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||Rubal and Payal- Pain of Love||

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 8:36am | IP Logged
Hey Guys,
I am back with another poem but with a twist its not based on PaYa this time but on Rubal and Payal. EmbarrassedBig smileI really love their Jodi and I am feeling the pain their love story has bought. Rubal is heartbroken so this one is for his feelings for Payal! Here is my first attempt on their Jodi so apologies! Enjoy and leave your comments and likes!

||Rubal and Payal- Pain of Love||

Blood drips from my broken heart
I never thought we would part
When you held me I thought you meant forever,
Now I know you meant never.

Saying you love me, respect me with that look in your eye
I thought it was the truth
but it was nothing but a cold hearted lie
Your tender touch, that glistening smile,
Two things about you I will forever miss.

As I sit here thinking about you,
My face is wet with tears.

I should've cried a long time ago
But the love for you in my heart never let these tears fall.

They say love is blind,
But I never knew the pain of love.

A pain so deep it pierces like a needle
My wound will heal with time
But my soul will never forget to love you
Until my last breath.

 

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Edited by Tacker_Holic - 09 January 2014 at 10:46am

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 10:23am | IP Logged
vry well written

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aaw...awesome poem...touched my heart...

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 1:24pm | IP Logged
Awww this was such an emotional one, I really liked it!

Thanks Sonia! And keep writing, you write fairy well :)

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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 4:14am | IP Logged
Wow! Awesome poem!! I loved it!! You're a great writer! Totally an awesome writer!! I loved you're poem :D

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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 5:46am | IP Logged
first time visiting to this forum
loved our poem love to visit more
plz make something more for rubel and payal like this

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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 6:34am | IP Logged
Awesome poem! You are great! The feelings were so very well depicted. My favourite are the last four lines. Keep writing forever!

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Originally posted by jannat_ul_fajar

vry well written

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