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Posted: 05 February 2014 at 7:07am | IP Logged


  wow lovely cute touching update.. te way bechari  small geet  under my hard big maan  was lovely cute.. te way geet feeling butterflies and te way my maan sleeping peacfully holding his angel was lovely cute touching..te way geet preparing coffe and te way she said her room and my maan said lier still feeling her fragnace on him was lovely cute..te way my maan reading her leteter and feeling guilty was lovely emotional..te way my maan arranging teacher for her making her to jump in joy and she saying her happiness to dadi ,and her teasing was lovely cute.. yes dadi ur correct for sleeping itself  tis much shyness wat she will do wen my maan touch bechare my maan..te way geet ki thank saying session making my maan to frown and te way he listening to his baby was lovely cute..te way egeet ki style of saying thanks making my maan to stood numb was lovely me touching..i love te update

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Posted: 05 February 2014 at 7:30am | IP Logged
Geet was so cute.. even if Maan changes, she will bring him back..

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Posted: 05 February 2014 at 8:24am | IP Logged
wonderful update
Geet innocence and cribbing are breaking the walls between her and Maan
she is of course naughty devil as Maan predicted
Loved maan got teacher for her and as usual her friend Dadi supporting her , teasing her 
loved this update

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Posted: 05 February 2014 at 9:01am | IP Logged
Awesome update..maaneet scene were superb


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Posted: 05 February 2014 at 9:22am | IP Logged
Wow great story please update soon
it's awesome
thanks for sharing your story with us

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Posted: 05 February 2014 at 9:23am | IP Logged
i was not able to comment on IF for a while now... soits first time u would be seeing me on this FF... firstly thanks a lot for pm,... & sorry for replying , hell, months late... i started reading it some half-hour back & finished it just now...
prologue was disturbing... i won't comment on maan part in that. coz there are to many situations of his involvement or non-involvement...  

each update afterwards was  light... geet is supercute... & so strong...  the para whee u so beautifully described how geet took care of herself was heart-touching...  maan is torturing himself. but i will see his character more in coming updates... 

its an another finest ff on maaneet...a very good one at that

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Posted: 05 February 2014 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
OMG!!!! that was superb fantastic!!!
muaaahhh... a kiss to you also Heart

loved it yaaro... 1st tiime MAAN smiled with GEET n behaved n slept like a human Tongue

her saying *Hawa ne kia.is sooo cute ... loved that one Embarrassed
hayeee... MAAN ko subah subah kya hogaya... pehle smile kiya... phir sorry accept kiya... aur baad me sorry bi bola... koi muje pakdo... me fainting... like GEET Wink
haha LOL i loved this line also...

The door closed n Maan released a long breath. He could still feel her gaze burning him.

aweee... he bringing teacher to GEET is also so good... n also her telling her all details to dadi... like a film star ha !!!! Big smile
when he said... Tumhari chudiya aur payal tumhara raaz khol deti hai. 
i can imagine her face... n it felt so cute... i just hope she satys like this not getting hurt by anyone... n MAAN also behaves like this only... toda sweet...

waise GEET coffee me sugar jyada dalti hai aur MAAN kcuh nahi kehta!!! how sweet Day Dreaming

haayeee... hayeee... she gained so much courage that she kissed him... i loved that part... very nice way to say thankyou Wink
MAAN to gaya,,, but im afraid after seeing precap... kahi wo phir se GEET ko hurt na karde... i hope he wont...

my most favourite scene in this update was...  Tum raat ko kaha thi?
 
Stilling for a moment, she started to sign nervously. *Apne kamre me.* Liar. Maan commented in his mind.  He liked it. Loved it.


will be waiting for next... update soon...



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Posted: 05 February 2014 at 8:56pm | IP Logged
haiyeee the update was way too sweet just like his coffee.. umm hmmm...
i love it...he is accepting her into his life... i mean he is just not able to stop himself
and this naughty little girl is sooo damn cute
and dadima's comnt- jab hoga tab..
gosh aisi dadima sabki honi chahiye dolly..
i loved it
agla part jaldi dena

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