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Th2#Dhokha Ya Sachha Pyar Part 29 pg 47-48 Dec 25 (Page 28)

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i have read this ff many time but never commented..

its really awsum..

just loved it..

update soon

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PART  28



Arjun look outside from window... he sees One small Puppy , just wonders here & there... suddenely he feels lost or sumthing & Puppy starts to bark... One Big Dog comes there & start to lick him.. Puppy start to cuddle with that Dog . Dog also seat & Puupy seat literally on Dog , but Dog does not do anything...  On seeing Arjun understands that Dog must Puppy's Mother.


Arjun smeil seeing them...


" Bacche... Baccha chahe kuch bhi kare...  per Maa... "  he turn his gaze & sees Riya caress her flat tummy & smiling...


" Gud Mrng baby... pata hai aaj na Mumma ko Ice cream khane ka man kar raha hai ,,, aap bata do kunsi wali??" 



Arjun sees her love for their unborn child...


"Abhi to vo paida bhi nhi hua , per phir bhi kitne sarri baate karti ho uske saath , kitna pyar karti ho use...aur... meri Ayesha... " Arjun sighs sadly



" Sirf ek galti kar di... aur uski itni badi saza????? ha jaanta hue usne sab ka Dil dukha diya... per... per Riya ko pyar mila Maa ka... ye tak nhi jaanta ki Ayesha vaha theek hai ya nhi????? Apne aasu chupana use ach se pata hai... aur us inssan per bharosa... koi sawal hi paida nhi hota... agar mai yaha hota to Aashu ye sab karne hi nhi deta...na Riya ke saath...


lekin .. Aai???? Ayesha unki bhi beti hai, jaise mai hue unka ... vo bolti to nhi per shayhd vo bhi Aashu ko dekhna chahthi ho???? baat karna chathi ho???? per Baba... ha unke dar se chup hogi... Khel kasis aur ka , Mohra bana koi , aur Dukh zhel raha aur koi... va ... va bhagwan kya khel hai tera... lekin jitne bhi dard  mujhe milte hai... utna hi mai aur ubharkar aata hue... ... ab Aashu ko... aur Aai ko aamne saamne lana hi hoga... " Arjun thinks ...


Here sameer already reach his destination... he comes to one person...


He gives him 10 ,000/-

" Ye baat agar unke siva kisi aur ko pata bhi chala ya hawa  ne is baat ka zikr bhi kiya... to tere Chauthe pe aaunga... Phool maala lekar... "


" Nahi... saab ... ho jayega...ha... mai ... gadbad nhi karunga... ... mere bhagwan ki kasam..." that person says & sameer angrily look at him & goes from there..


Milkman comes to Rawte Household & as ususal Aai open door to take Milk... as soon as she open door... Milkman hurridly gives her Milk & looking here & there.. when he sees no one is around , he immeadtly give one chit to Aai...


"Maaf kar dena Memsaab , per... per aap ... " he abt to complete his sentence but he sees
Surykant Rawte come there... 


" Kay kas kay???? bar aahe na sagale?" ( kya ? kaise chal raha sab? ) he ask in deep but calm tone...


" Ho  Dada tumchi krupa... " ( Ha Dada sab aapki Meherbani... ) He answers in low but polite tone..





Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 30 October 2014 at 11:57am

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Aai hurridly goes to Kitchen & keep Milk on Stove...

"Ye Chitthi????? " she fearly open chit & reads


  " Aapki Beti se Milna hai?????  Krishna Temple Tod Eve 4: 45pm. "


"Ho kon sakta hai?????Aashu???? nhi ... ya Javai bapu ??? " ( Dammad ji ) nahi nahi... per ... nhi koi mazak kar raha hoga... jane do mai nhi jaaungi vaha...koi khatra hua to... " Aai thinks...


" Ye phad kar phek deti hue... varna baar baar yahi sochti reh jaaungi... " Aai thinks & throws torn pices of chit in dustbin...


Arjun comes for Break fast , Riya already serving Break fast to Shree & His Father...


Arjun take his seat...& wish Good Mrng  to everyone... Today in Break fast  Idali & Chutni...


Riya take lots of Chutny & all look at her...Suryakant Rawte also look at her & smile inwardly...

" Hmmm so bacche mai kuch gun Bua ke bhi hai... " he thinks  he still remebers Ayesha... always serve herself lots of chutny... she likes it very much...


Suudenely he look at Riya...  he sees Arjun also look at her... Arjun silently keep 2 more Idlies in Riya's plate , while Riya angrily serve him Sambar til his bowl are full with Curry... & then give him glare... Arjun silently start to taste  Samabr with spoon  ,while Riya happily offers him 2 Idlies that he serve her sometime back...


Surykant Rawte goes for his work... & Arjun look at his Aai...

 " Aai  ko mai aaj bahar lekar jaaunga hi... ye tay raha..." Arjun dermines with himself...



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Ariya nok jok scute...
oh so Arjun determined to make maa beti meet..
Suryakant is nice actually... not like Mr. RathoreAngry
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Wow
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
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Mannu remaining part????
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Ooohhh wow so cute one

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