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FF: Yes Boss #3 - Link to #4 on pg 1 (Page 95)

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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 1:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anushreemishra

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I know i am like super late but you know my reasons but the first thing that I am doing after being finally done with my paper is unresing so that my wonderful Green can read my comment and can smile while doing so coz i definitely am smiling while typing thisEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Well since I have already made you wait so much I am not gonaa keep you waiting for any longer...let's talk about the update nowEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

He found himself adjusting the collar of the forest green sherwani that his mother had bought for this occasion, unable to quit his nervous habit.
You know what I love about your writing so much is that you keep your characters true to the characters in QH..I love how you bring in their little habits and traits so that the readers can better connect and imagine that character and hats off to you for that...I can imagine Asad wearing a green sherwani and adjusting his collar so clearly as if he is standing right in front of meEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Asad swallowed slowly as he took in the breath-taking sight of Zoya in a beautiful green sharara, matching his clothes, with her dupatta covering her face slightly from the top, her quivering lower lip visible below it.
HAHA my Green and her obsession with Green never fails to make me smile Embarrassed
Poor Asad must be hard holding his breath while watching his musibeet dressed like fairyEmbarrassedEmbarrassedGreen takes me back to Mangalpur days when Zoya waers the Green Sharara and Asad kept staring at her during the "Aa gale lag ja" song...Ah the memoriesEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

"Bhaijaan, umr bhar dekhte rehna Mona darling... I mean bhabhi ko, but for now, at least take your seat for the nikaah first," Ayaan commented from behind him playfully, earning laughter from whoever was within earshot.
Can i just hug you for thisHugHugI am so glad that you didn't forget to mention Ayaan in the wedding coz there is no way I can imagine Asad getting married if Ayaan isn't there...I love you for not forgeting the important stuff manEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Zoya climbed carefully onto the platform, staring intently at the mehndi on her hands once she was seated. 
I just loved the whole part where you described Zoya' feelings and showed how nervously she kept staring at her mehndi...It was so beautifulEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedAnd the way she kept staring at her lap and refused to look up was so real and i felt that it was the most natural way to react in that situation.

Zoya found herself drawing small circles on her thigh as she contemplating whether or not to look up. She could see Asad's knees, since he was sitting across her, but that was all. Suddenly, she saw Asad's hand rest on his knee tentatively, before his index finger lifted a little, pointing upwards. Oh, so he knew exactly where she was looking, and where he'd prefer for her to look. Zoya huffed slightly before turning her head away completely, choosing to stare at the cushion on her side instead.
These lines are one of the most beautiful lines in the story so far.These lines are subtle and yet so powerfulEmbarrassedEmbarrassedAnd the whole idea of zoya not looking up but figuring out what asad wants just by looking at his fingers is very very beautiful,different and new.When I read these lines for the first time I was surprised how someone can think so something so subtle and portray it so beautifully...
I know you pretty well but still you manage to surprise me everytime Green and with just small little things and i love how your stories aren't about grand gestures but subtle ones and how you manage to make little things look so grand and sweet and make us go aww every single time...
You are just fantastic Green the best and I never smile so much as I do while reading your stories..they make me feel good,alive,happyEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedand for that I would like to give you a big round of applauseClap..

Zoya blinked away the tears of relief that flooded her eyes as soon as the sound of his husky acceptance entered her ears. She wasn't even sure why his rejection worried her so much... didn't she want to end the charade herself last night?
He nodded at her ever so slightly as soon as she made eye contact with him, and her lips naturally parted at that time, poised to answer.
 while Asad and Zoya continued staring at each other through the curtain with bated breath, as the gravity of what had just transpired began to sink into them.
As I said above you make little things look so grand and portray even the smallest of gestures and feelings so beautifullyEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Zoya blinking away her tears of relief to Asad assuring her with his slightest of nods to them just staring at each other trying to understand the gravity of the situation was just so beautifully writtenEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Green I don't have enough words to describe how beautiful and touching this update was I will just say i was smiling through when i read it and while typing my comment...
Thanku for making my time so beautiful with this lovely update

Love you loads GreenHeartHeart





Yeah I know you were busy so no issues at all (: I try to keep them in character as far as possible! Glad you think so too (: But you know what, I myself had totally forgotten that Zoya had worn a green sharara at the Mangalpur wedding!

Anyway I'm glad you liked my attempt at subtle romance! I was just trying to bring out their inner conflict, especially Zoya's. If that came through, my work is done (: Glad you liked it Anu!

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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 1:59am | IP Logged
Awesome update Big smile
Update soon please Hug

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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 2:01am | IP Logged
3 dayys n no updateee...
plzz plzz plzz updatee...


