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FF: Yes Boss #3 - Link to #4 on pg 1 (Page 100)

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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 10:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Divi.C

what the helll...
which type of SR this is...
n atleast they should solve the misunderstanding...
poor asad... N by d way back his is half SR... Na ...so now its zoya's turn... So it will end up wiyh something good or i say hawt... Hope sooo...
N PLEASE UPDATE SOOON... U CAN'T KEEP US HANGING ON CLIFFY,...PLSSS...PRETTY PLEASSSEEE...


Will they solve their misunderstanding?? That remains to be seen hahaha. I'll update eventually :p

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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by anushreemishra

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Look who is here without any delayLOLLOLYes its me me me...well i was in a really good mood after watching the movie so i thought why not make it better by unresing and rereading this wonderful update again...Also i love my Green very much and didn't want to keep her waiting so here it isEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Looks like I am back YayyyEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Anu shook her head as the laughter died down, deciding that she was totally wrong in reading Zoya's expressions just now. No unwilling bride would blush as much as Zoya was.
Looks like I am finally convinced that Zoya is happy...I was really worried for her you know but that smile reassured me completelyEmbarrassedEmbarrassed


"Zoya, it'll be okay. Don't worry," Anu reassured her yet again, before Monica began tugging her arm to drag both her and Navi out of the room
Aww i love the bond that i share with zoyaEmbarrassedEmbarrassedI can read all her expressions and can see through her when no one else canEmbarrassedEmbarrassedI just loved how i could catch the slightest of zoya's uncomfort and how I kept reassuring herEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
I liked my role very very much hereEmbarrassedEmbarrassed


"I'm your boss, aap log ko main har mahine paise deta hi hoon na," Asad grumbled, clicking his tongue in disapproval. Dilshaad whacked him on his arm lightly, admonishing him silently for his rude behaviour.
Huh how rude of jeejajiOuchOuchI can call him jeejeji right after all he is married to my best friend zoya nowEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Lol jeejaji aj to aapko neg dena hi padega...boss aap office mein hain yahan nahiLOLLOL

Najma to our rescue yayyyLOLLOL


He passed the amount to Anu, who stared at it disapprovingly.
Lol seriously kitne kanjoos hain jeejajiLOLLOLSo much for being The Asad Ahmed KhanLOLLOL
Haha looks like i head the extortinist party in every weddingLOLLOLI was the head in my di's wedding too and i didn't back down until I had how much i wanted and till then my jeejaji remembers me as the head of the extortinist partyLOLLOL

Yes the moment of truth is finally here...Be prepared Mr.Khan and ye kya Zoya you are pretending to sleep...But kab tak bhagogi kabhi na kabhi to you will have to face the reality...



Her speculation came true, as his breath began to hit her face, right before she felt his hand cup her cheek, tenderly. She sucked in her breath slightly, before trying to even it out again, hoping he hadn't caught it.
Omg the passion with which you describe zoya's feelings is just amazing...I feel i am the one experiencing all that nd man i sucked in my breath too when i read this paraEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Blushing
Ah he is stroking her cheek now...I wonder how much zoya must be blushing at this momentEmbarrassedEmbarrassed


She stayed still for a few more minutes, before realizing that Asad was no longer there, since she couldn't hear his breathing anymore.
Ah zoya doesn't like that Asad is no longer sitting next to her and stroking her cheek..She misses the warmth of his breath on her faceBlushing


Zoya sensed that the lights were being turned off first, and a few minutes later she felt the bed sink next to her. He was going to sleep on the bed as well...?
Haha obviously zoya he is gonna sleep in that bed right next to you after all it his bed which is now yours tooLOLLOL


Suddenly, she felt his arm snake around her waist, and her eyes flew open. Her eyes trailed downwards slowly where she found Asad's arm, pulling her backwards. She closed her eyes again when she realized that Asad was behind her, and he probably didn't see her open her eyes. But what was he doing?
Omg omg omgBlushingBlushingBlushingHe held her waist and pulled her closer to himEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
I was just as surprised as zoya when I read what Asad just did because there is no way in hell Asad is gonna get so intimate with zoya without clearing things up first...But when I read the next para things got cleared up so he was just trying to make her sleep a little on the inside so that she doesn't fall off...hayyee so romantic i wish my husband does the same to prevent me from falling offEmbarrassedEmbarrassed


But when he started pulling her, he got so involved in the lovely scent of her hair which lay fanned on the pillow, that he didn't even realize how much he'd pulled her in. He buried his nose in her hair instinctively, before he could stop himself.
But man his thoughts didn't remain that pure once he started pulling her did they?LOLBut well i can get how intoxicating someone's smell,the one you love, can beEmbarrassedEmbarrassedHayee i just love it the smelling the hair is so sweet and sexyEmbarrassedEmbarrassed


"Zoya," Asad whispered into the back of her head ever so softly, but Zoya caught anyway. She sucked in her breath again, her stomach doing extreme somersaults as she felt, Asad's nose trail away from her hair and brush her ear slightly. If the ticklishness wasn't a problem enough for Zoya to deal with, she felt his hot breath on her ear as he tilted his head, his mouth dangerously close to her face.
What the hell are you doing to me girl?I don't want to betray my best friend but trust me right now I feel like as if I am the one lying on that bed completely intoxicatedBlushingBlushingBlushing
Hayeee that husky whisper...My stomach is doing somersaults too and man I am thirsty nowBlushingBlushing
I love the nuzzling man...Its so sweet...My lips curve into a smile automatically when i imagine asad doing thatEmbarrassedEmbarrassed


