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Fate-Mate Thread 13 Chapter 37 (Page 19)

akshu.ray27 Senior Member
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Posted: 28 January 2014 at 8:54am | IP Logged

Dear Fate-Mate,

I was/am super excited about this day. I had not seen you for more than a year now and I can't tell you how much I have been looking forward to this day! I wished for you in every prayer. I wished for you upon Birthday candles, shooting stars, four leaf clovers, stray eyelashes, pennies in the fountain, dandelion fluff and every other possible thing, truly and sincerely! A year passed by and even as all my fears rose to surface, there was something in me that really made me believe that I would see you yet again. I can't explain, I just knew it. Today as we meet again, the feeling I am going through right now is indescribable and something I'll never forget. I hope one day you realize how strongly you managed to wrap yourself around every detail of my existence. You are my most priceless possession! You mean everything to me! I'd like to thank your creator - KARMA CHAMELEON for attracting such a magical piece of brilliance into my life because it has truly changed my life. I mean it.  Meeting you again is the best feeling in the world and I definitely hope that it won't be another year before I see you again!

Happiest soul in this universe,
Akshu.

******************

Dear KC,

I must have done something really good in life that you came along one day to reorganize my life. I feel like a happier person today and there is no one else other than you who deserves the credit for that. I know it sounds so cliche but "Thank You" cannot express the depth of gratitude I feel for you. You will never know the impact you have made in my life. If Fate-Mate is my life, you are my inspiration to life.

THANK YOU...

for the most treasured gift of my life

for always bringing a smile on my face

for all the LOL's :)

for always being there for me

for guiding me in the right path when I lost my way

for your inspirational words

for treating me with such kindness and respect

and many more...

I cannot agree more on this saying "We don't meet people by accident. They are meant to cross our path for a reason". You definitely crossed mine for a big fat reason KC :-)

Your admirer for life,
Akshu.

*************************

R.E.S



Edited by akshu.ray27 - 28 January 2014 at 8:51am

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Posted: 28 January 2014 at 9:40am | IP Logged
god...the update is awesome..the emotions are portrayed..very beautifully...

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Posted: 28 January 2014 at 9:53am | IP Logged
OMG an update yayyy...wow...will bk bk after reading :D
Edited!
wow that was one long and an amazing update! the dream sequence was awesome... but y did arnav leave her? does it signify anything?
and she does not know ASR is Arnav Singh Raizada right?
the emotions and feelings were just perfect... i love when they talk to each other...
n im glad Arnav finally accepted she is his girl :D
eagerly waiting for the next :)

I got confused if you want us to leave the email id's on this thread or the other.
I already have mentioned my id in the other thread..
Just to be sure u add me here is my email id again: [email protected]



Edited by luvbug - 28 January 2014 at 1:01pm

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Posted: 28 January 2014 at 10:11am | IP Logged
nyc update worth the waitEmbarrassed

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Posted: 28 January 2014 at 10:13am | IP Logged
wow!
Thats what i felt after reading the part..
its feels like its been ages! and soo want to read the whole story..
but because i have followed the story from the beginning, i am soo used to reading and understanding the feelings behind your writing.. welcome back!
Loved it :)

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Posted: 28 January 2014 at 10:22am | IP Logged
Awesome awesome update! Khushi's dream in the forest the candle to her waking and not recognizing the surroundings- the agony the panic was so beautifully written! The chaos at work - no one able to reach ASR - manny saying he will quit making khushi worried for asr and also convincing him not to resign.. She unknowingly coming to tsunami'a house the relief that washes over her when he calls her gloomy not khushi surpasses all her emotions and she is able to feel the relief surge through her and anger ebbing away! He compares him to her father.. She feels lonely without him.. She wants him to keep the promise of never leaving her.. He cares about her more than himself.. He is hurt bcoz she is hurt.. He is ready to even leave her if she will be happy - anything for her.. The embrace the mixture of emotions portrayed the struggle of these two people was so beautiful.. The hug was everything for these two! Loved the update!!!

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Posted: 28 January 2014 at 10:40am | IP Logged
oh kc u have made our day with ur dhamakedar updt
an enthralling updt
gloomy's decision 2 resign ... knwng abt tsunami disappearance... gloomy at tsunami's place unknwngly...hm calling gloomy .. dr tlk... khushi wantng arnav nt 2 leave her... nt wantng hm 2 brk d promise he made...hs realisation dat "Yes, she was the girl..."
and last but nt d least 

Muskuraaye toh...Muskuraane Ke... Karz Utaarne Honge
Muskuraauun Kabhii...Toh Lagta Hai

Jaise Honthon Pe Karz Rakhaa Hai...

 

 d way u potrayed everything s exquisite



Edited by diyadivya - 28 January 2014 at 11:33am

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Posted: 28 January 2014 at 10:45am | IP Logged
Omg fate mate update.. Clap Party [:D/] Hug Heart   Big smile

-unres-
Wonderful update kc Clap Clap
Only u can give an update like this...
The dream sequence and the conversation after they meet
and their feelings and emotions r beautifully penned down..
But i could not understand the hidden meaning in the dream..
She recognised the face nd called him arnav but he left her nd
went away.. what is this???????
I really felt nice when kushi feels shattered thinking that even
he will leave her...she realised his importance in her life..
Without her knowledge she is searching for him everywhere nd
reached his house..but not ready to accept that she is so concerned
for him..
The last part is amazing..our tsunami feels that she is his gloomy...
He cannot live without her...omg..
Atleast one is ready to accept his feelings...
Thanx kc for giving us this update..
With this oxygen cylinder i think all the fate mates can survive for
One month i.e.,till the next update...


Edited by pravallika - 29 January 2014 at 10:49am

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