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ABCD Challenge Drabble OS By -Khwahish- (Page 4)

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Couch_Potato

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Woman that was sooo very *HOT*. I love angst and guilt and pain. And this piece was drenched in it. Along with longing, yearning and lust. Overall such a brilliant piece of writing Mahi and all in 481 word? Wow. I felt like I was getting an hidden insight into an illicit affair between a married Kriya and ex-lover Rey. And yes, it was awesome.</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Thank you for writing this. Really. It was such a pleasure to read.Wink</font>



Thank you CP jeee Hug
Even I have a soft corner for angst *wink wink*
I am seriously glad ke it came out well...because it took meeons to fit his into 500 words lol
Yes yes you guessed it right ^_^
Wohi.hidden foundation tha story kaa ^_^

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 5:53pm | IP Logged
thiss was mindblowing
awesome totally loved it
i like the way u explained

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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 12:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dancersqueen

awesome...

Thanks :)
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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 7:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Vaish-

So I wouldn't get lazy at all pakke se...

Haaye!! Haaye!! Haaye!!

Mahi ...

kya likha hai... ^_^

It is the nice haye... not the ganda haye just saying... :P

So coming to the OS...

pata hai mari mahi...

i love the way how you put up things... You know devoid of past... lekin still giving the perfect sense and the perfect feeling...

I mean this is just so good... This particular thing is very difficult fo rme... I try... Lekin you put it up so effortlessly...

Abhi it was so beautiful... And the words gelled up so flawlessly... Not out of the place... Secong achievement... I mean you know trhis challenge is all about words nah.. and our focus is on over those... so i had this apprehension that what if words aren't placed rght and stands out khoob ganda... i had this apprehension when i was writing...

but u put it up so beautifully... It was such a seamless piece Mahi...

I really loved how you brought her resistance... and then washing away of it... and then how he read her..

It was so beautiful... ^_^

you make me feel liek ki what am i in writing... Embarrassed

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awesome... Lubh you dher saara... ^_^



Haaye haye hayeee ...itna saaara pyaara :*
Waise bura waala haaye kaunsa hota h :P
I am super happy u liked that sort of compilation ^_^
I myself wasn'tsure ke accha lagega ke nai
Teri taarif sun.ke Iamon channe ka jhad ^_^
See Iwill be very frank
My words were relatively simple to assemble in the story...the can blend in the story maybe...u , snigs , maanett sabko kaafi tricky words mile the khe khe
Thankkuu babbyyy
I love you toosss :*
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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 7:15am | IP Logged
i was expecting ki tu return mein meri thodi tareef karegi... -_- ;)

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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 7:21am | IP Logged
Blueflames aka sabaaa *hugs* ...just saw ur like
Is it you ? OMG u watch D3 and follow KR ? :O
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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 7:21am | IP Logged
Vaishu - Mere drabble pe bhi teri taareef karu ab mein :P
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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 7:23am | IP Logged
haan nhi toh...
thats called humility

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