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VeeBa SS: Veera ke Dil Ki Baat Conclusion Updated on Pg 5.

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Please comment and let me know what you think. This
is my first OS on VeeBa.Smile

Veera Ke Dil Ki Baat

Veera was busy in her room writing in her red diary
when her brother, Ranvi came in.


Ranvi: "Veera, tu har bar us laal wali diary mein ki
likhthi hai?"


Veera: "Arre, veerji kuch cheeze na private hoti
hain, mera matlab har cheez main aapko nahin bata sakti."


Ranvi: "Lekin tu itni saari baat hum sab se karti aur kehti hain, phir aur kya bacha hai jo tujhe likhna padta hain?


Veera: "veerji, hum ladkiyan na kuch cheese bata
nahin sakti, isliye hum diary mein likhte hain."


Just then Veera's phone rings and its Gunjan.


Veera: "Hello Gunjan didi, kya baat hain? Sab theekh
toh hain na?"


Veera noticed that when she said Gunjan's name Ranvi
started to blush.


Gunjan: "Haan Veera sab theekh hai. Voh tenu pata
hai voh love ishtory ki kitaab jiske bare mein tune mujhe bataya tha, jo hindi
mein hai, woh na mujhe padhni hai aur angrezi wali bhi?" Mainu shaadi se pehli
kuch angrezi toh aani chahiye."


Veera: "Arre waah Gunjan didi, main aapko voh dono kitaabe
zaroor doongi. Main vaha aakar aapko dedeti hoon."


Gunjan: "Arre nahin, main aati hoon vahan. Yahan
veerji abhi bhi tujh se naraaz hai, kyunki tune unhe ranvi se maafi mangne ko
kaha. Main vahan aati hoon."


Veera: "Theek hai Gunjan didi, lekin actually mujhe
bahar jaana hain karan ki madad karne, lekin veerji aur chaiji hai ghar pe. Toh
aap unse dono kitaab le sakte hain."


Veera kept her books ready for Gunjan which were kept
with some other books.


Veera: Veerji, woh laal wali kitaabe na Gunjan didi
ke liye hain, aap unhe vo wala de dijiye. Thank you."


Ranvi: "Haan, tu ja, mainu pata hai ki karna hai."


At Baldev and Gunjan's house...


Baldev: "Kahan ja rahi hai tu?"


Gunjan: "Woh veerji, main ek kitaab lene Veera ke
ghar ja rahi hoon."


Baldev: "Tu har baar us Veera se kyu milti hain, koi aur saheliyan nahin hai ki
jiske paas woh kitaab hai?"


Gunjan: "Nahi Veerji, aap kyu pareshan ho rahe ho,
main bus abhi aayi."


At Ranvi and Veera's house...


Gunjan: "Ranvi, Ranvi."


Ranvi: "Arre ki baat hai Gunjan, tujhe woh kitaab
chahiye na. Ek minute main le aata hoon Veera ki kamre se."


Gunjan: "Sach mein Ranvi, tu bahut accha veerji hai,
mere veerji ki tarah nahin, jo mere liye itna sa kaam bhi nahin karenge."


Ranvi smiled. Ranvi went upstairs to Veera's room
and found the red book that Veera told him to give Gunjan. But for the other
book, he noticed that there were two books in English. He decided to give both.


Ranvi: "Yeh le Gunjan, Veera ki kitaabe. Aur voh
angrezi wali bhi hain isme."


Gunjan: "Theekh hai, thank you. Main chalti hoon
varna veerji mujh par phir se gussa honge."


Gunjan left and when she arrived home she saw Baldev
was still fuming.


Baldev: "Aa gayi tu us bhootni se kitaab leke?"


Gunjan: "Arre, veerji aap bhi na, har baar veera pe
gussa hote ho, voh toh bahar gayi hai, karan ke saath."


Baldev: "Arre waah, pind di sherni pind me sabke
saamne Karan ke saath akeli chalti phir rahi he."


Gunjan ignored Baldev and went upstairs to her room.
For some reason, Baldev was curious to know what those books were that Veera
had given Gunjan. He decided he would look at it later when Gunjan was busy.


Gunjan: "Arre, yeh teesri kitaab toh Veera ki diary
hain. Main use vaapas kar deti hoon. Baldev who had been passing by Gunjan's
room heard this and couldn't believe his luck. Veera had left her diary in his
house. This was his chance to get back at her for all the times she had
outsmarted him.


Baldev: "Gunjan, ki hoya? Tu itni pareshan kyu dikh
rahi hai?"


Gunjan: "Woh kuch nahin veerji, bas aise hi."


Baldev thought of an idea.


Baldev: "Gunjan, aaj na main tenu woh lipistick aur
jo kuch tu lagati hain..khareedni le jaonga."


Gunjan couldn't believe that her brother was being
so nice.


Gunjan: "Sach Veerji, aap mainu lipistick aur makeup
khareedni le jayengi? Aap teekh toh hai na?


Baldev: "Arre ha, kya main apni behen ke liye kuch
accha nahin kar sakta? Tu ja tayaar ho ja, main bahar tera gadi mein wait
karoonga."


Gunjan left to get ready. This was the perfect time
for Baldev to get Veera's diary and he hid it inside his jacket.


Baldev: "Ab Veera tujhe toh main hara kar dikhaonga.
Tune aur tere veerji ne meri itni bezat ki, ab main tujhe dikhata hoon."


When Baldev and Gunjan returned home from shopping,
Baldev quickly went to his room so that he could finally read through Veera's
diary which was in Hindi.


Baldev: "Ab tak toh Veera ne sirf apne sheher wali
zindagi ki baat kari hai. Isse toh mera kuch faida nahin."


As Baldev continued reading through Veera's diary,
he found what he was looking for.


Veera's diary: "Jab se main pind vapas aayi hoon,
main aur Baldev hamesha jhagda karte hain. Baldev ab bada ho chukka hain. Ab
toh voh pind ka sher lagta hain.Embarrassed Lekin main Baldev aur kisise se bhi yeh nahin
kahoongi. Jab se main vapas aayi hoon Baldev kabhi mujhe ladta jhagadta hai, aur
kabhi meri madad karta hain."


"Uss din, jab woh besharam ladke mujhe tang kar rahe
the aur Baldev ne mujhe unse bachaya, tab se main Baldev koh ek nayi nazar se
dekhne lagi hoon. Lekin uss din maine Baldev ko beech raaste choda aur vapis
pind agayi. Mujhe bohot bura laga, legin Baldev bhi mera dimaag kha raha tha
mujhse ladkar..."


Baldev: "Yeh toh kuch aur hi nikla. Veera ko toh
mujhse pyaar hone laga hain. Ab main kya karoon?"Confused

Thats it for Part 1. What did you guys think. Feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thanks and hope you enjoy reading my OS on VeeBa.





Edited by pinkrose90 - 13 January 2014 at 5:21pm

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Thank you!:) I will update with the next part soon!
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