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Raesha FF: Finding Home thread 2 link added.. (Page 80)

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scroll up for the replies...here comes the next part...mainly a filler...but couldnt write something else...Ouch

Chapter 14

It was a few months aisha had left for her mission.Aisha had already started off with her mission while Sameer got busy with the increasing crimes in the city and outside.

Sameer was unusually had his anger at the peak after the initial departure of Aisha but later the realisation and the work pressure everything seem to calm him down.Though the reason of his outburst wasnt unknown to any of his team member but everyone chose to keep shut,including Arjun.

But riya was a normally blaberring lady and couldnt control her outburst but one glare from arjun always kept her shut.But one such occasion when Sameer was again howling at them for some misplacement of files and Arjun had left for some investigative purpose of his own,Riya couldnt control herself and burst out at Sameer.

'Sameer ap humpe aise chilla nehi sakte.Shree ne file mere samne apko di thi,ab apne kaha misplace kiya hai,wo apko pata hoga.Aur ye janne ke baad bhi hum apki help kar rahe hai na?fir bhi ap chillaye ja rahe hai,this isnt done sam.We are tolerating your anger for a few weeks,ruko shree let me speak,and that doesnt mean you could shout at us with anything you like.'she walked out but stopped at the door,'we know well what is making you restless but control yourself sam,'

Riya left the place leaving a dumbstruck Sameer.Chotu came out with the file from his cabin.

'Sir,ye file apke hi drawer mein thi,apne dekha nehi,'he said handing him the file,

Sameer took the file and instantly turned towards his cabin.He went inside and closed the door.He kept the file on the table and sat with his head leaning against the headrest of his chair.He knew what riya meant and she wasnt too wrong.

He was feeling a strange restlesness.He had blamed it on the fight that had occured before she left.But it wasnt the fight and he knew it well inside.
He was missing 'her'.He didnt know why but there was surely something that she hd kept back with him.Her memories.

They had spent just a few days together.Fighting,teasing,shouting and her wierd antics.He was missing everything.Each day he woke up in the morning to miss her presence in the room.The calm,soft and happy smile which always adorned her lips when she slept beside him.The narrowing of her lazy eyes and the deep frown when the sunlight hit her face and then throwing the pillows at him,as if he had invited the sun to trouble her in her sleep.Everything was missing.

He mostly spent his nights in the ETF office,keeping himself busy completing his work,to avoid facing the void feeling in the now empty house.The last night together,the outing together,then her drunk state and then their closeness,everything kept lingering in his mind and he felt irritated that he doesnt even know if she is safe.

'oh wait,why am i thinking at all?she is trained and she knows her job..and why should i show concern for her,when she doesnt even care to make a call,its months yaar,she might not even remember me,'he convinced himself,but felt more frustrated at his own thought.

His heart started throbing hard and felt a slight pain on his chest.He sipped in some water,but that didnt wash out the worry.He was worried for her,he wanted to meet her once to convince his heart and mind,she is safe and happy.

'but why,she had stated they would get divorced soon,and they dont even share any bond..or is there something more than what they could name?'he kept thinking looking onto his laptop screen which displayed the picture of them at the pub which Aisha had taken forcefully.

All the anger and frustration vanished in an instance and a happy smile crept on his lips,remembering the time when a slightly drunk aisha,had pulled him close to her to take the picture,much to his annoyance.

Lafzon se jo tha pare
Khaalipan ko jo bhare
Kuchh tto tha tere mere darmiyaan

Rishte ko kya mod doon
Naata yeh abb tod doon
Ya phir yun hi chhod doon, darmiyaan

Benaam rishta woh...
Benaam rishta woh, bechain karta jo
Ho naa.. sake jo bayaan, darmiyaan

Darmeyaan Darmeyan
Kuchh tto tha tere-mere darmiyaan

**************

Ayesha had become the best muze for her present boss Yogesh Shikawat in just a few months.Though the man had kept his attraction and passion well hidden from her but aisha's senses to read a crimnal's mind kept her at high alert.

Aisha's intial days didnt much fascinate him but later in an special performance in an high class promotional party,she had made her place.Not only Yogesh but the performance had attracted a lot of men and their lust.She was quite aware of that though but she kept her focus on her boss aka her victim.

Then came a day when yogesh asked her to company him to an inauguration program for a special ward in an mental asylum,where he was a regular contributor. She had later checked into the account details of the asylum and found huge amounts of money being deposited by yogesh.

Though he did contribute elsewhere too but the amounts were too much and too frequent.That sounded fishy to her and she started her investigation. She visited the asylum on her own to investigate and met with an elderly couple who had come to meet their grand-daughter Reshma.

