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Raesha FF: Finding Home thread 2 link added.. (Page 140)

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 10:36am | IP Logged
Update Chahiye...Big smileBig smileBig smile

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 8:33pm | IP Logged
bana diya naya thread..ab bas karo..LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL

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Posted: 20 January 2015 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
Sorry for being late..Again..Unhappy
Part 21, 22, 23.
I had to read from beginning of Aisha's case..but now I can catch up..
Aww..Unhappy Sam..First half where you have portrayed about him was nice..With so much going on his life, he will naturally be exhausted..His personal life has become such a mess.Unhappy
Manisha was doubting whether they were ETF..Ouchbut now that she seems fine with it, hope she will be of help in someway..
Yogesh seems to get something fishy about Aisha..but why he brought her to etf..?Aisha is getting negative vibes so do I.Dead

This Yogesh..Censored  When Manisha was telling about him, I was feeling to kill him then and there..Felt bad for her..
But she is smart..collected his information in a hard disk..and even going through all the torture,she did not speak a word to Yogesh..Appreciate her..ClapHug
The scene at Sam's cabin when both of them met and the way Yogesh was behaving, it gave the idea of something dangerous is gonna happen..Ouch
So he knew that she is Sam's wife..Sam ka accident..Cry.Hope nothing happened too him..
The way you have written Aisha-Yogesh action sequences and the whole thing at that godown was awesome.Thumbs Up
She is actually the Dabanng Lady.Hug.Finally she killed him..What a scene..Big smile
But hope Arjun jaldi se aa jaye..and what about Sam..? Aisha toh already injured hai..

Aisha is in so much painCry..As they say, you get to know the importance of a person when you lose them.
She is thinking he is dead..but atleast she realised and accepted her feelings..
Mission successful..Big smile
Sameer is critical..OuchHis accident scene felt real..and Arjun solving the case..everything was again written well.Thumbs Up

These 3 updates were everything.. curiosity..scary..emotional..painful..dhasu..action-packed..and with a restless feeling ki ab kya hone wala hai..
You did keep me hooked to the updates..Kudos to your writing.ClapHug

Thanks for the pms..will be back tomo..

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Posted: 22 January 2015 at 2:50am | IP Logged
read all the missing parts together
so commenting..
Very deep parts no doubt, it was wirtten passionately and beautifully
 you define feelings so beautifully
i always said that ur an amazing writer
the way you potray their feelings was awesome
m speechlesss, idont know how to define you how big heartfully im thankful to you
for writing such an outstanding story for Raesha
thank you rimmi di for writing on Raesha
Your just fabulous
outstanding writer
Sameer is having such bad disease even if i read i got scared of these things.
poor Ayesha her fear is just. finally both has realise their feelings and shared
it was written very lovely, no doubt fantastically.
Love ariya moments LOLLOL
Sameer's non-sense scoldings DeadDead
I dont know how could Ayesha make him understand about his illness
but i know only she can handle him.
I am very happy...
Finally Sam Babu proposed Ayesha PartyParty
and That intensive HUG EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
OMG...!! i was having shivers down my spine reading it Embarrassed
all over it wasoutstanding
well accoridng to my POV; i was thinking that you should make them proposed to each other and to accept their love and feelings for each other, and you did that co-incidently you did that im very happy nowit will be more easier for Ayesha for making him understand about his love and confessions Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smile

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Posted: 22 January 2015 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
Part  24, 25, 26:
Rimi..what have you done..AngryTraumatic Brain Injury..seriously..?? I thought you will show him in hospital for some days, with tension going around..but this..??? Cry
And after reading the symptoms, I'm scared..what will happen now..? How will they tell Sam..how will react..and on top of it his job will be at stake..DisapproveDead
Arjun handled everything well except for the last part..which is very natural..Consoling his parents..staying with Aisha,supporting her
and yet keeping his emotions in control after watching Sam..Riya was also a constant, silent support.Smile
Sam wants to meet Aisha..even she must be feeling the same..lets see..

Aww..! EmbarrassedSam is so eager to meet her and wishing atleast someone will bring some news about her..So impatient..LOLHis usual Dammit and then glaring the door..that was cute..!Big smile
He is not able to believe but he is so in love with his wife..Loved his part at the beginning..Ofcourse credit to youThumbs Up
He is getting frustrated, no one is allowing him to go meet her..But Arjun hai na.Tongue.Lo aa gayi Aisha..LOL
Kya jodi hai..both are shouting and are so ziddi to meet them..But others are suffering..Poor they..lol!LOL
Poor Doctor..Kya patients mile hai inko.."ETF ke saare officers aise hai kya..?" ROFL

Their meet was beautiful  ClapHeart
Their silent convo, Riya 's teasing, Arjun-Riya's little fun, and MThumbs Upasa's ordering, Arjun's sacrcasm..alltogether was very nice.!
Arjun was so angry.. disturbed too..Bechari Riya..But what's the reason..?
ETF having super natural powers..LOL
Sam is getting affected by the news..now Babasa and Masa are also going..Rimi..what are you planning..?OK i will read the other chapters to know..Silly
Thanks for the pms.

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Posted: 14 February 2015 at 5:07am | IP Logged
when ur going to update dear
its so long time
plss update..

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Posted: 14 February 2015 at 7:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shurtiekta

when ur going to update dear
its so long time
plss update..


story is continued in a new thread...sorry forgot to post here...thats the link..Smile

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4278661
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Posted: 27 February 2015 at 6:47am | IP Logged
Sorry..sorry sorry..Again I'm extremely late..Ouch
Part 27, 28
I loved the way you have summarised their relation from start till now, and portrayed through Aisha's thoughts.It was brilliant.Thumbs Up
Even I thought Riya had cleaned the place..LOLBut ye to Sam ne kiya..Shocked
Aisha's opening up to Arjun..He being a silent support.. The whole scene was sketched well..I liked it.
Glad that it was Arjun whom she shared with..because he is the one who won't judge her..And also liked the way they are bonding with each other..
This part was awesome and specially the writing part.Thumbs Up

Arisha was superb..Love them..Big smile
Arjun is standing strong , a supportive pillar for Aisha, but feels week to tell Sam about his injury.
Aisha needs to gather all her strength and take Sam and their relationship in her hands..Only she will manage to handle him, I guess. And for that its high time she accept her feelings for him.
Sam is getting more frustrated now..Samne rakha glass dikhayi nahi diya..Ye kya ho raha hai..OuchCry
Jaldi se treatment shuru kar do..

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