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ABCD Challenge Drabble OS By -Khwahish- (Page 5)

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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 7:33am | IP Logged
Baadmein fursat mein karungi teri tareef :P

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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 7:33am | IP Logged
kabhi nhi milegi tereko iske liye fursat... -_-

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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 11:18am | IP Logged
awesome os..

emotions were emoted beautifully n u penned everything brilliantly..

great work dear...

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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 11:35am | IP Logged
this is amazing!!! Big smile

Hundreds of emotions in a small piece of writing... Smile

Seems like she got married or so... but he isn't ready to accept the truth... Unhappy

& she fails everytime to keep herself away from him... n give in to his touch... Tongue

I understand... limiting story in a few words is such a hard task... Embarrassed

Fantastically described... good work... Clap

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Posted: 11 January 2014 at 8:09am | IP Logged
Every damn word had an impact on me..

Every word depicted so much yet beautified the entire plot..

Clear yet blur images formed..

Transitions like a movie scrolled in front of the eyes..

I love the way you play with words yet so aptly put up...


All I can say is.. It isn't good..

But it's outstanding.. 

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Posted: 11 January 2014 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Awesome os loved it so much

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Posted: 12 January 2014 at 7:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vaishu88

awesome os..

emotions were emoted beautifully n u penned everything brilliantly..

great work dear...

Thank uuu Vaishnavi Hug
Glad u liked my work ^_^
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Posted: 12 January 2014 at 7:02am | IP Logged
[QUOTE=yogini64] this is amazing!!! Big smile

Hundreds of emotions in a small piece of writing... Smile

Seems like she got married or so... but he isn't ready to accept the truth... Unhappy

& she fails everytime to keep herself away from him... n give in to his touch... Tongue

I understand... limiting story in a few words is such a hard task... Embarrassed

Fantastically described... good work... Clap
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I alwayss look forward to ur comments Tongue
Thanks yaar Yogini Hug
Yes thats was the idea behind it but I kept it a bit unclear ...a sort of open endLOL
Big smile

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