Reshma had started showing mental discrepancies when she lost her parents in an brutal accident few years back.From then onwards she was their getting treated.Aisha looked on at the kid sitting at the end of the room,through the window and found she was a small kid of 5 or 6 years.

She had recovered quite a lot but still she got violent at times remembering her parents death and the state hurt her grandparents a lot.

The thought itself took aisha back to her days with her parents and then her marriage with sameer.

Yes sameer.The person who always got onto her nerves.His carelessness,his frequent scared look and the sarcastic grins everything had always increased her rage a hundred times.But today the same things brought a smile and made her happy.

The looks on the men she spent most of her time now had always given a disgusted feel which was suddenly replaced by a pleasant feel with the mere thought of sameer.

The sameer,she had fought with.The sameer,she would divorce and never meet again.

The thought of losing him forever made her uphappy and she walked out of the asylum.She walked aimlessly trying to calm her heart and to control herself from losing herself but nothing helped.She sat down on the nearby bench and rubbed her temple.

She was feeling frustrated,irritated and angry,and all these were directed towards sameer.Could he have called once to speak to her?Couldnt he once speak to her about the night she spent last with him?

but then how could he?she didnt give him her secret contact information.Now she started cursing herself.She picked up her phone but kept fiddling with it.She was still confused about what he thought about the whole matter.The fight,the closeness,the night and the divorce.

'Did he already arrange for the divorce?should i ask him,'she thought,

But she couldnt make herself call him.

'Kyu karo?usse to meri koi fikar hi nehi hai.mujhe nehi baat karni usse.'She angrily stomped her feet and started walking,towards her next destination,while a tear rolled down her eyes,making her cheek moist.

Aankhon mein tere saaye
Chahoon to ho na paaye
Yaado'n se teri faasla

Jaake bhi tu na jaaye
Thehri tu dil mein haaye
Hasrat si banke kyun bhala
Kyun yaad karta hoon

Mit ta hoon banta hoon
Mujhko to laayi yeh kahaan

Benaam rishta woh, bechain karta jo
Ho na sake jo bayaan darmiyaan
Darmeyaan Darmeyan
Kuch toh tha tere mere darmiyaan

***********


done..

those who wanna hear the song...here it is..




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res
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hayeee...i am so happy...LOL 

few months???Shocked
sam sab pe itna bhadak kyun raha hai...
aisha chali gai to uska gussa in sab ke upar..not fair Mr.Rathor..Tongue
sam itna miss kyun kar rahe ho? kuchh to chhut raha hai...Tongue
ye expextation hi sab ka root hai...
i like this song...Embarrassed
ye to nainsafi hai...kahan pe lake rok diya???Dead


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unres..
 
Awesome update...
 
Sameer is frustrated and always remain in angry mode...OuchOuchOuch
Poor team...bina galti kiye angry Rathod ke gusse ka sikar ho rahe hai...LOLLOLLOL
Riay's reply was too good...ClapClapClap
Sam missing her antics...LOLLOLLOL...karo karo usse miss karoge tabhi toh story aage badhe gi...LOLLOLLOL
Sam smiles while looking at her pic...Big smileBig smileBig smile WinkWinkWink...karo karo aur miss karo...LOLLOLLOL
Why I have a feeling that Aisha had invited danger for herself...OuchOuchOuch...but why to worry when u & Sam r here...LOLLOLLOL LOLLOLLOL
Stupid Aisha...apna contact no. toh Sam ko diya nahi aur expect karti hai ki Sam usko call karega...OuchOuchOuch
Arrgghhh...Aisha...ek miss call hi kar deti baki sab humare Rathod sahib handle kar dete...LOLLOLLOL LOLLOLLOL
 
Continue soon...Advance Thanks for PM...


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Superb update Clap
so both are missing each other... but are waiting for the other to call first...  

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Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon

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What an heart touching update 
Beautifully written Rimi 
& the song so apt & beautiful 
Its my fav & suited the situation so well Smile
Sameer is really Angry no words left 
I really feel like smacking Sasha here 
Dono kitne confused hai Confused
they cant even define love 
I really love the restless & irritation  u portrayed
& did it very well 
I can sese some fear about aisha in the mission Ouch
Lets see 
Thanks for the Pm 
Continue soon Smile 

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Posted: 30 March 2014 at 3:06am | IP Logged
Update waz superb Thumbs Up
Their emotions were written beautifully
Raesha r missing each other Embarrassed Embarrassed ...dono buddhu hai, unhe kya ho raha hai ye samjh mein nahi aa raha hai LOL
Riya's outburst waz justified
Aisha found a lead in her case Big smile Feeling sad for Reshma Unhappy
Cont soon

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