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Arshi FF - Burning Rage THREAD 2. UPD THREAD 3 PG 127 (Page 84)

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Posted: 05 October 2014 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
Oh ho pre cap looks interesting
can't wait for update 
thanks for pm n plz keep em coming

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Posted: 07 October 2014 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
Awesome precap...thanks for the PM

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Posted: 11 October 2014 at 2:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Spoonai

I loved tht u given an clarification of Arnav and why he is like tht.
But then let's get into they mind of a reader, Arnav have done horrible things to khushi and it's not justify. Idk if you ever gonna make him see what he is doing is not done. I dnt kno if past and I'm saying this again tht he has no right to do tht to khushi. If khushi wasn't a positive girl she might change to a beast too.

Ur right ppl like Arnav dnt change but dnt u think ppl like khushi need justice?? I kno a lot of ppl take Arnav side, reason I dnt kno. Mayb cuz he is handsome.
There r ppl like Arnav in the world and thts reality but it's totally unreal for a girl to accept and love the person who treat u like a beast. It's unreal to accept a marriage and a husband like Arnav. It's unreal for a girl to love a beast unless it's beauty and the beast.

It cud really b nice if u stick to one concept. Meaning do u plan to write a story base on reality or a story base on fairy tale.
Why I say tht??? If khushi can accept Arnav the way he is then Arnav shud change ( fairy tale)
If Arnav can't wait and remain the beast he is, thn in reality a girl can never accept a man like Arnav.
Sorry but there is no such thing a being free in a captive place.
Just imagine yrself in khushi place??? Thts why I really wanna kno if it's gonna b a story base on pure fiction or u plan to do some reality in it.
Because let's me serious!! I can't read a story with a girl being trap n treat like tht who has no saying and no hope for things to get better. Arnav has no feelings and your character for him shows tht he can't change. Then how can a teen girl lived forever like tht??

I just hope u get my point, sorry but thts what I feel. And ur at better place cuz ur the writer and hve the point of he pen where as me I feel helpless just like khushi.



LIKED UR POINT OF VIEW
I CAN TELL U THAT PEOPLE DO TEND TO ACCEPT A RELATIONSHIP THAT DOESN'T GIVE THEM ANYTHING BUT PAIN AS THEY R WEEK OR THEY LOVE THE PERSON OR THEY DON'T KNOW HW TO GET OUT.
ALL OF US HV OUR MISERIES BUT ITS HW WE FIND THAT SILVER LINING IN IT.
SOMETIMES THINKS DON'T MAKE SENSE BUT NOT EVERYTHING  ALWAYS HAS TO MAKE SENSE.
NO ONE CAN LIVE A TRAPPED LIFE I DON'T AGREE THERE, AS WHEN U HAVE NO OPTION U TEND TO ADJUST BCOZ HUMAN TEND TO ADAPT
I HV BEEN IN KHUSHI'S PLACE N FELT TRAPPED A LOT OF TIME N STILL DO AS I HV NO ESCAPE BUT STILL IT NEVER DAMPER MY SPIRIT
SOME MYSTERIES R MYSTERIOUS THAN ANY OTHER THING EVER KNOW. 
I SAY IT AGAIN N AGAIN ARNAV WILL NOT CHANGE
BUT HE IS NOT A BEAST HE IS JUST A HUMAN WITH FLAWS N A LOT OF THEM 
BUT WHEN U HV BEEN IN TOO MUCH PAIN IT TENDS TO MAKE U NUMB TO VERY OTHER ESSENCE IN LIFE. ONLY A SOUL THAT CAN CONNECT TO HIS PAIN CAN BE THE ONE WHO CAN PULL OUT A LITTLE OF HIS DEAD FEELINGS.
DARKNESS IS NOT THE ONLY THING THAT CAN SCARE A PERSON BUT SOMETIMES IT CAN BE LIGHT TO. YOU WILL GET THIS WHEN THE STORY MOVES FORWARD.
ASR MAY BE A BEAST BUT HE HAS FEW GOOD THINGS TO LIKE HE IS A MAN OF HIS WORDS N HE WON'T HURT HER IF SHE DOESN'T ESCAPES FROM HIM N HE WILL GIVE HER SPACE IF HE SEE SHE WON'T DEFY HIM. 
SOMETIMES THINGS R TO FOGGY BUT STILL A HOPE TO FIND A WAY OUT IS THE ONLY COURAGE U HAVE
MY STORY IS A TWISTED REALITY THAT MY NOT BE PART OF EVERYONE'S LIFE BUT IT HAS ITS SHARE OF TRUTH THAT SOMEONE HAD GONE THROUGH.
I ALWAYS SAY NOT EVERYONE IS LUCK TO HAVE A LIFE THAT IS FULL OF ROSES. SOME PEOPLE HAVE TO WALK THROW THORNS A LOT TO FIND AN OUNCE OF HAPPINESS IN LIFE
EVERYONE IS NOT BLESSED TO HV EVERYTHING ARE WE.




Edited by angeldream14 - 11 October 2014 at 2:16pm
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Posted: 13 October 2014 at 10:30am | IP Logged

EAGER 4 d update

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Posted: 15 October 2014 at 11:12am | IP Logged
first of all really sorry for late comments
firstly cause of my busy schedule
and now too i'm recovering from viral fever
still thanks a lot for still sending me the PM's

amazing updates
really love the first para of ur every update
they hold so much meaning

khushi surely is bored in his house
no one to talk to..
though glad he got her a phone and laptop
i had a feeling he would be spying on her
and that call with payal confirmed it
it must have been difficult for khushi to handle payal

wonder how long will payal able to stop herself from coming to khushi
loved how khushi reacted to seeing a new place
ASR was so angry that khushi didn't take his hand
poor Aman was trying to get out of the situation
but khushi too needs someone to talk too

glad she took the step
and talk--wrote to samar
alteast this way she won't be bored
ASR surely has a magnificent house
wonder who's behind the door
she is not his mother or sister..maybe someone he loved
so confussing

can't wait to read more
update soon
thanks a lot for the PM's

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Posted: 21 October 2014 at 12:35am | IP Logged
please update! It is a fab story and gives me goosebumps 

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Posted: 05 November 2014 at 5:44pm | IP Logged
Hey , it's been very long, when will u update this ff???

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