SwaRon FF : Alpha's Territory #2 | CH 11 : PG 21 | 6th' Oct 2014 - Page 11

it's great dear.. finally swayam confessed...wow.. sharon was sooo much panicked yr.. bt happy that they are with each other.. loved their morning convo.. n swayam Mom is really very sweet.. bt that shiv..he is really disgusting... hope he is not gonna creat some rift b/w swaron.. update soon.. thanks 4 d pm

OMG was waiting for you to update this and thank you so much for updating Coming to the part hehehehe the way swayam growled or lets say glared at her for being a bit rude and Sharon became instantly like an obedient child and said I want to meet you in my room

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Let me say a prayer first, okay? 😊 So that next time we get an update within 6 months, hopefully, yeah? 😊 Bloody beetch you literally kept hold of this FF like anything! Guess these beautiful words 🤬 especially for you 🤗
Dude did you notice? I am actually commenting after such a long time on your work! Apart from editing ofcourse! I feeell soo goood! And you should feel the same 😆
Okay now coming to the update, it was really a happening update! The fight happening with the rogues which scared sharon and i liked that part in the beginning when you wrote about respect and disrespect of alpha, quiet cool and weird to know lol then certain highlights in this update, when sharon was hell scared of thinking about swayam in the basement was very well explained, the way she saw a lady lifeless upon death of her husband really scared her, the sharon sitting in her room and that whole bedroom scene was amazing! That part was adorable when she saw swayam curling on the pillow and wished to take a picture of it!

I loved these lines:
Part of her was melting inside when she watched him snuggle his face into the pillow with that sexy messy bed hairs. But then there was another part of her that wanted to get a sharp stick and poke him awake so he could suffer sleep deprivation too.

Total badass^

Then family time was nicely showed...btw 300-5-- people on a table? seriously? :O
Then that shiv talk...i want to read his brother's part of story now, there must be some kind of a story. But it was nice reading that swaron have an understanding. 

Waiting for the next update. You better update soon this time!
Cheers to my comment after such a long time on your brilliant update! 😎
Okay bye now :XEdited by surbhimathur - 9 years ago

thank god...  finally u updated dis ff...  plz continue updating...  i just love dis ff...

Reading tis ff after such a long tym it me very happy Edited by rosyrkohli - 9 years ago

Finally after a long time we r getting this amazing update

Awesome update!!

Well,well,well..so finally an update!! [:-)]
Update for interesting.
The fight..:o That Shiv..-_-
Finally swayam confessed to Sharon..[:-D]
I am liking the story more now..:)

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Edited by piyu_swaron - 9 years ago