-fuii-

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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 2:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by goingreen

Originally posted by anushreemishra

Another centuryLOLLOLLOL
Now since I am upto date with all my comments i can finally ask for an updateEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Green update pleaseEmbarrassedEmbarrassed


Hahaha you know mera dhyan kahan hai aaj kal :p Need to find time to write it... without distractions :p
Haha don't I know ki aj kal aapka dhyaan kahan haiWinkWinkWink
if you need a time without any distractions you will find it very hard seeing how flustered you are even in your thoughtsEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Maybe you can just imagine the comparisons and it will be easier to write

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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 3:02am | IP Logged
and i know you well enough to know that this suhagraat won't be like those typical suhagraat! for all we know Zoya might go to sleep or maybe Asad enters to see her eating a pizza... uff a major turn off ROFL

do update soon. Haaye why don't I get a boyfriend resembling hritik roshan OuchLOL

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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 4:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anushreemishra

Originally posted by goingreen

Originally posted by anushreemishra

Another centuryLOLLOLLOL
Now since I am upto date with all my comments i can finally ask for an updateEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Green update pleaseEmbarrassedEmbarrassed


Hahaha you know mera dhyan kahan hai aaj kal :p Need to find time to write it... without distractions :p
Haha don't I know ki aj kal aapka dhyaan kahan haiWinkWinkWink
if you need a time without any distractions you will find it very hard seeing how flustered you are even in your thoughtsEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Maybe you can just imagine the comparisons and it will be easier to write


Hahahaha now please don't come up with new conclusions after you read my next update... I was solely imagining Asad and Zoya in my head k!!

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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 4:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --starstruck--

and i know you well enough to know that this suhagraat won't be like those typical suhagraat! for all we know Zoya might go to sleep or maybe Asad enters to see her eating a pizza... uff a major turn off ROFL

do update soon. Haaye why don't I get a boyfriend resembling hritik roshan OuchLOL


Hahaha you've got one guess right! You'll see :p Narges told me about her love for HR that's why hahaha. Glad you liked it Sadie (:

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Lo aagayi main. Miss kiya tha ya nahi?? :p

Yes Boss: Part 34

"You okay Zoya?" Anu whispered softly into Zoya's ear, trying not to attract the attention of the other girls. Zoya nodded weakly, before swinging her legs over the side of the bed and settling down on it. Anu remained slightly unconvinced, but let it go anyway. Maybe she was just nervous. Monica and Navi came forth, cutting off the conversation anyway, as they helped Anu arrange Zoya's clothes properly while she sat on the bed.

"Excited...?" Navi asked, giggling uncontrollably. Monica and Anu joined suit as they watched Zoya's face redden up. Anu shook her head as the laughter died down, deciding that she was totally wrong in reading Zoya's expressions just now. No unwilling bride would blush as much as Zoya was.

"Chalo, ab hum chalte hai. We still need to pull your beloved husband's leg before letting him in here!" Monica announced, before erupting into yet another round of giggles. Anu felt a frown coming on, when she saw Zoya's face drain of colour again.

"Zoya, it'll be okay. Don't worry," Anu reassured her yet again, before Monica began tugging her arm to drag both her and Navi out of the room. Zoya squeezed her hand and smiled as broadly as she could, before letting go. She watched silently as the three girls walked out of the room and closed the door, leaving her to stare at the door... in wait.

Asad sighed loudly as he finally saw off the final string of guests with his mother. He was exhausted. It was both a physically and mentally draining day. He began to walking towards his room, as his mother held onto his arm and stopped him.

"Tum khush ho na Asad?" Dilshaad asked worriedly, having caught the sound of her son's sigh. Asad closed his eyes as he composed himself, before snapping them back open and turning to her. He covered his mother's hand with his own, smiling very slightly.

"Ji Ammi," Asad answered curtly, hoping that would be definitive enough for Dilshaad not to pursue the topic. Thankfully Dilshaad nodded, before linking her arm with his and leading him up to his door, where Anu, Monica and Navi stood, talking to each other animatedly. They stopped when they noticed Asad approach them.

"Ab yeh sab kya hai?" Asad asked, his tone clearly showing signs of crankiness. He rolled his eyes as he found his simple question being met with a round of giggles, some of it contributed by his mother as well.

"Aise kaise andar jaane denge aapko? Aapko pehle naik dena padega," Monica informed him, crossing her arms in front of her chest confidently. Anu and Navi nodded in agreement, tapping their feet on the ground impatiently.

"I'm your boss, aap log ko main har mahine paise deta hi hoon na," Asad grumbled, clicking his tongue in disapproval. Dilshaad whacked him on his arm lightly, admonishing him silently for his rude behaviour.