Asad pressed his lips lightly on the side of Zoya's face that was exposed, and his eyes opened in alarm as he heard Zoya whimper softly. He scanned her face at that point, just to see her eyes crack open slightly, the glimmer in them obvious even in the darkness. He immediately made an attempt to remove his arm and create some distance between them, but hestopped short when Zoya placed her hand on it, keeping it still on her waist. He stared at her silently, sucking in his breath. Why was she stopping him??
Hayee he kissed her on her cheekEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedSo zoya couldn't control herself  this time time and finally asad knows that she is awakeLOLLOL
I can totally imagine that glimmer of raw desire in zoya's eyes and i can imagine how difficult it must be for both Asad and zoya to control themselves nowBlushingBlushing
No no Asad why are you backing off now?But wait Zoya wouldn't let him so easilyEmbarrassedEmbarrassedI loved how zoya placed her hand on top of his to stop him from removing his hand off her waist...
Comeon Asad ab to samajh jao  why she is stopping you.Don't be so stupidLOLLOLand miss blabbermouth please open your mouth even if you don't want to talk please put your lips to a better useEmbarrassedEmbarrassed



HAHAHA a Half suhaagraatLOLLOLLOLNo one but my Green can do this...
Man this was a brilliant update Green...It was really touching and sweet in the beginning and i loved various interactions between different people but man did Asya steal the show in this one..They were so sweet,sexy and hawwt in this one...
i actually think i moaned a little while reading this and man i truly am thirstyBlushingBlushing

And i know i am probably the only one who thinks that this update ended at the perfect timeEmbarrassedEmbarrassedThis was such a cliffy that the suspense for the next update is wonderful and I will enjoy this waitEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

I will be waiting thirstily for the next update Green

Love you loadsHeartHeart


I take it that the movie was a good one then haha. And so it seems I gave you the role of chief extortionist by accident but still aptly! :p And looks like you really lived the half suhaagraat with Zoya! Ab aage aage dekhiye hota hai kya :p And yes thank you for loving the cliffy haha you have to be the only one here who does :p

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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Zainoo1

Nice fanfic just read all the parts ... I've read the first season of this fanfic and that was really good too... Your writing is getting better and better .., keep up the hard work ... Can't wait to see what happens in the other half of this part ..

Zainoo


Hello! Glad you're enjoying the story. But what's season one of this fanfic? Even I don't know hahaha.
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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by metoyou

Hell yeah, we missed you!!! Lets see what this update has in store for us...I am warning you, it better be a good weekend update. Warna...!!!

Part 34
Maybe she was just nervous (Of course, she is nervous!)

No unwilling bride would blush as much as Zoya was (She wants this as much as he wants it. Bas)

"Zoya, it'll be okay. Don't worry," Anu reassured her yet again (Is Anu giving advice from her own personal experience?)

"Ab yeh sab kya hai?" Asad asked (Poor Mr. Khan...itni jaldi aap ko andar jaana hain...Hahahaha!)

"I'm your boss, aap log ko main har mahine paise deta hi hoon na," Asad grumbled (Boos honge aap office mein, lekin yahan ghar pe nahin)

as he lifted his hand to massage his forehead (Oh how I love him doing this)

This was it (This is definitely it!)

she'd decided to sink down on the pillow and behave like she'd fallen asleep (Really...??? Koi baat nahin, he will 'wake you up')

right before she felt his hand cup her cheek, tenderly (Aww, that's cute)

He was going to sleep on the bed as well...? (No suhaag raat means one sleeps on the bed while the other goes for a walk in the park)

"Zoya," Asad whispered into the back of her head ever so softly (Hayee...) Day Dreaming



Teri toh mein!!! Angry Yeh half suhaag raat ka kya matlab hain? I just love the your description of every single little detail and that makes you a very talented writer. It enhances the feel and mood of the story and scene. Lekin lekin lekin, as much as I love you for that I don't like this half suhaag raat. We waited for so long and we got this Ouch

Hahaha, okay enough of my rant. No but seriously...Mr. Khan took that first step, he pulled her toward himself and grabbed her by her waist. Yeah right as if his intention was only to pull her back on bed... who is he joking to! Aur Zoya, you are also halfway: stomach mein somersaults...
A normal SR would be...well, we all know but I know for sure this one is going to be very different than other SRs! Why? Because, we have a Miss Farooqui (oops, an extremely temporary shy Mrs. Khan) and we have the ever so slow and not initiative Mr. Prude Ahmed Khan. 
Oh, I just forgot the biggest and most important part of the story:
we have a wicked writer who own this story and loves to torture her readers with half stories and scenes like this update LOL

How about lighten up the mood with a song? 'Lets talk about ..., baby' Wink It might help! 

Mr and Mrs Khan...this is IT. Don't get scared now!!!



HAHAHA. Best line is your qn about whether it's from Anu's personal experience... that you gotta ask her yourself :p Haha if I just ended all my updates properly, then no one would wanna read the next part anyway! The suspense is what's fun :p Let's talk about ... baby indeed!!
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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
awesome update..thank you for the PM...Smile

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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 11:48pm | IP Logged
it was really good,hoping it wud led to actual SR!! excited!!

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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 11:57pm | IP Logged
and u had to stop right there ... Shocked LOL

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Posted: 09 February 2014 at 12:05am | IP Logged
Hey Green lovely update. What I like the most was that it predictable yet unpredictable. Unpredictable coz of Mr. AAK. I knew he won't do anything Wink yet he was driven by his emotions for his lovely Zoya. I actually liked it. So curious to know what happens next. I failed to comment on the previous update but it was amazing as usual. Loved the dialogue my house, my wife and the way he was annoyed that Zoya planned to catch up with Navi on his wedding night. I love it when you come with new ideas and make us always smile with your updates.

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