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SwaRon FF : Alpha's Territory #2 | CH 11 : PG 21 | 6th' Oct 2014 (Page 2)

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 9:55am | IP Logged
^Sans, Kahi ankahi ke second thread pe unres kar as you reserved on first page! 

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Reserved dude update fast gal jaldi fatafat karo..Big smile.
Unreserved 
So you finally updated this FF Marium i'm super happy after reading this update..Party.
I liked the tentative start you gave to this update the shy and tentative Sharon who was awkward and was fumbling in front of Swayam's mother was quite funny feeling the jitters of meeting her love's mother..LOL.

Then i liked the casual and teasing convo in Sharon's new room between her and Swayam.. Reading a naughty Swayam and blushing Sharon has always been a treat to read for me specially when you write it Marium cause you're awesome at writing such sequences.Smile. The entire kitchen sequence was super fun to read ek baar toh mujhe bhi darr laga Swayam ki italian recipe padhke but then i though humaara lover boy jo banayega woh achha hi hoga albeit sirf woh chicken mere kaam ka nahi tha since I'm a pure vegetarian...LOL.

Swayam's murderous thoughts about getting the food out of rey's intestines were funny and even more funny where Sharon's reaction to his thoughts i could imagine her disgusted expressions..LOL. You have again stopped at a cliffhanger point i wonder whose scent did Sharon smell and i hope it does not turn out to be dangerous for her.. Waiting for your next update so update pretty soon...Smile.
Love,
KashmiHug.


Edited by sweet16cash - 12 January 2014 at 6:32am
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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 11:18am | IP Logged
res 
unres 
i m happy tat you updated after a long tym 

cong8 for the new thread 
coming to ur ff 
sharon is at swayam's plc 
swayam the great alpha is also a great chief Shocked
came as a surprise to me 
but i luved it when he said tat he cooks for his family only 
poor rey raat ko bhi uth ke katah hai 
shayyad yeh dieting ka naya schedule follow kar raha hai LOL
the way swayam gave lloks to rey n the whole sequence 
cracked me up i was literally shaking from laughter 
the incredible portion of tis update was 
tat it was changed from a light - hearted scene into an intense one 
when sharon caught a different yet familiar smell 
excited to read how the next chapter will shape up 
do write more 
looking forward to ur update Tongue


Edited by rosyrkohli - 08 January 2014 at 12:35am

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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 1:28am | IP Logged
congrats for the second thread..Party
super awesome, mind blowing chapter...Clap 
the spaghetti  sequence was really cute...
super excited to read the next chapter..
pls pls pls update soon
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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 4:11am | IP Logged
it was great as always
u are an awesome writer no doubt at that
swayam's thought for rey was really dangerous
it was really fun swayam is a good cook
i am confused by reading the last part
do update soon
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Posted: 12 January 2014 at 6:36am | IP Logged
Comment edited on page 2..Smile.
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Posted: 12 January 2014 at 7:18am | IP Logged
congratulation for the second thread... the chapter 9 was fabulous...
swayan family and his pack member really welcome sharon in there house...
and yup i really liked the share of food where both swaron had a really conversation
and sharon is feeling strange in her room as someone is spy her and that why
she left to swayan room but did not find him and that why went out without inform
anyone because is worried for swayan... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 January 2014 at 8:18am | IP Logged
res
unres

firstly congratulations for the new thread
nd sorry i forgot to unres
now coming to the update.. it was amazing
loved the way swayam's family and the pack welcomed sharon into their house
aww swayam knows coking.. nd The end?? Wat was that?? Bit scared.
update soon..


Edited by piyu1990 - 15 February 2014 at 11:15pm

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