"Haan, lekin aap mere aur Navi ke boss toh nahi ho na. Waise bhi, naik is vastly different from giving a salary. Naik toh hak hota hai, hum saaliyon ka!" Najma cleared the air, as she joined the girl force blocking his room door. Asad glared at his sister, as he lifted his hand to massage his forehead.

"How are you involved in this Najma, you're my sister! Why aren't you supporting me?" Asad complained, pouting without meaning to. Najma just shrugged nonchalantly while the rest of the girls giggled again.

"Well, I switched loyalties to my new bhabhi as soon as the nikaah was over," Najma admitted unabashedly, as Navi patted her shoulder, cheering her on. Asad's shoulders finally dropped as he admitted defeat, digging his hand into his pocket to find some change. He passed the amount to Anu, who stared at it disapprovingly.

"Arre, aap log mere hi room ko block kar rahe ho, paise kahan se laaun! Kal de doonga, promise," Asad reasoned with the girls, who gave in after some thought, separating onto two sides to reveal Asad's door behind them. Asad smiled at them gratefully before walking up to his door, pushing it open after taking in a deep breath. This was it.

Zoya heard the door open, and quickly shut her eyes again. Given so much spare time to think of what to do, she'd decided to sink down on the pillow and behave like she'd fallen asleep. She heard the click of the door as it closed again, and tried her best to keep her breathing as even as possible. She couldn't possibly open her eyes and see him, or her cover would be blown, and not knowing what he was doing was a lot more nerve-wrecking that she thought.

Asad stood in front of his closed door, staring at Zoya for a long time, not sure what to make of it. She was lying on her side at the very edge of one side of the bed, her hands tucked under her head and her eyes closed... sleeping. He walked over to the side of the bed, sinking down to his knees on the ground next to her face.

With her eyes closed, Zoya suddenly found that her hearing had become sharper, and she was sure that she could hear Asad's breathing, right next to her face. Her speculation came true, as his breath began to hit her face, right before she felt his hand cup her cheek, tenderly. She sucked in her breath slightly, before trying to even it out again, hoping he hadn't caught it.

Asad didn't notice any response from Zoya, so he decided it was safe to stroke her cheek slightly. He stared at her thick eyelashes, glad that her eyes were closed. He wasn't sure if he would've been able to take looking into her eyes and ignoring the pain in it. He snatched his hand away suddenly when Zoya shifted slightly, one of her arms dangling off the bed.

Zoya continued trying to keep the tension from showing on her forehead, as she moved involuntarily when Asad stroked her skin gently. She immediately regretted it when she felt the loss of the warmth of Asad's hand, but was still grateful when she didn't hear Asad say anything. At least he hadn't figured out that she was awake. She stayed still for a few more minutes, before realizing that Asad was no longer there, since she couldn't hear his breathing anymore.

Zoya sensed that the lights were being turned off first, and a few minutes later she felt the bed sink next to her. He was going to sleep on the bed as well...? Suddenly, she felt his arm snake around her waist, and her eyes flew open. Her eyes trailed downwards slowly where she found Asad's arm, pulling her backwards. She closed her eyes again when she realized that Asad was behind her, and he probably didn't see her open her eyes. But what was he doing?

Asad moved Zoya slowly, until her back hit his chest. Actually, all he intended to do was pull her inwards because she was sleeping right at the edge of the bed, and he didn't want her to fall off in the middle of the night. But when he started pulling her, he got so involved in the lovely scent of her hair which lay fanned on the pillow, that he didn't even realize how much he'd pulled her in. He buried his nose in her hair instinctively, before he could stop himself.

"Zoya," Asad whispered into the back of her head ever so softly, but Zoya caught anyway. She sucked in her breath again, her stomach doing extreme somersaults as she felt, Asad's nose trail away from her hair and brush her ear slightly. If the ticklishness wasn't a problem enough for Zoya to deal with, she felt his hot breath on her ear as he tilted his head, his mouth dangerously close to her face.

Asad pressed his lips lightly on the side of Zoya's face that was exposed, and his eyes opened in alarm as he heard Zoya whimper softly. He scanned her face at that point, just to see her eyes crack open slightly, the glimmer in them obvious even in the darkness. He immediately made an attempt to remove his arm and create some distance between them, but he stopped short when Zoya placed her hand on it, keeping it still on her waist. He stared at her silently, sucking in his breath. Why was she stopping him??

XXX

HALF SUHAAGRAAT HAHAHA. Okay I think I'm gonna lose readers now because everyone's gonna hate me forever.

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