gunjan, aaj na main tenu woh lipistick aur
jo kuch tu lagati hain..khareedni le jaonga."


Gunjan couldn't believe that her brother was being
so nice.


Gunjan: "Sach Veerji, aap mainu lipistick aur makeup
khareedni le jayengi? Aap teekh toh hai na?


Baldev: "Arre ha, kya main apni behen ke liye kuch
accha nahin kar sakta? Tu ja tayaar ho ja, main bahar tera gadi mein wait
karoonga."


Gunjan left to get ready. This was the perfect time
for Baldev to get Veera's diary and he hid it inside his jacket.


Baldev: "Ab Veera tujhe toh main hara kar dikhaonga.
Tune aur tere veerji ne meri itni bezat ki, ab main tujhe dikhata hoon."


When Baldev and Gunjan returned home from shopping,
Baldev quickly went to his room so that he could finally read through Veera's
diary which was in Hindi.


Baldev: "Ab tak toh Veera ne sirf apne sheher wali
zindagi ki baat kari hai. Isse toh mera kuch faida nahin."


As Baldev continued reading through Veera's diary,
he found what he was looking for.


Veera's diary: "Jab se main pind vapas aayi hoon,
main aur Baldev hamesha jhagda karte hain. Baldev ab bada ho chukka hain. Ab
toh voh pind ka sher lagta hain.😳 Lekin main Baldev aur kisise se bhi yeh nahin
kahoongi. Jab se main vapas aayi hoon Baldev kabhi mujhe ladta jhagadta hai, aur
kabhi meri madad karta hain."


"Uss din, jab woh besharam ladke mujhe tang kar rahe
the aur Baldev ne mujhe unse bachaya, tab se main Baldev koh ek nayi nazar se
dekhne lagi hoon. Lekin uss din maine Baldev ko beech raaste choda aur vapis
pind agayi. Mujhe bohot bura laga, legin Baldev bhi mera dimaag kha raha tha
mujhse ladkar..."


Baldev: "Yeh toh kuch aur hi nikla. Veera ko toh
mujhse pyaar hone laga hain. Ab main kya karoon?"πŸ˜•

Thats it for Part 1. What did you guys think. Feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thanks and hope you enjoy reading my OS on VeeBa.



Edited by pinkrose90 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Great start!!! looking forward to the next part.
Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you!:) I will update with the next part soon!
Posted: 10 years ago
nice start dear
continue soon and do pm me
Posted: 10 years ago
Nice start ... Plz undate soon :)
Posted: 10 years ago
superb OS continue and do PM meπŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 10 years ago
Wow,πŸ‘
interesting,please update soon.
Posted: 10 years ago
WOW! Awesome! Continue soon!! πŸ˜›
Posted: 10 years ago
luvly start dear ...waitin 4 nxt update.plzz asap...
Posted: 10 years ago

Part 2

At Ranvi and Veera's house...

Veera: "Yeh meri diary kahan chali gayi? Abhi tak toh is table pe hi thi? Kahin Veerji ne meri diary Gunjan didi ko gulti se dedi toh?

Veera was hoping that that was not the case because even if Gunjan didn't read her diary, she knew that there would be one person who would, Baldev.

At Baldev and Gunjan's house...

Gunjan: "Arre, Veera ki diary kahan chali gayi? Maine toh sambhal kar yaha rakhi thi."

Gunjan was looking everywhere for Veera's diary but couldn't find it anywhere. Just then Gunjan's phone rang. It was Veera.

Veera: "Gunjan didi, kya aap ke paas veerji ne galti se meri laal wali diary de di kya?"

Gunjan: "Arre haan Veera, main abhi hi tujhe bulane wali thi. Maine sab jagah dhunda, lekin kahin nahin mili. Mujhe lagta hai ki teri diary kisi ne le li hai, aur tujhe pata hai kisne.."

Veera (replied in frustration): "Baldev! Main use chodungi nahin. Main abhi vahan aapke ghar a rahin hoon. Baldev hain na vahan?"

