So I wouldn't get lazy at all pakke se...
Haaye!! Haaye!! Haaye!!
Mahi ...
kya likha hai... ^_^
It is the nice haye... not the ganda haye just saying... :P
So coming to the OS...
pata hai mari mahi...
i love the way how you put up things... You know devoid of past... lekin still giving the perfect sense and the perfect feeling...
I mean this is just so good... This particular thing is very difficult fo rme... I try... Lekin you put it up so effortlessly...
Abhi it was so beautiful... And the words gelled up so flawlessly... Not out of the place... Secong achievement... I mean you know trhis challenge is all about words nah.. and our focus is on over those... so i had this apprehension that what if words aren't placed rght and stands out khoob ganda... i had this apprehension when i was writing...
but u put it up so beautifully... It was such a seamless piece Mahi...
I really loved how you brought her resistance... and then washing away of it... and then how he read her..
It was so beautiful... ^_^
you make me feel liek ki what am i in writing... 😳
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awesome... Lubh you dher saara... ^_^
