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Th2#Dhokha Ya Sachha Pyar Part 29 pg 47-48 Dec 25 - Page 21

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Arjun & Aai seat in Car..


Arjun driving today & Aai take Co-Passenger seat. Arjun notices that his Mother is thinking something... she is looking lost...


Arjun start Radio... & look at his Aai... Aai suudenely smiles little knowing her son...


"  Mer Ghar aayi ek nahi Pari... ek nahi pari... " song starts & Aai smiles to herself... rembering Ayesha, her second daughter... she is sweet , mautre... at age of 6  she handles her father...

" Sach hi kaha tha kisine Ladkiya bahut jaldi badi ho jati hai... Aashu bhi kab badi ho gayi pata hi nahi chala hamhe... " Aai thought..


 Arjun look outside & sees they reach there destination...


" Aai hum pahunch gaye... "Arjun declares

Aai smile at him & look outside & shocked...

Its same Temple where Chit Owner wants to meet her... she suddenely feels all her strenght  gone...


and song starts on Radio..


" Takdeer se... takdeer se bigdi hue takdeer bana de...

apne pe bharosa hai to ek daav laga de,,,

laga de daav laga de... "



" Hey bhagwan kaise Paiksha ( exam ) le rahe app hamari... ek taraf  vo ajnabi... aur dusri taraf mera apna beta... kya karu???? " Aai thinks & look at Arjun...


He take her to Mandir... both take Darshan & also surrounded by Bodyguards...

Krishna is smaile at her & Aai look at him with hopeful eyes...

" Kisi ka saath du kanha ... kya karu???? dono mere apne per aaj meri beti ko meri jarurat hogi... kya vo Chit usne to nahi bheji??? meri madad karo ... " she plaeds him thrugh mind...


and slwoly takes her steps backword... she turn & bodygurad look at her... but she shows him her hand... he try to speak but she already starts to walk.. she come outside from darshan area & stands near Shoe rack...


" Hum yaha aa to gaye... per vo kon hai , kaha milega, ye to hum... " she thinks suddenely one boy comes & give her something... she sees one small paper...


" Pata tha , aap aayegi jarur...

Madir ke peeche vo ghana jungle hai vaha aana... "


aur ha ye chit phad kar dustbin mai phek dena... "



she reads it & look everywhere , but she does not find him / her... she torn chit in small pieces & throw them is dustbin...

She take her pallu on her head so nobody reconzise her .. she starts to walk towards Jungle..


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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update 
cont.soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update...
Arjun's Aai is confused...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Riya's best friend...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Gulab dekhne se baby khoobsurat hoga...😲😲😲
Arjun ko namkin chai mili...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Aai missing Aisha...
Arjun bhi Aai ko mandir le aaya...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Aai jungle mein chali bhi gayi...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Continue soon...
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She entered in deep... & stop looking here & there...


" Mai jaanta tha... aap jaruru aayegi Mrs.Rawte... " one cold but deep husky voice says .


 Aai look at every where & found someone stand  little away from her , she can't see his face , because his back only visible... he wears dark black colour Hoodie.. that totally cover him... Backside of his Hoddie ther is pic of flying dragon...


" Kooon ho tum?" Aai says , she knows she  scares , but have to to strong...


" Itni jaldi kyu hai , meri pechan ki? vaise aapki beti ke bare mai nahi jaana aapko?" he ask


" Kya hua Aashu ko?" vo thik , vo... vo... use kuch... "



" Relax... vo bilkul thik hai... per bahut Pativrata hai... ekdum achi bhali ladki... aur ha tabiyat bhi theek hai uski.. " he says & rest his hand on Tree branch..


Aai sees his Dimond Ring...



" Ye to bahut mehngi hogi.. matlab ye koi aam aamdami nahi.." Aai thinks..


" Per ye baat karne ke liye to tum mujhe call kar sakte the , ya milne bhi aa sakte the ... " Aai ask.


she hears he sighs ...


" Acha... aur kya gurantee ki aapke Pati , aur Aapka Arjun mujhe jinda chod dete???????? ( with that he turn to face her & removes his Hoddie cap ) Sasuma...  "




" Sameerrr... tum???? agar ye tumhari koi chaal hai na... to sochna bhi mat... " Aai warns him & start to go backwards as sameer comes to her...


" Dariye mat... mai sach mai kuch nahi karunga... " he says with serious tone & shows his empty hands...


