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Arshi FF - Burning Rage THREAD 2. UPD THREAD 3 PG 127 (Page 50)

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Posted: 11 June 2014 at 2:03pm | IP Logged
Re posted my comments...

Obviously whatever Arnav is doing made me really mad and felt sorry for Khushi but I really need to know the reason behind his nature... Khushi is very innocent but I am sure she'll make him fall for her.
Awesome Update!! lets see who is the mystery man.

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Posted: 12 June 2014 at 10:03am | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
hope khushi never loose her hope for a happy future
eagerly waiting to know arnav past which made him this much cruel towards innocent soul khushi

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Posted: 12 June 2014 at 11:21am | IP Logged
INTERESTING    UPDATE...
LOVED   IT...

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Posted: 14 June 2014 at 4:03am | IP Logged
khushi is so innocent
she is not understanding half
of his actions and words...

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Posted: 16 June 2014 at 4:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by daljeet

Originally posted by angeldream14

Originally posted by daljeet

Okay this is kind of shocking. 

I felt bad for Payal, how much guilty she will feel for what happened with Kushi.


In this update it seems ASR is enjoying the physical part of this relationship and is not immune like u mentioned in the last chapter. Is it a good sign? 


Who is this man? His father or his jeejaji?


I liked her innocence, I totally understand what u r trying to say.


There are a lot of typo errors even in the note you gave!



PAYAL WILL BE SHATTERED BUT BOTH THE SISTERS R FIGHTERS.
KHUSHI SI A TEENAGER U CANT EXPECT HER TO BEHAVE OTHERWISE.
TYPO ERROR AS I DNT GET TIME TO PROOF READ U HV NO IDEA HW I TRY N ASSEMBLE MY WORK .Ouch, WITH COLLEGE N JOB ITS DAM TIRING BUT U CAN TELL ME THE ERROR N I WILL TRY TO CORRECT IT.Smile


Ok I understand Smile

But you didn't mention about why ASR was not immune to physical lust in this chapter? Is it a good sign like he is at least attracted to her or something?


ASR is not lusting over her he thinks he has all the right on her
He will obviously use them he can't be a saint 
He can be cruel mean down right an ass a jerk... but he will hv one quality above all that is loyalty n truth to say wht he feels n do as he pleases.


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