Gunjan: "Haan, aur ab mujhe samaj main aaya kyu veerji mujhe bahar lena chahte the, taki unhe teri diary mile."

Veera arrived at Baldev and Gunjan's house ready to pick a fight with Baldev.

Veera: "Baldev, Baldev. Kahan hai tu. Jaldi bahar aa. Mujhe pata hai tune meri diary li."

Baldev angrily came downstairs from his room dressed in a stylish t-shirt which was tight around his arms, clearly showing his nice, strong, muscular body. Veera couldn't help but look and admire him, forgetting for a second why she was here in the first place.

Baldev: "Arre kya hai, subah subah pind di musibat kyun mera dimaag kha rahi hai?"

Veera quickly looked away from Baldev before replying,

Veera: "Mujhe meri diary vapas chahiye."

Baldev: "Tujhe koi aur nahin mila tha iss pind mein jisse tu pasand karti hain. Tujhe mujhe hi mila tha pasand karne?"

Veera is shocked that Baldev read that part of her diary, the one part she especially did not want anyone, especially Baldev to ever read and find out about.

Veera: "Oi, mujhe bhi koi shock nahin hai ki main tujhe pasand karoon. Lekin mere dil mein jo hain maine likh diya. Tujhe kya problem hai. Kya maine tujhe kahan ki tu mera boyfriend bane ya phir mujhe tujhse shaadi karni hai? Tujhse toh accha Karan hai. Jab woh yahan pind mein hain, toh main kyu sochun tere bare mein."

Baldev didn't know why he was suddenly getting irritated by Veera not admitting to liking him more than she let on. And that is why Baldev replied differently this time.

Baldev: "Sheher ka ladka Karan? Iss pind mein koi ladka nahin mila kya, ke tu us Karan ke saath ghoomne lagi hai?"

Veera was confused with Baldev's sudden change of reaction. What was wrong with him? She couldn't understand Baldev making fun of Karan.

Gunjan was watching all this unfold from her room upstairs. She decided it was time for her to be the peacemaker between her veerji and Veera.

Gunjan: "Bas..aap dono aise hi ladai karte rahenge kya? Toh kya hua veerji agar Veera ko aap acche lagte hain. Aap kyun itna gussa ho rahe hain. Waise bhi, aap aur Veera kabhi saath nahin ho sakte hain. Aap dono kitne alag hai. Veera rahi padhi likhi, aur aap ko angregi bhi nahin aati."

Baldev couldn't believe that Gunjan was insulting him in front of Veera of all people.

Baldev: "Oi, ki matlab hai tera. Veera aur main is pind ke hi hain. Hum ek doosre koh bachpan se jante hain, aur ladai jhagda karte aain hai. Toh kya hua ki voh mujhse aur padhi likhi hai?"

Veera smiled a little. She couldn't believe that Baldev was actually being nice to her. Baldev noticed Veera smile at what he said.

Baldev (thinking to himself): "Arre, yeh maine kya kar diya? Ab yeh Veera soch rahi hain ke main bhi usse pyaar karne laga hoon. Nahin, kabhi nahin." He decided he had to take action before Veera actually fell in love with him.

Baldev: "Mera matlab yeh hai ki kaun iss bhootni se shaadi karega. Main tujhse kabhi pyaar nahin kar sakta samjhi. Ab mujhe bahar jana hai kaam karne."

Baldev left leaving Veera and Gunjan confused.

Gunjan: "Arre Veera, lagta hai veerji sach main tujhse pyaar nahin karte. Naraaz ho kar phir se chale gaye."

Veera: "Gunjan didi, aap bhi na. Baldev ko main bahut acchi tarah se janti hoon. Main zaroor uske dil mein hoon, bas use ehsaas dilaana hai. Mujhe pata hai kya karna hai."

Gunjan and Veera smiled at each other.

That's it for Part 2. Hope you like it. Feedback would be greatly appreciated. Hope you enjoy reading.

 

 

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