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Arshi FF - Burning Rage THREAD 2. UPD THREAD 3 PG 127 (Page 49)

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Posted: 09 June 2014 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by saakhi01

Awesome update...
Khushi's behaviour was soo cute n innocent...
Anyone other than ASR would hv been in splits seeing her... LOL
Cont soon... Thanks for d pm...


WHEN YOU HAVE LONG FORGOTTEN HOW T LIVE LIFE N U DON'T FEEL ANY FEELINGS OR EMOTIONS HW CAN U ENJOY LIFE WHICH IS JUST A BURDEN.

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Posted: 09 June 2014 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Arnie-girl

Oh..! This ASR is really a worst nightmare!
Khushi's mind trying to deal with the sudden drastic change in her simple life..
The pain she is going through is so horrible that it can make anyone broken!!
I am really very much impressed by her fighting back spirit!!
When life become your worst nightmare its not easy to stand firm forget behave normally!
I like it how she is still herself & innocent as always
She is scared of him without loosing herself!
Arnav well its not easy to say anything about him he is making her sign papers to legalize their marriage atleast he is letting her go collage..
It was funny khushi's irretation with aman calling her mam & her sulking for not talking while having breakfast ..Only khushi can be like this LOL
Arnav is going to use paayal as her weekness!
But wonder who is the new entry??

Superb update!! I love your works sooo much Smile

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LIFE IS NEVER A FAIRY TALE N WHEN U R HIT BY A NIGHTMARE U FEEL LIKE U CAN NEVER COME OUT OF IT BUT REAL COURAGE IS WHEN U MAKE THE OTHER PERSON THINK THAT WHATEVER BAD THEY DO U WILL FIND THAT SILVER LIGHTENING IN IT TO.
ITS EASY TO BE BROKEN AND SHATTERED BUT IT TAKES LOT OF COURAGE TO HOLD URSELF HIGH EVEN IN THAT SITUATION.
MY KHUHSI IS A FIGHTER SHE WILL NEVER LOSE HER SELF. 
NEW PERSON WILL BE REVEALED IN NEXT CHPT.
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Posted: 09 June 2014 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by daljeet

Okay this is kind of shocking. 

I felt bad for Payal, how much guilty she will feel for what happened with Kushi.


In this update it seems ASR is enjoying the physical part of this relationship and is not immune like u mentioned in the last chapter. Is it a good sign? 


Who is this man? His father or his jeejaji?


I liked her innocence, I totally understand what u r trying to say.


There are a lot of typo errors even in the note you gave!



PAYAL WILL BE SHATTERED BUT BOTH THE SISTERS R FIGHTERS.
KHUSHI SI A TEENAGER U CANT EXPECT HER TO BEHAVE OTHERWISE.
TYPO ERROR AS I DNT GET TIME TO PROOF READ U HV NO IDEA HW I TRY N ASSEMBLE MY WORK .Ouch, WITH COLLEGE N JOB ITS DAM TIRING BUT U CAN TELL ME THE ERROR N I WILL TRY TO CORRECT IT.Smile

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Posted: 09 June 2014 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ipkkndeternity

Ok superb update dear thank god nothing dark from arnav side 2day ... khushi is saved for awhile
say she had not understood his riddle she was a normal girl not some spy to understand hidden meaning...***...hahahahaha i was lyk getting married 2 asr u hav to be a spy...coz its not in de hands of normal ppl 2 deal wth ASR...****


Khushi was shocked how did he knew this but she thought the beast has a share ears ****** yea its lyk kan yea bluetooth... he can hear evrythg**

Damn wat is his problem why cant he be a little friendly old arrogant hag kahika...aww payal and khushi's convo
she lied 2 save payal

and dat Ass of a man keeps kissing her argh

ok who is bak again ...why is ASR so damn furious
thx for de pm continue soon
but after reading dis story i wonder do men lyk ASR exist or is it jst in ff's
although dere ar worse men dan ASR in dis world



U CAN'T EXPECT BEAST TO BE A PRINCE CHARMING
HE WILL NEVER BE FRIENDLY
PAYAL WILL BE SHATTERED BUT SHE IS FIGHTER THEY BOTH HAD BEEN EACH OTHERS STRENGTH FOR LONG AND ALWAYS WILL BE.
WHO IS BACK WILL BE DISCLOSED IN NEXT CHAPTER.

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Posted: 09 June 2014 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rana5

This chapter was much better. At least Khushi was not tortured again. I hope Arnav softens up a bit, I like him tough but not with Khushi. She should be the only one who can calm him. She is too immature though, how will Khushi ever understand him??? 


The mystery continues, who is the man and who was the woman?? I am going to guess that he has a horrible step brother and the woman who is ill is the wife?  Or Arnav's mum and dad????






YUP AND NO A DID RIGHT A DID WRONG ABT WHO N WHOWink
ASR IS NOT AT ALL A SOFTY KIND OF A PERSON NOR HE WILL EVER BE
KHUSHI MAYBE IMMATURE BUT SHE HAD OTHERS TO TAKE CARE OF HER SO NEVER NEEDED TO BE BUT WITH TIME PEOPLE DO CHANGE.
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Posted: 10 June 2014 at 8:46am | IP Logged
so ASR will never change???????
sorry !!u said he will never be... 
so khushi can't change him ever..



Edited by fatima_FM - 10 June 2014 at 8:55am

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Posted: 10 June 2014 at 9:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fatima_FM

so ASR will never change???????
sorry !!u said he will never be... 


He will never change hw can u let go something that is keeping u alive that runs in ur veins that makes u hw ur r.
Sometime we can love someone for all the wrong reasons still its right for us.
people don't change they mature over period and adapt new things but they can never change who they truly are.

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Posted: 10 June 2014 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by angeldream14

Originally posted by daljeet

Okay this is kind of shocking. 

I felt bad for Payal, how much guilty she will feel for what happened with Kushi.


In this update it seems ASR is enjoying the physical part of this relationship and is not immune like u mentioned in the last chapter. Is it a good sign? 


Who is this man? His father or his jeejaji?


I liked her innocence, I totally understand what u r trying to say.


There are a lot of typo errors even in the note you gave!



PAYAL WILL BE SHATTERED BUT BOTH THE SISTERS R FIGHTERS.
KHUSHI SI A TEENAGER U CANT EXPECT HER TO BEHAVE OTHERWISE.
TYPO ERROR AS I DNT GET TIME TO PROOF READ U HV NO IDEA HW I TRY N ASSEMBLE MY WORK .Ouch, WITH COLLEGE N JOB ITS DAM TIRING BUT U CAN TELL ME THE ERROR N I WILL TRY TO CORRECT IT.Smile


Ok I understand Smile

But you didn't mention about why ASR was not immune to physical lust in this chapter? Is it a good sign like he is at least attracted to her or something?

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