I remember when I started reading this story you had a lot of chapters already up. I just have to say how beautiful this story is and how beautifully you have written it. Everything about it is so original and unique.
Beginning with the circus/festival where Khushi finds out her life partner will be Arnav Singh Raizada. Fast forwarding with Khushi having first conversation with Arnav Singh Raizada on the phone where Arnav seems rude. I liked how you have shown Khushi being a strong woman standing up for herself in the collage but when things were getting to far Arnav came to the rescue of Khushi and become friends with her. And so the story continues.
The various scenes you have written shows the gradual progress of Arnav and Khushi's relationship getting stronger. The scene where Khushi wakes up in Arnav's bed and thinks that something happened between them I think was a situation that really helped Khushi trust in Arnav to grow.
It really helped Khushi see how much she was in the wrong and if she would have let Arnav talk everything would have been sorted out a longtime ago.
There is also the jealousy aspect coming in to play every now and then. Khushi feeling a bit jealous when her friend talks to Arnav in university and she even refused on behalf of Arnav that he wouldn't be attending the wedding which I think was shocking for both Arnav and Khushi's friend.
The emotions of Khushi missing her parents on many occasions/situations and being an orphan all her life was shown beautifully.
This is another thing that made Arnav see Khushi in a different light besides Khushi being a traditional Indian girl. I think Arnav finds Khushi a very strong woman and he really respects Khushi for the woman she has become after so many struggles in her life. That is what I think attracts Arnav to Khushi because Khushi is so different from the women Arnav has grown up seeing.
I think Arnav is becoming more dependent on Khushi especially when Khushi didn't talk to him after she wakes up in Arnav's bed and thinks something happened between them. The whole time Khushi didn't talk to him he will look at her in class... Arnav missed Khushi and Khushi missed Arnav.
I don't think Arnav will be able to bear a distance between them now that they have become really close. Maybe Arnav doesn't know but he is becoming attach to Khushi and I think even falling for her, am I right? Arnav finds peace in Khushi's presence.
I think Khushi is also a bit attracted to Arnav.
I have to add I also like how you made Khushi sing while Arnav and Khushi dance together. I think they danced in rain... It was very romantic.
Especially how Arnav was calling Khushi Celine Dion.
Another scene that was very nicely written was when Arnav feeds Khushi gol gappas because I think Khushi was hungry but she had henna on her hands. Very romantic and a sweet gesture!
Besides that I find Arnav and his grandmothers Skype conversations very cute and heartwarming. Good job!
On to the nicknames, Tsunami and Gloomy! The nicknames are so uniquely different yet the names Gloomy and Tsunami fits Arnav and Khushi's personality and characters perfectly.
I liked the realistic way you have written this story with Arnav and Khushi relationship gradually building from friendship, to being comfortable in each other prescience that Khushi visits Arnav house without hesitation and now to something more.
Your writing style is simple and it conveys the message to me. I think that the simple sentences express more of the characters emotions and the depth of their sentiments. You are doing a wonderful job.
My words are not enough to explain how much your story concept is very unique and beautifully written.
I was not much of a reader but after coming on India forums and reading wonderful work on Arnav and Khushi from talented writers, like you, I have become a reader.
You are a phenomenal writer and I am writing this message to tell you how much I enjoyed reading your Fate-Mate.
P.S. I saw that you have updated chapter 37 and I noticed that I missed something as I read the first few lines. So, I went back to chapter 36 which I understand why you took it off. So I read some of the comments and realized that I didn't read chapter 36. The last chapter I read was when at the end of the chapter Arnav takes Khushi to his office because Khushi finds out Arnav is her boss. I would really like to read Arnav and Khushi's conversation... Is there anyway I can?