Whoa! Hold on! You are showering updates after updates! Not that I am complaining! 😉Just caught up and absolutely loved it! Sorry I have been very busy and didn't get a chance to post some feedback! But please know this that I LOVE your writing!!
The last few chapters have been mind-blowing. Your depiction of Mr. DB is par excellence. I laughed my *ahem ahem* backside off when I read the kayda kanoon and ab tak pachhatar statements! Flawless!! 👏
The Vinod / Vijay twist was unexpected, so made all the more impact!!
Asad kiss kiss ka muah band karega! Kya kamaal ka idea nikaala hai! Kaash sabki "kiss"mat itni achhi hoti!
Arrest the love birds? 😭 Loved how the staff jumped to the rescue, especially Prasad and Monica! Oh, loved Hemant's quip of wanting Brad instead of Angelina! Hilarious! 🤣
Now, it's Zoya's turn to kiss and tell! Poor Asad! Major face palm moment! Yeh kya? Zoya ne bhi mauke ka phayda uthaaya aur maara chakka, I mean kiss! Oh boy! Mr. Tehzeeb has forgotten his spiel and passionately kissed back! CHUMMESHWARI!!
What, you made my bachha cry?! 😡 Lucky for you that I like you, so baksh diya. There's some one better for my bachha!! Asad can have his Zoya! Humph! 😆
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