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Posted: 07 February 2014 at 8:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ll_megha_ll

Awesome update dear.
Just loved it.
Continue soon.
And thanx for the pm.


thanks megha..Smile

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Posted: 07 February 2014 at 8:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by easha4539

awesome. loved it. con soon..


easha...finally got a comment from you...thanks for reading..Embarrassed
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Chapter 6

Ayesha composed herself and helped riya to get the food spread.Arjun too calmed down and joined them.Everyone finished dinner and went away.Further discussions on the case was stored for the next day.

After Riya and Arjun left Ayesha and Sameer sat down on the sofa talking about the case.Sameer gave the details to her and that helped her to understand how she was suppose to proceed with
Jack and what sort of information was required.

'tum ye sure kar paogi ayesha?'
Sameer asked sitting on the sofa beside her,

'Sameer ab tum bhi suru ho gaye.Arjun kam tha kiya?'
she said irritated,

'nehi ayesha wo baat nehi,bas khatra bohot hai,jo bhi karna dhyan se,'sam said showing concern,

Ayesha rolled her eyes at him and his concern.

'Sameer ye kam mein bohot bar kar chuki hu,so just relax,'

'thik hai..acha tumhe kaise pata hoga jack konse bar mein milega?'

'mainly wo moonlight bar mein jata hai,mein mere informer se confirm kar leti hu,'

'okay,'

Ayesha called a number and he confirmed that for the last two weeks Jack is coming regularly to the moonlight bar.He was sitting there itself when he was talking to her.
Ayesha informed Sameer.

'Tum kab jaogi usse milne?'

'Sameer ye jo industry hai ye raat ko suru hota hai,mein kal raat ko hi jaungi,'

'thik hai,mein bhi chaluga tumhare sath,'

'Sameer,tum log mujhpe thora sa bhi trust nehi rakh sakte na?'

'nehi Ayesha,tum hamari madat kar rahi ho,agar kuch bhi garbar hua wo meri responsibility hai,we should keep a backup,'

'thik hai,per Jack se milne,mein akeli jaungi,'

'Okay mein tumhara gari mein wait karunga,'

'okay chalo sone chale,goodnight,'

'goodnight'

Both retired to bed.

Sameer couldnt sleep well that night.He was tensed.He was wondering whether he is going the right thing by allowing Ayesha to help them.It was a dangerous place and a even dangerous work.But then she was trained and he would be there,calmed him much.But the night for the chief was still restless one.

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Next morning Sameer was busy the whole day working on the case.But during the day he did take care to plant a few men around the moonlight bar.Also he had asked chotu to confirm the news about Jack visiting the bar regualrly,which chotu did confirm in sometime.He took all the neccesary steps to keep the mission undercover and safe.

Arjun was angry on his decision and even asked him to drop the mission.He was angrily banging doors,glaring and shouting unnessecarily,even riya was not spared from his anger.Sam too was not less.He was equally strong on his decision glared back whenever the other glared at him.All except riya wondered what was so wrong that the hungry tigers had suddenly decided to pounce upon each other.Shree,chotu and Riya kept to themselves all the time avoiding the two tigers.

It was almost evening and Arjun and Sameer was coming back from the commisioner's office.Arjun was driving and Sameer was silently sitting beside.None was in a mood to talk coz anything they spoke only led to some fight.Finally Arjun broke the silence when they reached the ETF office,

'Sham ko mein bhi chalunga tum dono ke sath,'Arjun said in his authorative tone and walked into the building quickly.Sameer looked on while Arjun walked into the building with quick steps.

It was late evening and Sameer and Arjun reached home to pickup Ayesha.Sameer walked to the door and rang the bell.Ayesha opened the door within a few minutes.Sameer lost his balance looking at her.She was clad in a gistering sparkling purple halterneck top and a mini skirt,with high healed boots paired with them.Hair was curled and opened.She had a nose ring and a few more funky accesories around her wrist and neck.

He was looking at her with wide eyes when Ayesha called him.But he was too engrosed in her new look and didnt response.Ayesha tried shaking him,waving her hands but nothing helped.Finally Ayesha stamped his foot with her high heals and he jumped in pain.

'Ayesha,'

'kiya ayesha?lofar ki tarah kiyu dekh rahe ho??'

'ye kiya pehena hai?'

'Sameer mein waha tumhari biwi banke to nehi ja sakti,waha mein nadiya hu,u know a club dancer,'

'are you sure,you can do it?'

'Sameer,'

'okay fine chalo,ye ear piece or mic laga lo,'

Ayesha sat in the car and attached the mic properly on her dress hiding it from view.She was completely lost in herself when suddenly she felt someone's gaze at the back seat and found Arjun gaping at her angrily.She glared back and then ignored him completely.They drove to the moonlight bar.Sameer kept the car at a dark end of the road at a distance from the bar and Ayesha stepped out after giving some final touches to her makeup.

'good luck ayesha,'

'thanks,'Ayesha replied sameer and looked back at Arjun,who was looking at the view other side and didnt budge.Ayesha made a face and banged the door.

Sameer looked on nervously while Ayesha walked inside the bar.

*********
Ayesha went in and inquired about Jack.The bar tender showed her.Once she was an almost regular customer and they knew her skills well.She walked upto the corner most table where jack was sitting alone with a glass.Ayesha walked upto him and tapped his shoulder.