Aai knows she can't believe him.. He is Man , that destroy their happiness , ther world... her daughter loves him very much... she leave everything behind for him.. she dn't know how she is now?? is she still alive????? she knows her daughter did grave mistake by marrying Man who only make fun of her love , her emotions...


" mai jaanta hue , aap kya soch rahi hai?"

Aai look at him suspiciously..


" Aap baithye yaha... " he shows her big stone... she reclutant , but her request... so she finally seats down..


" Aap yahi soch rahi hai na , ki mai hi hue jisne aapko aapki beti se dur kiya... ha vo sach nahi jaanti...  is chahre ke peeche ka sach... ek aisa sach jise mai khud abhi samaj paaya ... is zooth chahre ke peeche ek aisa inssan ka chehera hai vo aapki beti se pyar karta hai... itna pyar ... ( he sighs ) vo khud nahi jaata..."


" yakken kar lu is baat per?" Aai scarsctiaclly ask..


Sameer smiles faintly... " Bharosa karna ya na karna... ye aap per hai... lekin... aaj Riya ko jab khush dekht hue tab ehsaas hota hai , ki maine kya kiya... Riya sach jaan kar bhi Arjun ko apna sakti hai , aur aap bhi sab kuch jaan kar use apna rahi hai, uske is halat mai bhi... uska dhyan rakh rahi hai... "


Sameer smiles himself...


" Jab Baap itna bada ho , paisa wala ho,,, to ek bate aur kya kar sakta hai????? khaas kuch nhai.. bas ladkiya patana , aisa karna aur baap ke paise uda dena... aur phir use pata chalta hai ki uske Bap ka ek dushman hai... aur uska baap use aage nahi jaa pa raha... phir... us ladke aur uske baap ne.. mil kar kuch challe kheli... uski kamjori pata lagayi... uske ghar mai sab se kamjor ek hi kadi thi... .. bas use todna tha... uski beti... hmmm. us ladke uske saath pyar ka naatak kiya... aur bhagha kar badi hi aaram se shadi bhi karli... ..

 us ladke sirf itna pata tha ki uske baap ko kisi bhi taraf vo mukam , vo jagah chayie... aur us vo dilani hai... bas... shayhd tab tak vo ladki,,, ek khlino thi us ke liye... jab chahe vo usper pyar barsata , jab chahe use zkham deta... .. per dhire dhire sab... badal gya... nahi soacha tha ... vo hone laga... itna kuchhone ki baad bhi vo ladki uske saath rahi , uska pyar , us aldke ko badalne laga... use ye ehsaas diane laga ki duniya mai aur kuch bhi jiski vo gulami kar sakta hai... " PYAAR"


aaj vo khud nahi jaanta hi us ladki se kab se pyar karne laga , aur kyu karne laga,,, uske hassi , yahi ek vaha hai ,, us ladki ki jeevan ki... uske aasu use bhi takleef deti hai... use bhi dukh dete hai... pata nahi kyu... us paagal, aawara ladke ke saath bhagwan ne us ladki ko kyu bandh diya... takleef hoti hai... ( he sighs & wips his eyes ) takleef hoti jab us ladki ka pyar mehsus hota hai... Dil per patthar barsate hai , tab mere chillane ke baad bhi , mere itne dukh dene ke baad bhi... vo mujhse aakar ye bolti hai... " sab thik ho jayega Sameer , mai hue na... mai kuch galat nahi hone dungi... "


" Hummm , jiske saath itna galath ho raha hai , vo ladki khud mujhe dilasa deti hai... dar lagta hai ki jab use sach pata chalega... to kya vo... har ek koshish karta hue ki vo sach tak kabhi na pahunche... uska yahi ek zhooth uske liye khushi hai ,uski jine ke karan hai... "


sameer stops & takes long braeth & look at Mrs. rawte...


" Aai... shayhd ye kehne ka hque nahi hai mujhe... per bhi .. aaj vada karta hue aap se.. aapki beti ko  aaj tak jo pyar mila , jo kushi mili... vo sirf ek banavat thi , dhokha tha... lkin ab use uska pyar , uska ehsaas jarur milega... jab Riya aur masa ko saath dekha... aur khaas kar ke Aashu ki baichani... tab ehsaas hua , ki kya khoya hai usne... " sameer says & look at Mrs. rawte...


" Vo kabhi kaehgi nahi.. uska darad kabhi uske face per nahi aayega... vo use kab chupa degi... ye to pata bhi nahi chalta ... akeli roti rehegi... per sab ke saamne ... sirf hasi hogi uske cahhre per... sirf hasi... "


Aai's eyes moist  hearing this... 

