OS - Blooming out of my past - Last part updated - Page 3

Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by ipkkndfollower



Ah! am not sure about that. I meant it as an OS but may just write a second part as the last part!
Plzzz do write the next part too.. will be waiting..
Posted: 10 years ago
Good os.is there going to be next part of this os.thanks for pm
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Pveenat


Really very nice OS. Thank you for the PM. Enjoyed reading your OS😊

Thank you so much πŸ˜Š
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by latha_555


as usual a very nice story, well described and i like aasthas reasoning as to why she fears intimacy with shlock...well described and i like shlock game to bring her back

Thank you so much πŸ˜Š. Yes Astha needed time but she will come around...after all it is Shlokie boy πŸ˜†
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by desikahani


A truly beautiful OS!!

Astha and Shlok are two very emotionally charged people and every emotion of theirs and its ripple effect on each other is a story waiting to unfold - love how you have tapped into this and come up with a very touching OS.. hats off to your imagination and writing!

Your comment is so poetic. I think you too should write πŸ˜Š. Love the way you have captured the essence of my OS. Thank you so much!
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by -LECHU-


superb work!πŸ‘ πŸ‘
well written...
astha's fear and dilemma well conveyed...
and loved shlok's mission😳 πŸ˜³
beautiful os dear!
will there be a second part?

Thank you dear Lechu 😊. Am still thinking if I should conclude this OS in a fitting manner πŸ˜†
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by anjipankaj


Good os.is there going to be next part of this os.thanks for pm

That seems to be the general question of readers! I hope I will write the next part too as the conclusion πŸ˜Š.
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by sparklingeyes11


That was awesome... Surely that will be the beginning!!! πŸ˜‰ 

That's right πŸ˜†
Posted: 10 years ago
it was awsum dear..
u wrote both ashlok feeling very nicely..
pls write 2nd part also..
Posted: 10 years ago
Very realistically written. I ould see this happening in the show. Astha's feelingz were beautifully portrayed. πŸ˜ƒ

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