'Jack,'she called him giving her beautiful smile,

'Nadiya,kitne dino baad,kaha gayab ho gayi thi?'Jack looked up at her startled and said,

'kuch nehi yaar,wo police ka lafra bar gaya to chali gayi,ab fir wapas ayi hu,'she replied sitting on a chair facing him,

'Haan police ka lafra kuch zyada hi bar gaya tha,fir achanak tu gayab ho gayi,kahi tu police ke chakkar mein to nehi par gayi na?'

'kiya Jack,itna bhi bharosa nehi kiya?mein to khud police se bachti firti hu,'

'baat aisi hai nadiya ki hum apne dhane mein abhi kisi pe bhi bharosa nehi kar sakte,tu itne din gayab hone ke baad kaise tum pe bharosa karu?'

Ayesha remained silent trying to figure out his next move.Jack was quite cunning to understand any negative intentions and she knew she had to play her cards safe.

'kiya haseena daar gayi kiya?'
Jack teased her sensing her silence,

'kiya Jack tu bhi,haseena ko kabhi darte hue dekha hai kiya?'

'dekha to nehi hai,per haseena aj alag lag rahi hai,'

'kafi din gayab thi na is liye'

'waise tu yaha achanak kaise?'

'wo life mein thora locha ho gaya,Jojo ki help chahiye,hai kaha wo?'

'aisa kiya ho gaya??'

'ek deal hai,aur Jojo ke alawa aur koi itni bari deal handle nehi kar sakta,usi liye baat karni hai,mila sakta hai use?'

'kaisi deal?kaun hai dealer,'

'wo mein tumhe nehi bata sakti,Jojo ko hi batana hai,'

'dekh nadiya zyada hosiyari maat kar,bata kiyu ayi hai yaha warna...'Jack stood up pointing his gun at her,

Ayesha in a slip of a second held his hand which had the gun and twisted it.The gun fell on the floor.She instantly picked the bottle in front and smashed it on the table,breaking it.She held the broken bottle by its neck and pointed it towards Jack.Jack held back his hand,he had forwarded to hold her neck.

'main kuch din kiya gayab rahi,tu mera style bhool gaya Jack?Bata Jojo kaha hai?'

'wo nadiya relax,mein batata hu,Jojo yahi hai,'

'kaha?aur kaha hai uski next deal?'

'next deal aaj hai,docks raat ko 3.45,per tu ye sab,'

'wo tujhe janne ki zaroorat nehi,samjha,'

Ayesha smashed the bottle on his head making him unconcious and ear bleeding.All others were astonished at this sudden event and looked on while Ayesha picked the gun and pointed towards them and walked out majestically at her victory.

**************
Sameer was sitting at the notch of his seat from the moment Ayesha started talking with Jack.He looked towards Arjun through the mirror and found him concentrating on the conversation with fisted palms and bitting lips.Both were ready to go in the moment anything went wrong.

They got out of the car when Jack tracked ayesha and they heard a glass smashing. They even called Ayesha but she didnt reply.They were almost at the gate of the bar when they heard ayesha speaking again and Jack led out the secret.Both stepped back and waited at the car.Arjun heard
Sameer utter a 'Good Job Ayesha' and he relaxed rubbing the sweat beads when Ayesha came out marching towards the car.

Ayesha quickly got in the car and they drove away quickly.Arjun and Sameer planned to nab Jojo that night itself.Arjun got down from the car at a distance and took a cab.He would be arranging for the raid and backup force while Sameer leaves Ayesha home and then get back to work.

Sameer and Ayesha drove towards their home silently.Sameer still had a long night to spend.He dropped her at their building and drove away,earning a 'Good Luck' from a smiling Ayesha.

Ayesha took the elevator and reached their floor.She opened the elevator door and stepped out to get the the biggest shock she could have imagined that night.Her eyes turned wide and she muttered to herself,trying to convince herself the truth,

'masa??babasa?'

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done...now read and give back your reviews...Smile


Edited by rimi_invisible - 07 February 2014 at 8:41am

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Posted: 07 February 2014 at 8:03am | IP Logged
res ..
me 1st..

mee ffiirrrsstt..
*dhating naach*
huh... aisha sabko ache dozes de rahi hai..
chahe wo arjun ho...ya sam...
ahan!
lol.. sam drooling..aisha stomping her foot on hus..
bechara... heels se lagi na!?
well done aisha...
acha band bajaya us jack ka!
haila!
ab aya na.. RIMI style...
sadma de hi dia last me...
sam k mom dad...
how wl they react seeing her in a mini skirt!!???

PS- DANCE AGAIN... ME 1ST..
SNEHA DI... MAI 1ST HO GYI...
ap aram se guests ko entertain karo!

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Posted: 07 February 2014 at 8:51am | IP Logged
Awesome updateClap
loved the glaring session between the seniors & the way aisha handled jack...
the shock at the end is interesting...Smile

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Posted: 07 February 2014 at 8:51am | IP Logged
awesome update
Raesha convo was nice
n glad Sameer trusted her despite Arjun's many protests
Sameer was lost witnessing her new look
and she steppes on his foot to break his trance
poor Sameer!!LOL
and as Aisha said...she did her part very well
and loved her daring side as always
but the ending was shocking
masa n babasa at home??Shocked
wondering what'll happen next??
thanks for pm
cont soon


Edited by rizwanaa - 07 February 2014 at 8:51am

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Posted: 07 February 2014 at 8:51am | IP Logged
Oh! nice update...
Nadiya ne jack kaam tho katam kr diya ... ab masa aur baba sa ko kya kehngi madam. lolz...
Update soon

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Posted: 07 February 2014 at 8:56am | IP Logged
Beautiful update dear.
Just loved it.
Do continue soon.
And thanks for the pm.

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