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Arshi FF - Burning Rage THREAD 2. UPD THREAD 3 PG 127 (Page 55)

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Posted: 23 June 2014 at 12:24am | IP Logged
i read chapter 11... 
khushi is so innocent...
who was that man..?? i hav to read further...

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Posted: 23 June 2014 at 9:28am | IP Logged
Interesting precap
Who is the guy ?? Is it the uncle ???
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon

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Posted: 24 June 2014 at 8:50am | IP Logged
Angel 11 and 12 are superb updates
Sorry for late comments

Chap 11
Arnav had a dark past in which may be his both parents rejected him.  Loved how you wrote about pain in first paragraph.
At midnight Arnav went to meet some Mrs Raizada who was on the bed and said "You broke the promise of never letting go of me.  You said you would never give up on me and see what you did here you are so close yet so far, tell me how could I get you back" ...  Is she his wife? when she will be back will he throw Khushi out?

Khushi went to bathroom and thought about what happened last night and saw  bruises on her whole body and how she went under shower and tried to wash out his touch on her.
Arnav saw Khushi going into wash room and he too went there and filled jacuzzi with warm water and took Kushi into it even when she  was protesting him.
Khushi allowed him to do what ever he wants as she realised no point in trying to fight him because he will end up hurting her more.

Khushi asked him why he was doing all this to her and Arnav said he is his and everything of his had to follow his rules and said he is saying her last time not to question him and she is his wife and will be always.

Chap 12
Loved the way Khushi talked herself seeing mirror and when Hp came and said Arnav called her down for breakfast and loved the way she thought the beast won't let her even think in peace.

Loved breakfast table part.  Loved the way she moaned while eating breakfast and the way Arnav commented but innocent Khushi didn't understand his riddle talking. Thank god Arnav didn't tortured Khushi on that day.

Khushi questioned Arnav innocently about what he did at night and in the morning in bathroom and Khushi didn't understand what he answered and loved the way Khushi asked DM why did she bring Arnav, the man who is as twisted as jalebi in her life and Arnav even without seeing her to stop cursing him and Khushi shocked and thought he has sharing ears which reads what she thinking in mindLOL

Khushi wanted to talk to her sister Payal.  Aman came and gave marriage registration papers which are to be filed when Khushi turns 18 and Khushi don't want to sign them.  Khushi called Aman and Arnav as old and Arnav was angry and kissed her to punish her and said her he will allow her to join college and he will allow her to talk to her jiji only when she will sign on all papers. Khushi signed papers.  
Arnav called Payal and  told her he married Khushi and gave it to Khushi and held Khushi in his arms and Khushi lied about Arnav to Payal to keep her away from hurt.  Payal said she will come and take her away from him.  Arnav said he will keep up promise of not hurting her jeeji and jeeju till Khushi stay's with him.  Khushi shocked how Arnav know what her jeeji said to her.

Arnav made Khushi sit on his lap and kissed her.
Who was the man that came there and Arnav was furious.

Pre cape - Interesting
Waiting to know more about the man whom Arnav was going to say as trash

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Posted: 27 June 2014 at 11:38am | IP Logged
hey hi came across your story today and read all parts in one go.. loved it.. i love devil, beast asr so this is kind of my fav.. feel bad for khushi who is teenager and have to going through so many things.. arnav's nightmares highlight his plight as a child who was mistreated and that can be one of reason he is such a beast.. well wait to see how the story unfolds.. well would like to know who is the mysterious character who came and questioned arnav.. amazing story.. hope you will update soon.. best wishes.. Smile

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Posted: 28 June 2014 at 1:48am | IP Logged
Nice precap
Waiting for the update
Thanks for the pmWink

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