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Arshi FF - Burning Rage THREAD 2. UPD THREAD 3 PG 127 (Page 81)

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Posted: 26 September 2014 at 9:51am | IP Logged
Nice...Smile

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Posted: 26 September 2014 at 10:00am | IP Logged
K
This smthg in poolside brought bak de memory of poolside meh kiss hua lol
Waiting eagerly
Thx for  de pm continue soon

Damn so Mrs raizada is not his mom or sis
So she is his first wife i think
Damn poor khushi wat else she has too see in her teen
But de way ASR behaved wth MRS raizada it felt lyk he is deeply involved wth her


Edited by ipkkndeternity - 26 September 2014 at 10:05am

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Posted: 26 September 2014 at 10:07am | IP Logged
I loved tht u given an clarification of Arnav and why he is like tht.
But then let's get into they mind of a reader, Arnav have done horrible things to khushi and it's not justify. Idk if you ever gonna make him see what he is doing is not done. I dnt kno if past and I'm saying this again tht he has no right to do tht to khushi. If khushi wasn't a positive girl she might change to a beast too.

Ur right ppl like Arnav dnt change but dnt u think ppl like khushi need justice?? I kno a lot of ppl take Arnav side, reason I dnt kno. Mayb cuz he is handsome.
There r ppl like Arnav in the world and thts reality but it's totally unreal for a girl to accept and love the person who treat u like a beast. It's unreal to accept a marriage and a husband like Arnav. It's unreal for a girl to love a beast unless it's beauty and the beast.

It cud really b nice if u stick to one concept. Meaning do u plan to write a story base on reality or a story base on fairy tale.
Why I say tht??? If khushi can accept Arnav the way he is then Arnav shud change ( fairy tale)
If Arnav can't wait and remain the beast he is, thn in reality a girl can never accept a man like Arnav.
Sorry but there is no such thing a being free in a captive place.
Just imagine yrself in khushi place??? Thts why I really wanna kno if it's gonna b a story base on pure fiction or u plan to do some reality in it.
Because let's me serious!! I can't read a story with a girl being trap n treat like tht who has no saying and no hope for things to get better. Arnav has no feelings and your character for him shows tht he can't change. Then how can a teen girl lived forever like tht??

I just hope u get my point, sorry but thts what I feel. And ur at better place cuz ur the writer and hve the point of he pen where as me I feel helpless just like khushi.

Edited by Spoonai - 26 September 2014 at 10:05am

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Posted: 26 September 2014 at 10:08am | IP Logged
wats in the pool eager to know more!!!

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Posted: 26 September 2014 at 10:42am | IP Logged
interesting teaser... kinda confusing also... will wait

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Posted: 26 September 2014 at 11:08am | IP Logged
Awesome teaser dear... Is ASR going to be ther when she goes for a swim? and is the woman his first wife Becuse he said mrs raizada in one of the updates or wife of his father? Plz reveal it soon dear..cant take the suspense anymore.. Plz update soon and thanks for answers...

Edited by sweetydoll32 - 26 September 2014 at 11:06am

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Posted: 26 September 2014 at 11:34am | IP Logged
Teaser good
Ur 5 ans is more confusingLOLSmile

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Posted: 26 September 2014 at 11:41am | IP Logged
ohh GOD m more confused nd more excited for it.its getting intrsting with each update...plz update soon...waiting...thanxx for the pm...

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