" Kya aap milna cahegi,,, meri patni se???? Meri Aashu se?" Samer ask in hopful tone...


" Ha... mujhe milna hai meri beti se... meri Nahi se bacchi se... " Aai says & wipe her eyes with her pallu...


" Ab hamhe chalna chayie... andhera ho raha hai... "


Aai look at surroundings...


" Mai aapko bahar tak pahuncha deta hue.. " sameer says &  walk with her towards Entrance of Jungle...


Suudenely Aai's leg slips & she fell. sameer immeadtly held her & hold her by shoulders...


" Aap thik to hai na?"

" Ha , bas Dr. ke paas jana hoga... "

" Hmm " sameer reply...finally they come outside ... 

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Aai try to leave his hand... but she can't...


"Plz... aap nahi chal pa rahi..."


" Agar usne dekh liya to?"


" hmmm , to... maar dega, aur kya?" Sameer says


" Per mai nhai chahti ki Mere Damaad ko koi kuch kahe"Aai says & sameer just look at her...


but what Aai fears , that happen exactly... he sees his Aai with him... the person he hates most... he wants to kill that person but can't , bcoz his sister happiness & his wife love attachd to that person... he immeadtly rush to them...


Both sees this... Aai immeadtly wishpers

" call karna mujhe aur bata dena, ki kaha milna hai... "


" Per aapka no... " Sameer absent mindedly says 


" Jo mere ghar per mujhe Chit send kar sakta hai , kya vo ek Phone no nahi pata laga sakta?" Aai ask him & smile..




" Aaai " Arjun somehow controls his voice..


Sameer immeadtly laeve Aai ..

" Vo... gir gayi thi parikrama karte samay... shayhd moch ho... "

Arjun immeadtly hold his Aai by shoulders.. 


Sameer laeves from there wearing his hoodie... before anyone notice him...


" Aaai aap theek to hai? usne kuch???" Arjun worridly ask

" Mai theek hue... bas gir gayi thi... ghar chale Arjun? raat hone wali hai...aur tere Baba ghar aa sakte hai... "


" Ji.."


Arjun says & help her to walk..


Sameer retuens Home & goes to room... he hears some voices ...


He enters in his room & smiles happily...


" Bhavna... tum????? are Bhabhji... " he give morestrees on word bhabhiji...


" Shut up... U Rawdy Rathod... vaise hame shadi pe kyu nahi bulaya?"


Sameer comes & seat on Bed..

"Aap ko ko kya . maine to apne maa - Baap ko bhi nahi bulaya... "ans winks..


" Oh... "

Ayseha smile at this...


"vaise Aashu... " sameer saysbut Bhavna cuts him...


" Ammm Ashu... ha love & all that... per maine to suna tha ki inka naam Ayesha hai..." Bhavna says playfully...


" OH God...Bhanva tum abhi tak nahi badli... pata nhai mere us serious bhai ka kya hota hoga, kaise rehta hoga vo is Shaitan ladki ke saath... ?" sameer says with drama...


" Tumhe to mai... " Bhanva says with fake anger & gets up from her seat , sameer aslo get up & starts to run , he open door & bump on someone...


sameer look at him & hug him tightly...


Bhanva also stops ..


That person look at both .

Bhanva immeadtly staedies herself & give him sweet smile..

"Gatham... vo so gayi?" Bhavna ask


That person is none other than Gautham Rathod... a Multi Billonire & sameer's first cousin...
 

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Precap :


"Nonsense " She says

" Nonsense "

" Utter Nonsense " he says

" Utter Nonsense "


" Riya... " he warns


" Riya... "


Riya smile & kiss on Doll Cheeck...


" Kya karu Raam , mujhe buddha mil gaya... "  she sings

" Kya karu Raam... " Doll abt to complete song but Riya removes her battery.


"I love You... " he says & pull her on him...

Ayesha just wipe her taers.
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome
thnx for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Di it's wonderful update
Loved Riya's comments on Arjun
Wow conversation between Arjun's mother and Sam was emotional
It's superb
Loved Raisha
Precap seems interesting
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon
Nd Thanks for the pm di
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome

super update

riya's comment was fab

con sooon

thank u sooo much 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome part 
Aai came temple with Arjun 
Arjun want to talk with her 
Sammer explanation is very well 
Aisha really love him so much 
Don't know what happened when she got to know truth 
Hope she will Ok 
New entry is nice 
Con sooon 
And thanks for pm